os THE BEGINNING OF A FAIRYTALE lastpart pg 28

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shivanirajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: snitchseeker
That was so beautiful.

Haye naughty Abhay is such a darling. Inki cuteness pe toh hum sab fida hain

The last line. Pia kicked him out. 🤣

Brilliant & fab update

thanks snigdha i always dreamed to see a naughty and passionate abhay
so i m writing him like that only

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Posted: 13 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: .rumki.
lovely update

thanks 😃

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shivanirajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti
wow so cute.I loved this Abhay naughty,loving,caring & above all expressive.Abhiya moments,their love all was so cute.And Abhay teasing his saalis ahahha.So unAbhay hahaha😆😆😆.Plzz continue jaldi😳

thanks shrishti
yeah its high time that abhay express himself properly if u know what i mean😳

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shivanirajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: shaaranya
Amazing fan fic!!
Plzzz add me to ur PM list

hey its not a ff just an os
don't give me heart attack i can't write more than two updates here
sure will add u

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shivanirajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: Sivaranjani
Awesome post Shivani!! I loved it to the core..! The ending.. When Soul meets the bonding is unexplainable!
Great work dear!😊

thank for reading

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shivanirajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: heena_mehta
shivani pls do update na!

i will try to update soon heena

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shivanirajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: love-piya-abhay
nice ff

thanks yaar but its just an os

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Posted: 13 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: shivanirajput

personal experience...huh...
Really such a cute experience... 😉

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#139

THE HONEYMOON

All the friends of abhiya were there to see off them for their flight to their honeymoon destination where they will be spending the coming month forgetting the whole world enjoying the bliss of their love. Abhay could not help himself from looking now and then at Pia. She was wearing a warm turtleneck sundress. Her hairs spreading nicely on her shoulders. Even with minimal makeup she was looking very seductive Abhay thought as he has to control himself from grabbing her and kissing her till the last breath. This was an altogether new feeling for him. He has always controlled himself in fear of hurting her but now as he states he has become deservable for her and he just can't wait to fill her life with all the happiness in this world. Pia too was stealing glances at him. He was looking devastatingly handsome in a maroon shirt and blue denim jeans. He don't have to work hard to look good. He can make her want him just by a mere glance any time of the day. Sometime the look he give her make her feel like they r the only two persons in even the crowdest of places. She always found herself wanting to have some alone time with him
"So jij u r taking Pia to Italy " Misha asked as soon as she looked at the tickets breaking the eyelock of Abhiya
"Jij, well thats better Mish sounds good" Abhay said mocking Misha
"Mish!!! woah u r just keep on surprising us these days. Why showering so much love on ur saali. But anyways this is not the answer of my question" Misha retorted
" Becoz they say that saali is aadhi gharwali. How can i not comply by the old people's saying"
"Abhay!!" Pia glared at Abhay to which he smiled sheepishly
"Don't worry darling i m all urs. I am not targeting Misha i swear" he says innocently grabing her by her waist and bringing her closer "I know Kabir will kill me if i will try to snatch his girlfriend this time"
"Abhay u r unbelievable" Pia snapped "We r asking u something and u r just playing behaving like Al Pacino"
"That i m"he says proudly
"We r going to italy or not" Pia asked freing herself from him looking completely irritated
"Maybe" Abhay smiled showing his dimples
"Abhay i m telling u never cross question ur wife and don't make her wait for the answers. The key to a successful married life is to keep ur checkbook open and ur mouth closed"Danish lectured Abhay like a gentleman
" Seems like u have a gr8 practice in this department" Kabir retorted earning a glare from Panchi and everyone laughed
they asked for leave after listening to the announcement. All of them hugged abhiya before leaving. Misha wispered in Pia's ears "I hope Abhay will let u leave ur bedroom for some sight seeing" Pia elbowed her turning red and ignored the genuine smile on Misha's face
Pia leaned onto Abhay while entwining their fingers smiling naturally. their flight has just taken off
"I m very eager to explore Italy with u Abhay"
"But i m eager to explore something else or appropriately someone else" he said smiling when Pia hit his shoulders wide eyed.
"U r becoming quite a besharam Mr. Raichand"
"Don't tell me that u r not liking it Mrs Raichand" Abhay asked grinning
Pia just shook her head smiling. Of course she is loving him like that. the first time she has seen him , she has fought with him she could not even dared to imagine that he could be this romantic. She is glad to witness this side of him
"Not just Italy i have planned much more for u"
"What do u mean we r visiting some other places as well' Pia asked getting exited
"May be. Don't give me those puppy looks. Its a surprise and I won't let anyone ruin it"
"fine then be it" she said sulking and Abhay smiled at her childish behaviour
"By the way today u r looking unbelievably sexy Mrs raichand. I think we might as well should join miles high club."Abhay wispered leaning onto her seductively
Pia gasped pushing him away "Abhay"she half wispered and half screeched looking around to make sure no one is listening to them "U r unbelievable Abhay. Please control urself" she glared at him
"How can I? This husband of urs is helpless when it comes to u" Abhay pouted and placed a kiss on her cheek
She smiled shaking her head knowing completely well that the coming few days r going to be the best days of her life. Unable to control her happiness she reached over and cupped his face gave him a hard kiss on his lips. He was surprised and happy at the same time and deepened the kiss willingly. Anyone that look at them can easily see that this couple is madly and truly in love ,little did they know the reason behind this desperation and the depth of their love and the hurdles they had passed to get each other
"We r in Venice princess" Abhay said against Pia's lips while kissing as he has grabbed her as soon as they came out of the airport. Pia kissed him back with equal eagerness pouring out all of her happiness and love in that one kiss
They hired a water taxi to their honeymoon suite. Pia was in Abhay's arms throughout the journey to their suite admiring the beauty of Venice "Abhay have u ever been here before" she asked dreamily to Abhay who was busy nuzzling her neck
"Yes madam in fact we have lived here for almost 10 years u know like one of our hideouts" he replied winking at her and continue holding her
'Then why have u brought me here. U must have seen everything here. It will be nothing new for u"
"Sweetheart everything is new and at its best now. Becoz u r with me now. It was just another city for me earlier but now I want to actually know why its is supposed to be the most romantic city in the world" and he leaned forward and kissed her. Pia just giggled and turn her head to the other side ignoring Abhay's protest "not fair" the ride itself was memorable. Riding a gondola was one of the best experience of her life and she knows there are much more to come. The boats all around making her feel like they were actually in a lake rather than in the middle of city. The gondolier offered them wine and they gladly accept it. The atmosphere was surely brimming with undeniable romance and with Abhay by her side things are more than perfect

Abhay has brought her to the far end of the city. Her jaw dropped to the floor seeing the honeymoon villa in front of her. Abhay has actually bought a full estate for their honeymoon.In front of her is a beautifully designed mordern stone villa having a Gorgeous garden, dining loggia overlooking the private infinity pool, Comfortable interiors, Air-conditioned., and most importantly a White sandy private beach of their own. She was more than bewildered. This is more than a fairy land
"Abhay u bought this 300 acre land for our honeymoon?" Pia asked still looking around the new villa as they entered inside the main house which was made in a design that combines traditional Sicilian architecture with a sophisticated modern decor. The villa is Built on two levels from local 'tufa' limestone, it features a very spacious, gallery-like living/dining room on the ground floor with tall glass doors opening to the garden. An interior balcony overlooks the living area and leads into the bedrooms, all of which have ensuite bathrooms and air-conditioning. The villa is surrounded by a lush garden and several acres of citrus groves, which produce oranges and mandarins throughout the winter months. A dining loggia overlooks the nicely-designed swimming pool and its sunny terrace.

"Well not exactly sweetheart i always wanted to buy some land here so i thought it will be better to fulfill mine and ur wish this way" he said smiling and himself analysing the perfectness of the architecture
she had tears in her eyes and hugged Abhay tightly "i love u Abhay. thanks a lot for all this" she said still hugging him
he separated her from himself " No need to thank ur servant my love But if u insist you could have waited to thank me later, when there was a bed close by." Pia giggled and shrugged her shoulders. Abhay laughed as he swept her in his arms and held her close. "You're amazing Pia Raichand." he said against her hair. and took her to the bedroom and finally placed her down. If she wasn't impressed yet then nothing could stop her from falling flat seeing their beautiful bedroom
"Oh my god I just love it" She ran out to the balcony looking out at the swimming pool and behind it was a beach beside a huge river. "How romantic is this?" she said as she walked back looking at the high ceilings with a grand chandelier hanging from it. White blackout drapes, large marble fireplace with beautiful brown velvet chairs sitting next to it. Luxurious white linens on the bed. "I absolutely love it." Pia squealed jumping into Abhay's arms.
"I'm glad cause we'll be spending a lot of time here." he said as he gave her a soft kiss.
Pia returned the kiss. "I love you." she said tilting her head to one side.
Abhay smiled. "I love you too.More and more every day, if that's even possible." he said kissing her again. It was already 9:00 at night. the butterflies in the pits of her stomach are definitely having a party now looking at Abhay's intense gaze and the king size bed nearby
"We can have dinner on the terrace over looking the river." he suggested.
"Sounds good." Pia said happily as Abhay leaned down and kissed her. This kiss was hot and intense. Pia felt it down her tows. When he reluctantly parted she gave him an intense gaze "Or may be we could just skip it and move directly to the dessert" she said drawing circles on his chest
He grabbed her hand and kissed it "I like the way u think but i guess u need some feeding. I want u at ur best strength tonight"
Pia blushed and went to change asking Abhay to do the same as it was their first dinner in Venice. She want to make it quite special and memorable. She came out wearing water colour print chiffon long gown which has beaded halter strap, beading on the center of waistband, pleated chiffon tail on the center back

Her hair in a low bun with a white lily stuck in it. Her eyes defined with smoky make up. Her lips a pale pink. Abhay was dressed in a white fitted button up shirt with a black jacket and trousers. His hair styled in spikes. Both could not take their eyes and hands off each other Pia was amazed by what she saw. She was in an open terrace with a gazebo which was decorated with white draping. There were her favourite white lilies combined with colourful tulips in every corner. It was subtle yet charming. She also saw the white ballons. There was a little artificial pond with flowers and little candles floating in it. And in the middle of the gazebo was a table covered with white satin cloth and had a champagne bottle with two glasses. There was her favourite Italian food that seemed to be served just seconds before their arrival. She turned around to see a smiling Abhay. She couldn't help but give him a fierce possessive hot kiss. Abhay helped Pia to settle down and they had their food talking and laughing. There were times when Pia found Abhay staring at her with a longing and she couldn't help the blush that creeped up on her cheeks. The look he was giving to her was really dangerous she thought. How was she supposed to actually get her food down. Once finished with food and drinks Abhay asked Pia for a dance.Soft violin was being played by the musicians Abhay has especially hired for their special date . Swaying to the music Abhay pulled her close really close. Pia looked up into his eyes and couldn't look away. They were deep and dark and burning. Abhay himself was lost in Pia's purity. He was always awestruck by her heart's purity. A girl who has fought the whole world for their love . He felt that the white surroundings were symbolic of her purity. She was just perfect for him and he believed it. Constantly saying it made him extremely happy and gave him a sense of belonging with her. He had promised himself to take care of her in every step of their life.
She was looking good enough to eat today. She was making him crazy from wanting her. "Are you finished with your dinner?" he asked. Pia nodded yes. "Should we move on to our bedroom now for relaxing" he asked
A small smile appeared on her lips. "Sure" she said as she looked up into his eyes. He took her hand and ran toward the stairs grabbing her stopping just for a kiss or two. They finally managed to reach their bedroom didn't even bothered to lock it. Both r in real hurry. Somehow they managed to reach their bed neither for once keeping their hands or lips off each other. Abhay slid the straps of her dress down kissing her shoulder and hollow of her neck. She was busy unbuttoning his shirt breaking the buttons and said huskily "sorry" not at all sounding sorry like she was on a mission. She brought his face down to hers and kissed him pouring out her need to make him realise how much he has turned her on. He was finally be able to remove her dress off her as she helped him get rid off his shirt. They were kissing and exploring each other like it was their first time. Her moans are driving him crazy just deepening his desires. He kissed her deeply as she moaned
"i love u pia i love u" he said huskily finally getting rid of all of their clothes kissing each and every inch of her body He trailed his fingers along her back as they stared at each other for an immeasurable amount of time. This was love. This was being in love. Books didn't do it justice.They couldn't get enough of each other. His tongue traced her bottom lip and he opened his mouth. They both moaned when their tongues met.They were breathing hard and would only pull away to breathe briefly. But his lips never left her body. At last when she was delerious for more ,they made love. It was sweet, gentle ,passionate at the same. As they parted finally breathing heavily. tears swelled into Pia's eyes
"Did i hurt u Pia?"he asked pulling her closer and getting worried
She just smiled nodding her head in no "I love u Abhay don't ever leave me" she said looking at him still in his arms
"We will always be like this Pia i promise" Abhay said kissing her as they finally fall asleep in each other's arms. Everything is perfect as long as she is in Abhay's arms

.This update is specially dedicated to heena as she has specifically asked for it and of course to all my other friends who have beared with my pathetic writing. Ok now only 2 parts r left in this os . But I have a problem I have never been to italy before i m taking help of my friend who live there and of course google for the places they should visit. if anyone of u have visited there feel free to help me and also give me suggestions about what u want to see especially where do u want to see them romancing

now i will be not be updating anything till 12th dec due to my exams. I m really sorry for the delay but i will compensate it with another os or ss as i have some plots in mind. feel free to suggest anything else u want me to write

love u all🤗

Edited by shivanirajput - 13 years ago