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sweety_crazed

@sweety_crazed

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Posted: 13 years ago

#141

marvelous update shivani.🤗🤗...

m on cloud nine seeing d episode...but reading this m on my seventh heaven..😍😍...i go crazy seeing abhiya romance always..!!!!...

i sooo luvd d romancing part...they were adorable...

their love is so passionate..☺️...honeymoon on italy...something anyone would luv 2...!!!

so u made d plot in venice...its awesome.⭐️..

everything abt abhiya was cute..⭐️..

abhay has become naughty.!!...

misha n abhay convo was cute..😊...

n if u can... write abt them visiting La fenice...an opera house in venice...

n having some passionate moments since d place itself is passionate.!!...

i would luv 2 see them there...since i luv that place...just my thought ignore if its bad...

lovely part ...continue soon..m waiting eagerly 4 yr next update...luv u loads...n take care🤗

Edited by madhuri16 - 13 years ago

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Ankita

@Fly_high

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#142

ok Shivani it was 1 another amazing update 👏 nice pics n lovely dress of PIA abhiya were superb n it was really very romantic 😍 ☺️ n dont u dare tell that u r a pathetic writer 😡 😆 ok seriously dear u r a very good writer😊 take care n update soon 😊

Edited by pkyekfanclub - 13 years ago

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---Priya---

@---Priya---

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Posted: 13 years ago

#143

Amazing update shivani!!!!

Full of abhiya romance ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

loved the way abhay teased misha... 😆

I really loved the honeymoon villa... so swwet of abhay to arrnage a plc like that for his lady love...😊

The date was written amazingly... really loved pia's dress...

Finally the last part 😳 i was blushing through out whn i was reading it... 😳😳 it was too hot to handle ...😳

Plz continue soon...

All the best for ur xamz... 😊 do well...

Edited by priya.1 - 13 years ago

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shivanirajput

@shivanirajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#144

part 5 updated page 20

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Akshita

@Akshi0019

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Posted: 13 years ago

#145

amazing dr!!! abhay ir really very cool n romantic...

abhay n misha convo was gr8!!! loved it...

abhay is becoming really naughty!!!

d dinner date was awsum... loved it... d bedroon scene was fab!!! n pia tour abhays shirt button intentionally was gr8!! loved it... dere convi was mindblowing!!!

n in d end dere was hottness in d update... i loved it...

cont soon n thanks 4 d pm!!!

n best of luck 4 ur exams!!!

Edited by Akshi0019 - 13 years ago

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sandeep

@SANDY_ROSE

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Posted: 13 years ago

#146

superb update shivani!!!

its really hot .abhay and mish conversation is cool . abhiya was so romantic. date was very good last mein hot scene was awesome yr i m blushing . and bedroom conversation was good . very lovely and passionate update yr .waiting for next part yr thnx 4 pm

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Monkey

@TISA0711

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Posted: 13 years ago

#147

Whoa. . So hot nd intense.loved every part of it.

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Rashmi

@Rashu1505

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Posted: 13 years ago

#148

wow shivani u described italy so well 😊and their hm trip was awsum 😛yaar loved it 😉and that villa its so beautiful pia dress was also nice i loved it😍 romance u did full justice yaar😛 and thanks for updating before ur exams all the best and thanks for the pm 🤗

Edited by strawberryrashu - 13 years ago

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heena mehta

@heena_mehta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#149

awww thankuuu so much shivani!!it means alot to me!!coming to d update!!it was an amazing , beautiful n hot update!!!totally loved it!!!u av described every moment beautifully!!
wl b waiting for 12th nw or for ur new stories n also for d other one's!!
all d best for ur xams dear