Book 2 FF:Till the End of Time(updt*June8*pg140)

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Ki fark Painda hai

@Courageous_Leo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

OOOLAla...Abhiya r 222 much...222 Hawt 2 handle...😛...uff the kiss therapy is wow...Breathtakin update...finally sadku Raichand line me aaaya...😆...awesum yaar...Lve ur style of writing...Fida on it...Pls continue soon n dnt end this ff..Infact make more...

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#102

so nice update yar so sorry 4 late comment abhiya scenes was mindblowung so now abhay tell her the truth of him waiting 4 next update

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sohini

@sohiniluvsmusic

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#103

Superb update dear!! So abhay was listening 2 aryan-piya's convo! Luvs 2 see her laugh;-)nd alina met aryan in her b'dy gr8 nd gaurav he is such a devil glad amby found armaan...so nw abhay will hv 2 face piya 2 protect her 4m jay! Gr8 update m vry sry 4 late reply continue soon thanks 4 da pm tc:-)

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Resh

@SheDevil

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#104

Hey tanzie I m so sorry 4 late rply but was busy wid my projects & studies

I loved it.Abhay is still kharus but thnk God atlast he realized tht its gud 4 him 2 b wid Pia.Oh I cant wait 4 another update will he propose Pia or confess ki he love her

Luv u🤗

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Pari Gupta

@Pari-Gupta

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#105

awesome update
loved it
Abhay behaved really bad with Piya but I hope abhiya will be together soon
continue soon
thanks for the PM

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Rehma

@Miracle_leo

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#106

wow awesome👏 n mindblowing👏 update tanzie,loved it to the core.just now read chap17 n chap18,both chap r amazing but sorry for late reply.Wishing you a very happy new year.In chap17 loved it the way u describe everyone pov its outstanding loved it soo much.aryan is sweetheart n he know abhay from inside n outside,aryan can do anything for abhay n now he will go against for abhay wish to bring him n pia back together.abhay deeply hurt pia but it very difficult for abhay to do it,aryan is a student interesting👏.amber is also sweet but want her to help aryan to unite abhiya together.abhay has no boundries for love n pain,abhay is such a sweet heart n soo much in pain to see pia like this,i wish bas jaldi pia got his memory back.cool so pia joined raichand mansion loved it.aww pia still remember abhay name n his eyes.i want pia to be more strong.In chap18 pia is in rainchand offfice n loved pia n aryan conversation,so now pia want to know abt his life which she lost his memory.aww abhay loved it when pia smile😉 n abhay chupke se listening aryan n pia talking interesting.amber had a past too her ex husband gaurav khurana killed her life n kill her baby too in womb.so pia was engaged with werewolve jeh n now aryan come to know the truth that pia is engaged with werewolve.interesting alina n aryan as a couple.aww abhay ne sab ke samne pia ko danta becos she come office late so now she is working for late.loved abhiya scene n abhay care for pia.loved abhay last dialouge in your update that pia is safe when she is with me n main usse uss werewolve jeh ke paas nahi jaane doonga.

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Akshita

@Akshi0019

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Posted: 13 years ago

#107

hey tanazie!!! its gr8!!!!

abhay is jelous cool yr loved his jelousy!!!!

abhay is really concerned about pia loved his care 4 her... n now he will not let pia near jey...

i loved it when he say she is mne!!!! i m waiting 4 d next part...

cont soon... egerly waiting 2 see abhay pia togather...

thanks 4 d pm...

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sonia

@-Sonia-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#108

Superb update, tanzie!

Loved it

aryan's reaction were OMG! Cant stop laughing.. "kabab mei haddi" dialogue was awesome.. Lol

aryan is so adorable..

I like alina ...but i always wanted aryan-peehu lovestory! Will aryan fall for alina.? Then wat abt peehu? :(

OMG! Amber was gaurav's wife n he killed her baby! I hope, she punishes him well..

Abhiya's scene was the best.. The kiss therapy was fab..

The way abhay said "she is mine"! OMG! *Me faints* .. I just love a possessive abhay!

I hope, now.. His 'stay away mission' is over n he shud start 'stay close mission' lol

thanx 4 d pm

continue soon

tc

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660889

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#109

aw...really nice update plz continye

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: heena_mehta
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starting wid ur signature...beautiful👏👏...i m reli loving ur this idea😉 thanku 😛

ok i knw last part was full of aryan...bt it was abhay;s last line which actually stole ur whole update n made me do something like this, away frm aryan😉..."No Jeh khurana. Human or werewolf. I won't be hiding from her anymore. Aryan was right. she is safe as long as she is with me. I can't let her go near that Jeh Khurana. She is only mine.

this is something, i wanted to see in his love...dt right, dt fire, dt obsession , dt passion...if u love someone then it should b like this nly...

last whole abhya part breathtaking bt for me it was just dt last line actually dt last sentence...SHE IS MINE... I love pocessive Abhay... umm actually i love abhay anyways... so doesnt matter but thats what he is.. a pocessive love.. who lvoes beyond insanity when he does 😳

nw i m sure sadhu abhay raichand has gone...😉 d one who was on a mission of staying away frm pia😉 I cant promise that 😛

i was thinking sometime a broken window cn do those things which a wizard cn't😆, i wish jab bhi abhay pia sath hun...pia feels cold n shiver😉 hahaha 😛

ok coming to aryan's part...he was super adorable as always

awww, i just totally gt bold when he was saying "jeh is going to b kabbab me hadi n then holy crap...pia was engaged to a werwolf"

ummm, abt alina- aryan's part...i m confused n i think it would b too early to comment abt my choice😉 Noone wants Aryan and Alina according to what I can see 😕 so now im confused about the triangle.. i have to change the game I guess 😛

coming to amber's part...wooo gaurav amber's husband n murderer of their child😲😲...u left loadss of question hanging there...bt must say this ff is getting freaking awesome day by day U will hate Gaurav more thn Deepu..wait and watch 😉

i m missing u so much...😭

hope u r enjoying alot there... I missed u too hunypie 🤗

luv u loadss🤗