A MYSTERIOUS LOVE STORY an abhiya ff note on pg64

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

EDITEDlovely writing shivani..that dream of piya..she sees chand n abhay,rite?eager to knw the connection..u have introduced them well..so this piya is quiet n reserved..k update asap n thanx 4 pm!

Edited by abhiora - 13 years ago

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Alicia thelwell

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

nice story plz update soon
thanks for the pm

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Deepi20

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Awesome update! Poor Piya's life sounds so lonely and sad! I'm glad she's leaving the orphanage and now joining Mount College where hopefully she'll meet Abhay! 😛 I guess Piya will play an integral part in helping Abhay get his dad back to life as Piya sees Abhay's dad in her dreams (I'm assuming the old man in Piya's dream is Abhay's dead dad). I wonder why Piya gets those dreams and what her connection is to all this! Looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊

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sweety_crazed

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

hey shivani,😊

awesome start🤗.🤗...piya is alone though she is surrounded by people😔...i really feel bad 4 her glad she is leaving orphanage😊 ...so her mysterious dreams leads her 2 abhay😳...u portrayed abhay's intro n haseena's manners very well👍🏼...so piya is the one who can bring chand back 2 life...do continue soon...waiting eagerly..😊

Edited by madhuri16 - 13 years ago

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srija

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Hey shivani its awesome dear.
U described piya's loneliness too well.
Abhay n haseena's intro was fab.
So piya is the one who can bring chand back.
C is joing mount clg.hope they wil meet soon.

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PRERNA VERMA

@prerna26

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Brilliant update!

Poor Pia. She has noone with whom she can share her feelings. She lost her mother and that too when she was so young. I think Pia will help Abhay in getting his father back. Continue soon and thanks a lot for Pm Shivani.😊

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---Priya---

@---Priya---

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

hey shivani awesome update...

poor pia is all alone... n the way u hv written it is mind bowing

continue soon

thnx 4 the pm

Edited by priya.1 - 13 years ago

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visma

@kuttu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

so Chand is missing in action. Pias story surely evoeks sympathy in the readers. I hope she finds her happiness in Abhay. So is Abhay going to come to dehradun in earch of Pia. Waitng to see what is the news that is awaiting the mother and son