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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 4
Part 1
Raichand Mansion:

Abhay slowly opens his eyes and looks around. He didn't say anything and cast a few looks around. Haseena went to his room refrigerator and brought him a glass of blood.

Haseena : drink it Abhay. It will make you feel stronger. Abhay drank the blood and sat up. His gaze fell upon Alina and he thanked her.

Abhay: thanks Alina. Tum nhi hoti to mein zinda na hota aj yahan hun to sirf tmhari wajah se. Thank you so much.

Alina( tears in her eyes): Abhay ye to mera farz tha. Tum theek ho yahi kafi hay.

Maithili: Abhayndr hum tum se kuch kehna chahtay hain. Aj haamin ehsas ho gya hay k hum ghalat thay. Aj hum tmhari zindgi se ja rahay hain hamesha kleiy ta k tum apni zindgi hansi khushi jee sako. Apna khayal rakhna or Piya ka bhi. Saying this she leaves.

Chand: Abhay I am so happy to see you back. You are my true son!

Haseena: Abhay tum soch bhi nhi sakty k me kitni khush hon aj. Mje lag raha hay jaise mera beta aj mje wapas mil gaya ho.

Abhay: Mom and Dad. Thank you so much. Aj main jo bhi hun apki wajah se hi hun.

Haseena and Chand get emotional on this and embrace him. Alina smiles tearfully.

Abahy: Mom, Dad Piya kahan hay?? Wo mje nazar nhi a rahi? Wo theek to hay na? please mujhe us k pas le chaliye.

They remain quiet. Abhay gets frustrated and asks again. Then Chand tells him about Piya's condition. He is horrorstruck after hearing that she attempted suicide.

Abhay: I must go to piya now. I have to. Ap bhi mery sath chaliye. Please mje abhi milna h us se. Main usko theek kar dun ga. Please.

Then along with Alina they leave. Alina unfreezes Jeh now as her task is completed. Jeh is furious so he decides to go outside Deradhun as he didn't want to do more damage.

Precap: Piya main tmhain kuch nhi hony dun ga. tmhain zinda rehna ho ga hamary liye. I love you!!

do cmnt guyz :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
very nice dear. do continue soon
cuteteddy thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
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awesome part dear😳 loved it . its amazing n lovely . i know abhay will save pia 😳 i know abhay loves her😳 do update soon n thanks for the pm
take care😳
Edited by cuteteddy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Woww SUPERB yaar:-) Abhay is safe:-)... Abhay piya ko bhi safe kar dega:-),... Thanks 4 pm me dear:-) continue soon :-) Loved it:-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
lovely update hope pia also fine i like it very much waiting for next part abhiya meeting .
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
Chapter 4
part 2
On the road:
All Raichands sitting in Chand's car. Chand is driving. Abhay sitting in front seat trying to connect himself to Piya.
Haseena and Alina are sitting in the back gazing in opposite directions.
Abhay( in his mind): Piya please mujhe jawab do. main tumhain aise nhi janay doon ga. tum mje chor kar nhi ja sakti. tumhain zinda rehna ho ga, mery liye, apny liye or hamary liye. please pya utho. dekho mje kuch nhi hua h me tmharay liye wapas aya hun. ab tumhain bhi mery liye jagna ho ga. please piya please.
They reach the hospital and Chand takes them to Piya's room.
(P.S Abhay is still a vampire here and he will be throughout).
Abhay rushes forward to Piya's side and takes her hand. All are shocked to find him alive. Chand whispers to Arnab will tell you later.
Abhay starts crying after seeing Piya in this state. All go out to give them privacy. Abhay tries to use his powers to wake Piya up but fails. without much thinking he starts kissing her face( ahem ahem.. his famous kissing therapy 4 piya :P) he keeps going on. after some time he pulls back and waits. then slowly Piya opens her eyes..
Precap: "Mr. Dobriyal hum Piya ko kuch din tak apny ghar le k jatay hain ta k wo aram se reh sakay or jaldi recover karay."
"aj se Alina hamary sath rahay gi".
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sorry guyz i know its a short update but i can't think what piya is going 2 say 2 Abhay when she sees him infront of her...
anyways read, enjoy n do cmnt :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
lovely update i like it . pia is fine wooopi
kiss therapy again but awesome waiting for next
thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
aah the famous kiss therapy is back 😍
Edited by abhayfan_dishu - 13 years ago
cuteteddy thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
amazing update dear.
so finally the kiss therapy is back haaye .
thanks for the pm n update soon.
take care .

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