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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome part dear
loved it so alina will find that potion
aww i know how is haseena feeling for her son
pia is in coma i think n abhay will bring back her consiousness
nice update n ya sorry i can't send u buddy req coz my email address is not yet validated don't know y !! so i think if u will send i will accept it.
thanks for the pm n update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wowww it jus AWESOME dear:-) continue soon:-) ACCEPT MY BUDDY REQUEST AND PM ME please when you update next part :-):-)...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: cuteteddy

awesome part dear
loved it so alina will find that potion
aww i know how is haseena feeling for her son
pia is in coma i think n abhay will bring back her consiousness
nice update n ya sorry i can't send u buddy req coz my email address is not yet validated don't know y !! so i think if u will send i will accept it.
thanks for the pm n update soon
take care

i think i cnt send buddy req 2 u 2 anyways thanx 4 liking and keep reading :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 3
Forest:

Someone searching the trees for the potion. She looks everywhere but cannot see it. So she decides to use her powers. Before that she heard some disturbance and turned towards the person.

Alina: Piya?? Tum yahan? What are you doing here?

Maithili: hum Piya nhi Maithili hain. Wo kamzor insane yahan kya kary gi.? Uska yahan kya kam? Tum wohi bhediyon ki waris ho na?

Alina: ham main wohi hun. Tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?

Maithili(irritated): ufff.. ye bewaquf larki. Kaha to hay k hum yahan potion kleiy ay hain. Ab yahan se jao warna tmhain mout k ghat utar dein ge.

Alina: meri bat suno Maithili, kal mery bhai Jeh ne Abhay ko mar dala. Mje usko revive karny kleiy potion ki zarurat hay. Please meri bat samjho. Tum bhi to Abhay se pyar karti ho na to please mera sath do.

Maithili: hum tmhara yakeen kaise kar lain? Tum bhi to aik badbudar janwar ho, aik bhediya.

Alina: apni shaktion ko istamal karo or jan lo.

Maithili: han ye thek h.

She closes her eyes and performs some weird trick. She knows Alina is speaking truth.

Miathili( angrily): tmhara bhai wo Jeh, khud ko kya samajhta hay? Hamaray Abhayendr ko mar dala us ne? wo hamary hathon se nhi bach pay ga.

Alina: pleases Maithili ye sab bad me kehna pehly help karo potion dhundny me.

Maithili: hum potion dhund sakty hain magar usko hath nhi laga skty. Wo tmhain hi karna ho ga.

Alina: theek h tm batao k wo kahan hy.

Maithili closes her eyes and performs the trick again. She delares: wo us per me hay. Us walay me!!!

In Hospital:

All Dobriyals are sitting outside Operation Theater waiting, waiting and waiting. Doctor comes out and tells them she is out of danger but in coma. Next few are critical. Do pray for her.

After a few hours:

Chand enters the hospital. Sees Arnab and rushes forward to meet him.

Chand : Arnab. How is Piya?

Arnab: we do not know yet. She is in ICU.

Chand was about to say something when the doctor came out of ICU.

Doctor: Dekhiye ham ne unko bachanay ki bohat koshish ki hay magar wo coma se bahir ana hi nhi chahti.

Arnab: kya matlab doctor?

Doctor: Ye aik aisi condition hay k patient is me apni aik alag duniya create kar leta hay or us se bahir ana nhi chahta. Unki physical or mental halat theek h but wo reality me ana nhi chahti kiun k wo is sadmay ko accept nhi kar pa rahi or na hi karna chahti hay.

Arnab: ab kya ho ga doctor?

Doctor: dekhiye ham apni puri koshish kar rahay hain ap dua kijey.

Forest:

Alina runs forward and grabs the potion. She is ecstatic. Maithili is happy too. Then Maithili asks Alina what are the supoosed to do?

Alina: hamain Abhay ki body k pas jana ho ga. Baqi wahan ja k bataun gi. Chalo.

They both go to Raichand mansion. Haseena is sitting in her previous mode. She gets up when she hears the noise. Chand enters too.

Haseena: Alina, Maithili tum yahan? Kya hua?

Alina: auntie , uncle jaldi kijey. Hamain foran Abhay k pas jana ho ga. Hamain potion mil chukka hay. Please hurry up.

They all go to Abahy's room and she his body lying on the bed lifeless.

Maithili(in her mind) : Abhayendr tum aise achay nhi lagtay. Ham jald yahan se chalay jaen gy ta k tum apni zindgi jee sako. Hamain ab apni ghalti ka ehsas ho gya h.

Alina opens the potion bottle by muttering something. She pours some of it in Abhay's wound and the rest in his mouth. Then she throws the bottle aside and mutters some more.

Then they wait.

Hospital:

Doctor: Mr. Dobriyal ham ne Piya ko private room me shift kar diya hay. Ab wo khud chahin gi to theek hon gi. Ham or kuch nhi kar sakty.

Arnab: thanks doctor.

They all enter Piya's room and gaze at her. All are sad and they have wet eyes and Madhu is sobbing.

Precap: Mom, Dad. Piya kahan hay?

Edited by seabeauty - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice Update. Read all the chapters and their parts ! Continue Soon and do Pm me..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update dear . loved it . so finally metz has realized it .
m glad but what about pia ? i think if abhay is safe then only pia will come back from coma.
update soon n thanks for the pm .
take care .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: cuteteddy

awesome update dear . loved it . so finally metz has realized it .
m glad but what about pia ? i think if abhay is safe then only pia will come back from coma.
update soon n thanks for the pm .
take care .

u'll see.. n dnt worry i wnt dissapoint any1.. it will b nice
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful job i loved it do continue pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhiyan_soni

wonderful job i loved it do continue pm me

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