abhiya SS 'broken mirror' UD-pg-116,, last UD

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Neytiri

@Neytiri

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Wndrful start...d stryline seems as promising as ur othr writings. Poor pia, sufferng so much due 2 alina...hpe abhay ll undrstnd hr...cntnue soon. Btw ab aapke xms kab hai?

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sonia

@-Sonia-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

wow heena
awesome update
loved the OS & the whole concept.
Please! Continue! I wnt abhiya to fall in luv..
Thanks 4 d pm
continue soon
tc

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Akshita

@Akshi0019

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

woh heena di it was awsum!!!! alina loves kabeer n dat makes pia marring abhay!!!! but i hope abhay realizes what he is doing 2 pia n discover his love 4 her!!!!!

n u should contenue!!!! u have written it beautifully!!!!!

cont soon nthanks 4 d pm!!!!

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snitchseeker

@snitchseeker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Wow even ur exams are post poned Thank god otherwise how could we have got this beautiful OS?

Brilliant & please continue

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PRERNA VERMA

@prerna26

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Hey Heena, Awesome Os.😊This the beginning of their new relationship, Hope soon Abhiya will fall in love and he will realise that Alina never loved him. Please continue soon. Thanks for Pm dear.😃

Edited by prerna26 - 14 years ago

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sohini

@sohiniluvsmusic

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Awesome update heena luvd da concept of this os plz continue soon:-) nd forgot 2 tell u dat if possible plz pm me from ur nxt update:-)

Edited by sohiniluvsabhay - 14 years ago

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

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+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

this is really good and I definitely want you to continue it.

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visma

@kuttu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

This is really something different. Pia and Abhay are friends. So when is it going to take the form of love. You know it kind of struck to me that Abhay has feelings for her and Alina is just a passing fancy. The flashback Pia had kind of brought that thought. And the parents have no problem.

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sandeep

@SANDY_ROSE

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#29

lovely concept heena . i like it do continue i love read more thnx 4 pm

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piyali.1228

@piyali.1228

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Posted: 14 years ago

#30

lovely update...nyc concept...i luved it...do continue...eagerly waiting 4r next...n btw hows ur exams going on...n all d best 4r ur next exam...thanx 4r d pm...tc😊

Edited by piyali.1228 - 14 years ago