A MYSTERIOUS LOVE STORY an abhiya ff note on pg64

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PRERNA VERMA

@prerna26

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Posted: 13 years ago

#121

Awsome Update!👏

You have expressed Abhayendra's and Maithali's precious moments beautifully. How they used to meet secretly and were happy to be in each other's arms...for them it was their heaven. Loved the whole description (Flashback scene).😃 Continue soon. Take care!😊

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Peehu24

@Peehu24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#122

awesome update...loved it...the flashback was so sute..the way u described was beautiful...

now am eagerly waiting for abhay and piya to come face to face..plz..jaldi lekar aa dono ko amne samne...m waiting for their first meet...

update soon...

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snitchseeker

@snitchseeker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#123

Fantastic Shivani.

Ametz scenes were so beautiful & yet so heart breaking.

Pia is no lamb here. Loving it

Waiting for Abhiya first meet.😊

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piyali.1228

@piyali.1228

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Posted: 13 years ago

#124

wow...

what a lovely update

superb

awesum

amazing

luved it

do continue soon

n thanx 4r d pm

tc😊

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anjali

@adnilover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#125

will be waiting for the rest of the update. The first part is great.

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#126

Hi Shivani!! Finally updated the FF.. 😊

So how was your exams?? I know you would have done it perfect like ur ff.. Now you are ok?? Feeling better?🤗

Back to Update.. It was so nice and perfect.. Especially Abhay and Metz scenes.. Perfectly displayed..!!👏

Pia is a brave gal here?? Good to see her like that.. What did Jonathan do to her??😊

Thanks for the PM dear...!!😎

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Rashmi

@Rashu1505

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Posted: 13 years ago

#127

congo shivani for becoming goldie👏 the update was fab 👍🏼those moments were hot but it was a flash back 😔i wanted it in real but no probs i enjoyed it and abahy misses metz so sad 😭loved it thanks for the pm

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Ankita

@Fly_high

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Posted: 13 years ago

#128

very nice update keep it up 😊 waiting for second part

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sandeep

@SANDY_ROSE

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Posted: 13 years ago

#129

wow awesome update and matz and abhay scene was awesome abhay really love matz very much and he broke inside with lose of his love and his dad and pia is very brave girl and but jhon did with pia ? and jaldi se abhiya ko face to face le ke ayo waiting what happened next thnx 4 pm

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Pratiksha

@Don_theEvil

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Posted: 13 years ago

#130

nice upadte abhay and maithly both are cutea and sweet together, abhay is so hurt because of his loss maithly and his dad, i hope pia help him to deal with his pain, and that woment sounds problem for pia, i hope pia us orphange se jaldi bahar aajye, nice update, like it very much, thanks for pm

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