A MYSTERIOUS LOVE STORY an abhiya ff note on pg64 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: cuteteddy

hey dear sorry for the late comment actually i read it being offline so thats y couldn't comment
please continue it seems to be very interesting n please please please pm me whenever u update


thanks yaar u i will pm u the first chapter pretty soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: priyaks12

hai shivani.. 😊 nice character sketch.😊 please pm me when u update.


thanks i will sure pm u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: abhiora

hey!!u starting an ss shivani??that's great!!y ddnt u send a pm?i vl b waiting 4 u 2 cntnu..cnt wait!!


tora its a ff not an ss sorry for not sending pm but i m very busy these days surprise quizzes then exams hanging on head so was offline yesterday throughout after posting this i could not pm anyone
i will most probably post the first chapter today itself and then will send pm to all

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey I loved the concept of your ff

I loved Pkyek pre-leap and would love to read your ff

Could you add me to the PM list
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: abhaypiya4ever

Hey I loved the concept of your ff


I loved Pkyek pre-leap and would love to read your ff

Could you add me to the PM list


it will be refreshing and a bit different from prelap pkyek
but there will be college life and lots of mysteries
i will sure pm u

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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
ff?cool,that's even greater!!oh,ok..its no problem,dr..gud luck with ur xams..studies cum frst!!:-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
pls PM me when u update ur ff😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
wow nice story plz update soon
my name is Alicia pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
very nice ff i like abhiya
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter one Abhay and Pia introduced

Pia woke up with the same horrifying feeling she had woken up for the past 1 year and it was all result from the same dream she had been having for the past 1 year. She had been having this dream since she was a mere child. But since 1 year they are growing darker and mysterious, more clear and more scary . She was sweating heavily still thinking about the dream. She saw herself standing in a dark room with only a patch of light showering on an old man who was floating in the air looking helpless. He was not that good looking having a small height, with a moustache , crumbled black hairs looking as in they have not been brushed for decades, fair complexioned with mystery written all over his face. He was continuously shouting

"Please help me get out of here ,Only you can save me. Please help me please"

Tears of blood are flowing unstoppably from his eyes. He was looking as though he was floating in between the edge of a high cliff lying exactly between life and death. Then suddenly a young man came out of the corner of that dark room. She could easily tell that he was very young because of the way he is walking while he is advancing towards her. Only his blue hypnotyzing eyes were visible which were good enough to enlighten the room with its purity. His eyes were also pleading for help. He was slowly coming closer to her. His face was about to be seen when she suddenly woke up. Everytime the same thing happens with her. The same dream and the same point when she comes out of that dream. Its seems like some strange force is hindering her mind from looking into that young man's face . She has always believed that he is ought to be handsome. All these dreams are just a premonition or something else she has no clue about that . "Why the same dream every night. Why? . How am I related to both of those strangers? I have never seen them before ,then why are they invading my mind". She keeps on thinking about the dream for five minutes and then shrug off the need to find about the secret behind her dreams "They are necessarily to remind me that how strange and different I m from others just the same thing everyone in the orphanage keeps on stating for the past 9 years"and then she got up from her small bed and glances at the watch on her study table. Its showing 5:05 a.m. the same time it daily shows when she got up. This is really frustrating for her as she can't talk to anyone about this because honestly she has no one to talk to. She still remember the day when she receives the dreadful news that the doctor has brought her "Your mother is no more. It was the last stage of blood cancer and we could not save her. I m so sorry" he shows sympathy towards her by putting a hand on her head but she jerked it off and ran away sobbing. She did't need anyone's fake sympathy all she wanted was her mother back but it was too late. She has left her all to herself in this cruel world. She sobbed and cried continuously for three days praying to god to give her mother back to her but how can she be so lucky? God has taken away the only person she had ever loved. She had never prayed or visited a temple since that unforgettable day. "God has always been unfair to me". She was the one who gave fire to her mother's dead body going against all the usual customs of the society as her mother also had no one else. But they were happy with each other. She still remember how her mother used to sing for her in her melodious voice and daily used to feed her the dishes she loved the most. How they were happy in their small world when suddenly everything shattered with the sudden demise of her mother. She was left all alone in their small rented house with no money left to her as all of her mother's savings were spent in her medication. So one of their neighbours "pitied" her condition and admitted her to an orphanage in which she has spent the past nine years of her life .

The orphanage was not a pleasant place for her itself but she has no other option left to her but to stay here and actually experience the life of an orphan. It is a place at the outskirts of Mumbai surrounded by lush green array of coconut trees and a small river flowing stealthily behind it . the garden of the orphanage contains clusters of old , rusty playground equipments but only two of the clusters are used regularly. The rest of the grounds are overgrown with dandelions, grass and bushes etc.

She was sharing her room with three other girls for almost 4 years now but still finds it difficult to remember their names. Each of them were issued a number that designated which coat locker, bed and chamber pot would be theirs, hers was 13 "unlucky here as well"she fondly thought. She never bothered about what was happening around her, who is enjoying, playing or gossiping about her strange behaviour. Nothing mattered to her ever. She was always way too engrossed in her books to care about anything else. History being the subject which fascinates her the most. She finds solace in her books. She has a habit to spend at least 12 hours a day with her best friends i.e. the books. She has always been the first to wake up in the morning all thanks to her nightmares. Rest of the time she keeps herself busy by helping the orphanage people in looking after small children and admiring the nature. She feels herself connected to it far strongly than her non existing connection with human beings. She has been following the same monotonous schedule for the past nine years. But now it seems like things are about to change.

She went to the bathroom, freshen up and wore her jogging dress to go out for a half an hour walk. But today she was not enjoying the cold and refreshing air of the morning as she was way too indulged into thinking about what sister Mary has told her 3 days ago

"My child, finally your dream will come true. Yes u r the first student from our orphanage having got selected for a complete scholarship to the prestigious college of Dehradun, Mount College. My child I m so happy for you. Finally you will be going to get what you deserve" and then she came forward to hug Pia but hell she doesn't know how to hug anyone back. Its like she has forgotten to show any affection towards anyone since her mother has left her all alone. Eventhough she knows that sister Mary is the only person in the orphanage who genuinely cares for her, but still she can't reciprocate her love.

"Aren't u happy my child. I know u don't like it much here. So now you will be free to live the life u have always dreamed about. You can make friends, study hard and be happy. Aren't you glad that I decided to send your application form in time."

Pia could not help but let a smile crept on her face. It seems like years that she has smiled.

Today she will be leaving for Dehradun leaving this orphanage forever. But she is not feeling that good about it. Its like something is about to struck her badly and will going to change her life forever. "I should be happy for myself. I have never liked this place where everyone just came to show fake concern for us, where we are being treated like secondary citizens, just someone in need. Now I m getting a chance to make a life for myself, to make friends, to study hard and to prove to the world especially one person who has left me and my mom for his own selfish reasons that a girl like me can survive without anyone's help and can achieve anything she wants." She thought determined and a drop of tears made its way out of her eyes without her permission.

Pia always loathed her life in the orphanage as she never got to see genuine concern for her in anyone's eyes except may be sister Mary. She can always sense what someone feels or wants by looking into their eyes or precisely by touching them. She don't know what is all this gut feelings about but still she believes it and proceeds according to it . It seems like she can look into a person's soul. Yes she is a strange girl for others in the orphanage but she prefer being like this for her own safety, just too judgy.

Outskirts of London

About 6.5 km north of the centre of London lies the lovely village of hampstead. There stands a house distinctly nearby the hampstead health i.e a chain of formal parkland, woodland ,meadowland and ponds. It is a very large dwelling house spreading over an area of 8,000 square feet. It is a sixteenth century type mansion painted totally in black. It clearly depicts the royal taste of the owner of the house. It contain specially designed rooms meant to accommodate leisure activities of every kind. It has a conservatory ,infinity pool, a huge library and everything else anyone can dream of. Precisely it is built with integrated domatics.

But once you enter into the house all this seems to be of no importance to the owner of the house. It feels more like a haunted house, a strange silence is engulfing the whole atmosphere and one get a feeling of extreme discomfort. There on a large royal couch is sitting an extremely handsome young man who barely looks 18. His perfect features can enchant anyone in this world. His black silky soft hairs were falling on his forehead, his beautiful blue eyes are looking outside the window trying to scrutinize the nature's beauty and his life's painful reality. He was sipping a strange red fluid but at the same time was deeply immersed in his thoughts. He really looked troubled because of something.

From the large black door enters a woman completely dressed in black looking not more than 40 or 45 having extremely beautiful features, royalty overflowing out from her every move. She came forward and sit next to the young man "What are you thinking Abhay. Why do you seems to be so lost."

Abhay with the most tender expressions on his beautiful face- "What can I do mom. Its been 15 years since that unfortunate day when we lost dad and still I'm unable to find a way to get him back. I' m an ugly blot on the name of a son mom. I hate myself"

She put her loving hands on his hand and speaks softly-"Don,t say that Abhay. You have fulfilled all of your duties till date. Its not at all your fault. Its just that fate has really been cruel to us. How are we suppose to find something which do not exist"

Abhay now grew impatient-"It does exist mom, it does. I have a feeling that what we are looking for is hidden somewhere. All I need is just a clue and then I will do everything in my hand to get my dad back to life."

Haseena patted his cheeks- "Don't worry son. You know na that Sophie has been searching for every possible clue we can get in those ancient books dating 1000 years back. She went to Himalayas and has spent almost three months there in a secret library situated there doing the same. Today early in the morning I have received a slight mental message from her stating that she has found a big clue which will prove to be quite vital for us. She is returning today itself. May be we will get lucky this time "

Abhay let out a sigh-"I hope so"

Edited by shivanirajput - 13 years ago

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