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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#421

Urghh...im soo late...

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Thanks for updating... i have nagged u enough for it I guess 😛 It was mindblowing and as usually I love your writing 😳

The emotions u described were simply superbb 👏 👏 emotions blooming to a new form.. aha.. i hope Piya will be ok soon and we will get lots of romantic sweet moments when Abhay will take care of her 😃

the enjoyed the hesitency 😆 makes thing sweeter 😳 and I hate hospital food... yeeewww 🥱 i like soup though tht depends on the flavor but anyways hospital thots makes me sick anyway... plz transfer piya to their bedroom soon 😉

and please take care of yourself... i know your fingers not ok so I wont tell u to update soon 😳 see im a good girl 😳

luv u 🤗

Edited by princess_xeelan - 13 years ago

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cuteteddy

@cuteteddy

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#422

yipee heena ne update kar diya ..!! now u will update ur ff too :-)

awesome blossom dear :-) glad finally she is fine ..!!so finally they r getting close good ..!! well first part was tensed coz even i was wondering if she would stay safe or not ..!! achha update tha yaar.

very beautifully written n last part was romantic dear . just waiting to see those amazing moments in ur ff too ..!! update soon n thanks for the pm :-)

take care dear hope ur exams were good :-)..!!

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sonia

@-Sonia-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#423

amazing update..
Loved it
i just loved the way abhay took care of pia! N the way pia argued with abhay... It was gr8!
waiting 4 d next part
thanx for the pm
continue soon
tc

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630092

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#424

well nice update thanks so much

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Ankita

@Fly_high

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#425

brilliant heena glad c is ok n abhay taking care of her n both coming close 2 eachother good soup part was nice waiting for next part eagerly

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#426

wow heena, just wow. thats a really sweet update. abhay is so caring and loving 👏

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PRERNA VERMA

@prerna26

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#427

Fab Update Heena. I was waiting for it only.😊 Loved it, specially the way you express their POVs & depict their emotions. Well written update.Update asap. Thanks for Pm dear.🤗

Edited by prerna26 - 13 years ago

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#428

finally you up dated kept check the post every day nice to see abhay caring and loving awesome update love it totally worth the wait

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Peehu24

@Peehu24

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#429

finally heena..its updated...it was awesome...i so so loved it...

i really felt bad for abhay...he was fighting with his own guilt..but now piya is fine...oh i loved that fight...haha..soup!! i want that the so called awkwardness between them disappears...waiting to read more..update asap...

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sohini

@sohiniluvsmusic

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#430

Awesome update heena di i was eagerly waiting for it poor abhay he was blaming himself for piya's condition glad dat she is f9 nw but when piya gave confused expression after seeing abhay taking care of her i though ki wo shaid bhul gyi hai dat abhay is her husband bt later i realized dat expression was for abhay's changed behaviour luvd dat soup part thanks for the pm continue soon tc

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