os THE BEGINNING OF A FAIRYTALE lastpart pg 28 - Page 18

Originally posted by: priya.1

Amazing update shivani!!!! thanks priya

Full of abhiya romance ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

loved the way abhay teased misha... 😆 i always wanted them to share the screen cvs never fulfilled my wish so i m helping myself

I really loved the honeymoon villa... so swwet of abhay to arrnage a plc like that for his lady love...😊 he has to after all everything abhay do for pia has to be extraordinary

The date was written amazingly... really loved pia's dress... i m glad u liked it had tough time searching for it

Finally the last part 😳 i was blushing through out whn i was reading it... 😳😳 it was too hot to handle ...😳 i hope its not too intimate i tried to keep it sensual but not dirty

Plz continue soon... sure will

All the best for ur xamz... 😊 do well...

Originally posted by: Akshi0019

amazing dr!!! abhay ir really very cool n romantic... he is making up for the time they have lost due to his stay away mission

abhay n misha convo was gr8!!! loved it... thanks

abhay is becoming really naughty!!! he is a married man now yaar that too a human😳

d dinner date was awsum... loved it... d bedroon scene was fab!!! n pia tour abhays shirt button intentionally was gr8!! loved it... dere convi was mindblowing!!! i m glad u liked it i don't feel comfortable with intimate scenes i hope i haven't disappointed u

n in d end dere was hottness in d update... i loved it...

cont soon n thanks 4 d pm!!! will try

n best of luck 4 ur exams!!! thanks

Originally posted by: abhiyan_soni

superb update shivani!!!

its really hot .abhay and mish conversation is cool . abhiya was so romantic. date was very good last mein hot scene was awesome yr i m blushing . and bedroom conversation was good . very lovely and passionate update yr .waiting for next part yr thnx 4 pm

Originally posted by: TISA07

Whoa. . So hot nd intense.loved every part of it.

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu

wow shivani u described italy so well 😊and their hm trip was awsum 😛yaar loved it 😉and that villa its so beautiful pia dress was also nice i loved it😍 romance u did full justice yaar😛 and thanks for updating before ur exams all the best and thanks for the pm 🤗

Originally posted by: heena_mehta

awww thankuuu so much shivani!!it means alot to me!! no need to thank di u update ur ss fast then we will be equal😆😉
coming to d update!!it was an amazing , beautiful n hot update!!!
totally loved it!!!u av described every moment beautifully!! thanks for liking i hope i haven't disappointed u

wl b waiting for 12th nw or for ur new stories n also for d other one's!!

all d best for ur xams dear

Originally posted by: abhiora

aw amazing writing yar!!this abhiya take my breath away!!

Originally posted by: seabeauty

ammmaaazzziiinnnggg!!! keep it up :)

Originally posted by: piyabhay4ever

abhiya's honeymoon was super hot!

loved the pics too.

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

Wow dear awesome update.I so loved it yaar.Abhay's surprise date 4 Pia.Abhiya cute & passinate romance.Abhay-mish reppo.All was indeed cute.I so loved it.Abhiya were out of the world & so was ur update.Oh all the bst 4 exams.I m also waiting 4 update of ur FF😳