if abhiya got besharam from day1

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Posted: 13 years ago
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guys this is my first attempt at a besharam post. if u enjoy it, plz press the like button atleast.
now leave aside logic and read my post.

part 1: beginning

pia: didn't u save me that day at rapelling point? i'm pia jaiswal.

abhay: you fell into my arms that day. now you are standing near my car. want a ride ?

pia: i would love to go on a ride with a hottie like you. ready to take me?

abhay: what are we waiting for, sweet doll ? let's go.

off they went, ignoring the jealous glances of the crowd of assembled girls.

pia leant her head on abhay's left shoulder and took a deep breath.

pia: u have a nice smell. musk perfume, isn't it? don't mind but your jacket is rough.

abhay: and u are smelling of jasmine and lilac and strawberry shampoo smell is coming from your hair.

abhay then parked his car outside a shopping mall and asked pia to wait. pia was listening to some music when two men suddenly opened the car and pounced on her. abhay then turned up carrying a huge packet and saw everything.
he swiftly ran at the car, threw the packet inside the car and hit two hammer like punches on the faces of the goons. they landed 10 feet away with nose bleeding and semi-conscious.

abhay comforted pia who was sobbing and said:-
don't worry dear. the people will send them to police. let's go and forget this.

pia was going to sit beside abhay again who stopped her and said:
not at the front now. sit at the backseat, open the packet and see what i have brought for you.

pia opened the packet and was beside herself in glee when she saw everything. inside was a bouquet of her favourite flowers, a bottle of an expensive perfume, packets of her favourite scented soaps, a diamond ring and necklace, a silken scarf, two large teddy bears of her favourite colours pink and blue, a huge box of chocolates and a bunch of lollipops. on a beautiful card was written -all for pia jaiswal, the sweetest girl i have ever seen. from abhay raichand.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 2: besharami

pia saw that abhay has parked the car deep in the forest beside a stream and taken off his jacket.

abhay: don't mind pia but i have to wash myself. when i punched the goons their blood and spit landed on my face and chest.

pia: after that, just you and me together, okay? i am not going to wait anymore u handsome hunk.

soon she heard abhay's voice- pia there is a towel and comb at the back locker. pass them on, will you?

pia was about to do that when she saw from whom the voice came and stopped like a statue. at the same time a thousand volcanoes erupted inside her heart. she weakly said- u are abhay, aren't you?

the man she saw had abhay's face but there was much more. he was clad only in shorts and water was running all over his smooth skinned, flawless muscled body. his hair was dripping wet and his face was just godlike.
she ran her fingers along his body and traced the outlines of his biceps, chest, shoulders and cheekbones. she wanted to make sure that the man standing in front of her is real and not an illusion. she then looked into his eyes and passionately gave a long hard kiss on his lips to regain some of her lost self-control.

pia joked: hurry up abhay. if some she-wolf sees you, u will be her dinner in no time.

abhay : i am safe because i have a secret pia. if u know it, u will hate me.

pia: tell it first. if u have not cheated on me, then i don't mind anything.

abhay: i am a 150-year old vampire. i am an undead human and a dangerous predator.

pia giggled: so what happens when you change into a vampire? do you hunt humans?

abhay: unfortunately my creator had low budget so i do not look like the vampires in Bloodrayne. see this-

abhay bared his razor sharp fangs and hissed " i may hunt humans, pia"

pia smiled : no problem. after what you did to me today, i will gladly die at your hands. go on, kill me.

pia stretched out her neck and closed her eyes, expecting a sharp pain anytime. instead cold lips gently pressed her neck and then her right cheek. she opened her eyes to see abhay holding her face in his hands. when their eyes met, he said-

"pia, i don't hunt humans. to kill or even hurt a girl like you is the gravest sin on earth." he kissed her forehead.

pia slowly said- abhay, i want to be with you forever. don't ever push me away from you.

they were about to hug when pia sensed abhay was still wet. mischief overcame on her mind. she threw away the towel.

abhay : pia, let me dry up atleast. and what are you doing, just stop this.

pia has taken off her coat and was removing her top. she stuck out her tongue at abhay and said:-

u know what abhay raichand, u are still not clean enough. i was feeling horrible after touched by those goons and after seeing you i am feeling very hot. i want to have a bath NOW and you are going to come with me and NO ARGUMENTS.

(what happened after that- everyone imagine their own)

CWB: aajkal iss jungle main kya sab ho raha hain, ye mere jaise buddho ka sharmane ki baat hain.


expecting comments.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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HEY I LIKE IT ITS SUPERB FANTASTIC YU SHULD CONTINUE THIS 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh everyone's becoming besharam's these days just loving it 😆 That was very good plz continue!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks for making this post dear now no one will call me the besharam . ur first try was awesome . keep it up .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Why did u stpped da besharam post at dat point?u really shld cont further.it ws nyc.
Edited by TISA07 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@tisa- exactly continue further its very bad to leave at such point
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: cuteteddy

thanks for making this post dear now no one will call me the besharam . ur first try was awesome . keep it up .


ok this is a bit personal. i was wondering if abhay was a casanova like sid. instead of hurting piya from the beginning, if he had just flirted with her. when i read your 1st besharam post it triggered my current besharam post. i promise you that as soon as another one will come to my mind, i will post it. infact, i have got another one forming in my mind. 😊

Edited by ary42 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: TISA07

Why did u stpped da besharam post at dat point?u really shld cont further.it ws nyc.



i continued after that- didn't u see -" everyone imagine their own" actually they disappeared behind the bushes in the riverbank and i respected their privacy. however, u are free to peek into the bushes. it's up to you if abhay chases you away from there. go ahead, they have just gone into the jhari, go and peek if u have the besharmi.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ary42



<font color="#000033" size="4">i continued after that- didn't u see -" everyone imagine their own" actually they disappeared behind the bushes in the riverbank and i respected their privacy. however, u are free to peek into the bushes. it's up to you if abhay chases you away from there. go ahead, they have just gone into the jhari, go and peek if u have the besharmi.</font>

thnx 4 da recomendation.bt i wld rather eat sands than peeking. . .looking forward 4 ur next post.
Edited by TISA07 - 13 years ago

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