NEW FF:TODAY WAS A FAIRYTALE!!

Guys dis is my first ff plzzz tell me how it is!!!n if der is nythin similar 2 any one's ff plzzz let me know it may b a coincidence.

Character sketch:

Raichands:

Abhay Raichand: A tall n handsome rich guy at mount college .Thinks very high about himself. Changes his girlfriends more rapidly than his clothes. Has a big attitude problem . Enjoys irritating PIA.

Chand Raichand:

One of the most powerful NEW business men. He loves showing off his money when it comes to throwing parties!!Loves his family.

Haseena Raichand:

A very lovely wife and mother. Does not like abhay's girlfriends and his habit of changing girlfriends so often but has a soft corner 4 him in her heart. Loves her family.

Dobriyals:

Pia Dobriyal:

A brilliant, beautiful and fun loving girl.Has pure hatred for her implacable enemy ABHAY.Her love is more destructive than hate.She is always mesmerized by the outer world which includes DANGER.Loves her family.

Misha Dobriyal:

A silly brat. Loves her sister's.A tomboy and loves making fun of others especially T . Kabir's best friend. She feels she should have born as a boy rather than a girl.

Panchi Dobriyal:

A cute girl. Loves her family and siddharth. Very happy in her little world but is not aware about what life has kept in store for her.

Arnab and Madhu Dobriyal:

Pia,MISHA and panchi's parents. Love their daughter's. They can even create a havoc in heaven for them.

Siddharth Kapoor:

Loves Panchi has a very big business empire.Cares a lot about Pia cause he never got a little sister. Blames ABHAY for his parents accident which he calls as MURDER. Hates ABHAY to the core of his heart.

Jeh Khurana:

Loves and adores Pia. Can do anything to make her his. He was the one who suggested sid the WRONG idea about ABHAY murdering his parents. He thinks Abhay likes Pia.

REST OF THE CHARACTERS ARE THE SAME BUT NEIL DOES NOT LIKE PANCHI IN MY FF!!plzzz rply if i should continue or not!

Index

chapter 1:pg 2
chapter 2:pg 4
chapter 3:pg 6

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Chapter one: BEGINNING OF A NEW ERA!!

The sun had come up a girl was sitting by the window that is foggy with the breath of a life gone by and she was in deep thought when she screams as a cold hand lands on her shoulders'.it was her bratty sister Misha.

Misha: Hey, what are you thinking about?

Pia: ugh Misha.. u scared me till death what was that for?

Misha:Hey don't change the topic.wai..wai..wait don't tell me that ypu were thinking about that moron!!

Pia:NOWAYS!!!!!!!i was thinking about Maithali!

Misha:ohhh just forget her she's the past!!!!she is long gone!!!!!!

Pia:I know but she was are sister misha!!!!!!!!my twin!!!!!!

Misha: stop SCREAMING!!!!!!!!!!

Pia:I'm sorryL

Misha:u should b!!!!!!n btw there's a new comer at mount college!!!!!!it will b fun to rag him!

Pia: MISHA U N KABIRA R MEANT 2 B 2GETHR PERFCT RAGGIN COUPLE!!!!

Misha:couple!!!!!my foot!over my dead body!!!!

Pia:heehhehehhe chaliye maharani saheb taaiyaar hoone!!!

Misha:chalo hum aapke aage!!!!

In Pia's room

Pia:panchi di!what sould I wear?????

Misha: clothes obviously!!!!

Panchi:shut up MISHA'.wear anything u will cool super hot!!!

Pia: k I'll wear dis dress

She was ready in minutes applied some make up n went downstairs n all were amazed by Pia's immense beauty!!!she was lookin hot!!!!!!!!

Arnab:looking very nice!!!!!

Madhu:nice???? She's looking so good''''.koi bhi ladka isse dekhega toh latoo ho jaayega!!

Misha:chale??????

Arnab , Madhu n Panchi:bieee all the best!!!!!enjoy

Pia: Misha I'm not coming on your bike I am taking my car!!!

Misha:your wish!

At Mount college

Kabir, Misha,Tracker,Angad,Jeh n Neil were talking when the discussion suddenly heats up'

Misha:you moron tumne kal Pia se club main kitne rudely behave kiya!!!!!

Jeh:Look Misha I don't wanna talk about it!

Kabir:just shut up guys hum yaha uss naye student ka swaagat kar rahe ho aur tum dono kal ke bare main ab tak jhagad rahe ho!!!...he remarks sarcastically.

Neil:yeaa guys kabir is rite jus chuck it!!!

Jeh:just tell her!!!!!!!

Neil:hey who new comer aa gaya.now cut the crap!!

Everyone were shocked when a shiny black Jaguar came up in the parking lot and a man with fashionably styled black hair,a prominent chin with an unexpected dimple in it and deeply set blue hypnotic eyes emerged from the car. He wore a tailored black shirt with a jacket and black jeans with polished and custom-made shoes .He removed his glares. Except for his eyes which constantly swept over the parking lot Abhay Raichand was still.If Abhay Raichand radiated stillness the college students around him radiated dynamic movement. But after seeing him and his stylish and valuable fancy car everyone's eyes were popping out. And suddenly a black BMW Showed up and the most beautiful woman apparently in the whole universe stepped out. All the boys were certainly smitten by her beauty. Abhay saw her n a wide grin spread across his face when she walked away. He was thinking about her perfect body n beautiful face which carried a fake smile which he could see. He decided to head for the principle's office and headed towards it.