A MYSTERIOUS LOVE STORY an abhiya ff note on pg64 - Page 12

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Posted: 13 years ago

sorry for getting late guys i was having my exams but i have compensated it by a big update. and this post is really memorable one for me as it is my 1000th post now i m a goldie. i want to thank all of u for bearing me here. yaa one thing this ff has a quite different story than the serial so read it with open mind for example here maithali is not evil but she was a gr8 girl who died for her love keep that in mind and enjoy the following part

A Beautiful Night

An extremely handsome young man was sitting on the grass in the midst of a jungle at a full moon night. His Greek god like sharp features and a perfect jawline are looking irresistibly beautiful , glowing immensely making even the moon look so pale in comparison. He was wearing a white frilled shirt and black long trousers with long boots dressed up like an early 19th century peasant but still the attire is unable to absorb his exquisite perfectness. The rattling wind was swimming through his hairs, directed over his shoulders. It is as if someone has set a beautiful wallpaper to the scenery. The insects of various sizes and colors are roaming through the land of green. The forest was shining with a plea sent glow , a river flowing nearby is adding to its scenic allure. Crickets trill as he move closer to the stream, and finally sit on the shore


. Everything was so calm and composed but the young man is restless. He couldn't help but keep on glancing towards the other side of the forest waiting impatiently to see the face of the one girl who is his world now. Suddenly he hear some disturbance and soft sound across the bushes. But he didn't got frightnened. He knew too well that what it is about. He lifted his face, letting the light and the shadow dance across his face. Bees hummed in and out of the pennyroyal. He inhaled the warm, rich and inviting fragrance that always reminds him of a rose garden in full bloom, getting delighted at the sound of her feet sliding through the leaves. For that fraction of seconds trees stood utterly still ,statues in a living museum where no leaf dared to fall. Yes finally he saw her face coming out of the dark enlightening the dark forest with her utter pureness. She is indeed a human flower just meant for his aesthetic consumption. She stood there giving him a heartful smile seeming as though she got the biggest treasure on this earth just by getting a glimpse of him. She was wearing a maroon- orange shining victorian ball gown which was suiting her slender and sylph figure. She was wearing gloves and opera cloak with a cashmere shawl covering her which was most probably used to cover her so as to make it easier for her to fled away unnoticed from the evening ball arranged at her mansion. She finally removed the shawl from her head showing her beautiful black straight hairs gracefully decorated with white flowers. She was wearing heart shaped jewellery and her smiling deep black eyes were making her look like an angel descended on earth from heaven. Meanwhile he was enjoying the peaceful serenity of just looking at her angelic face. She finally came forward and ran into his arms instantly


She was embracing him as though the moment she will leave him he will fly away. Finally the young man broke the peaceful silence.

"What happened Maithali? Why are you so late. I have been waiting for you impatiently since 3 hours. What took you so long to come to me. Are you alright. Has someone tried to harm you?" he asked caressing her back lovingly, getting a bit worried now.

Maithali tilted her head from his chest and parted a little from him, her hands were still on his shoulder and he was holding her by her waist she raised her hand and touched his cheek as though trying to make sure that he see the love she has for him by her mere touch and said "No Abhayendra I m completely alright. Actually bhai was keeping an eye on me. So it was really difficult to sneak away from there under his nose. But somehow i persuaded a girl to impersonate me for a while and get away from that prison of pretence."she now take a deep breath and speaks directly looking into his blue eyes "I missed you Abhayendra" words were not necessary between them at that time. Their eyes were speaking enough for both of them to show the volume of love they have for each other in their hearts.

"I missed you too Maithali" Abhayendra move his hand upto her shoulder and make her sit on the beautiful white blanket he has led especially for her and he sat beside her.

"Why are you sitting on the grass Abhayendra" she was getting annoyed now because of the distance he is maintaining from her

"Its ok Maithali I don't want my princess to feel any discomfort ,you can have all space to yourself. Anyways I m used to countryside" he smiled seeing her concern for him

"No, don't you dare say that. I feel like a princess only when I m in your arms. Otherwise this designation is of no use to me. Either you come and sit near me or I m leaving right now" she said daring him now all set to get up when he finally give in and slides next to her. Maithali leaned her head onto his shoulders, entwining her hand with his. They sat next to each other as close as possible admiring the waves of the stream which seems to be echoing the purity of their love in the atmosphere.

Abhayendra initiated the talk again "So how was your ermm what do they call it"he asked a bit confused now.

"Evening ball. It was boring as always. People greeting each other while preparing to kill the other inwardly. Fake show off and nothing else. I never understand the reason of organizing such high class illogical functions. They are just a waste of time, space and money. But ya it looks like my brother is suspicious of my intentions these days. I suppose he is spying on me. So we should be careful from now on" she sounds a bit tensed now

" It means you won't come to meet me more often from now on" he said frowning just to tease her

Maithali laughed and squeezed his hands "I will come to you even if I have to walk on fire to travel on the path leading to you and sacrifice myself while doing so'"

He suddenly put his finger on her lips, his eyes have turned red by now , he really got irritated hearing her sacrificial claim "Don't you ever say this again Maithali. The moment you will leave me my heart will stop beating then and there. Even death has to face me before putting a finger over you. I won't let anything come in between us . For you I will even fight with the creator of this world" he has tears in his eyes now.

Maithali was so moved. She cupped his face and wiped his tears although her own tears are refusing to listen to her " No matter what will happen Abhayendra I will always come back for u. You are the best thing in my life. The reason I exist seems to make sense when I m around you" she hugs him tightly now almost clinging onto him. He just pressed her closer to him. She feels so good in his arms. Its like they are connected on a spiritual level.

"We will always be together Maithali. Nothing can come in between our eternal love story not even death. I love you with my very being. You are my obsession, my devotion, my world" he says huskily trying to assure her and let her overcome all her worries and insecurities.

Her face lit up hearing his words. His voice was so soft and every word sounds so true just like hormony to her ears. He really had a sweet melody in his voice.

She just wanted to feel this moment right now so she slowly move her head backwards from his embrace. They gaze each other passionately. Its like love is flowing in their bloodstream. They both leaned in closer to each other automatically as in they are controlled by someone else maybe their souls. As their lips met fireworks generated inside their body. His hand slowly reached her face bringing her closer applying slightly more of pressure on her lips. She was kissing his lower lip as he was teasing and sucking her upper lip and then they switch to the other lip. His hand are now moving all over her body as he was exploring her curves and she was also doing the same trying to feel him inside her. They are kissing each other like they can't get enough of each other or like they might never get to kiss each other again. They finally parted from each other to grasp some air. He was smiling flaunting his dimples looking at her and there was a shy and sweet smile lingering on her lips. She was blushing hard and finally went into his arms which feels like home to her. They eventually lay down on the ground spreading the blanket. Her head on his chest and his fingers were playing with her hairs trying to curl them.

The trees danced as the wind shook their magnificent green leaves in a loving way. The cold, yellow moon sat above the forest watching the two soulmates lost in their love forgetting about the harsh reality and forthcoming dangers for a while

"Abhay what are you doing here. Its been an hour since you are standing like this" Haseena tapped on his shoulders.

This finally brought him back to the present. He was living the best moments of his life all over again. It has become a custom for him, Whenever he was worried and could not find a way to get out of his miseries, he let himself drown into those beautiful memories he shared with Maithali, the girl who still lives in his dead heart, the only girl he has ever loved, the only girl who still has the capability of bringing tears in his eyes. "You broke your promise Maithali, you didn't came back for me, you didn,t" yes he was crying but this time unfortunately they are blood tears telling him that he has been cursed to the extent that he can't even mourn the loss of his beloved.

"Abhay son say something, talk to me what are you thinking" she asked getting really worried now

Finally he came out of the trance "Mom I m just trying to seek the answers of some of my questions from that cruel god who has snatched away everything from me -my Maithali, my humanity and now my dad ,the person because of whom I m still walking on this eartheven if as a as a dead man" he said gazing at the blue sky.

Haseena turned him around and make him look into her eyes "Don't worry son, I know you still miss Maithali but u have to understand that she can't come back but ur dad can and I know u will accomplish this impossible task and then I hope you will find all the happiness in ur life. I know somewhere someone is waiting for you" she held his hand but he shrugged it off

He almost shouted "No mom I have loved once and I have lost her. Now I can never love anyone else. She was the first and the last girl in my life and nobody yes nobody can replace her. Between How could you forget that I m a monster now and monster are not allowed to love ,they are just meant to kill and destroy everyone's lives"

"How can you say that Abhay, my son is not a monster. He is an angel in disguise of a vampire who can never even hurt a fly if not necessary. Don't you dare say this again, how could you hurt me like this." Haseena said in anguish

"I m sorry mom but I m..."

"Enough Abhay, just calm down ok. U have no idea how I feel looking at you in this condition. But I know this will change I m more optimistic than you. Now lets drop this topic and please wipe your tears. They are freaking me out. You don't want your mom to puke in front of you now do you" she asked raising her eyebows.

"Mom vampires can neither eat nor puke. What kind of a sick joke is this hun" he asks feeling a bit better now. Haseena is the only one who can change his mood upside down.

Suddenly they hear a thunderous sound coming from their living room. Someone out there is shouting her head out "I m here I m here where is mr broody heee"

"Oh she finally came" Haseena and Abhay let out a sigh

Mumbai orphanage

Pia finally came back after jogging. Nearly nine years had passed since she stepped her foot inside the orphanage, but it has hardly changed at all. The sun rose on the same tidy front garden and lit up the front brass door, it crept into the common room meant for the leisure time of kids and even adults as it owns the only television set of the orphanage making it the most sought after room of the orphanage. But Pia has no interest in watching television except for the daily news she used to see to keep herself updated. She was just entering for the morning news when she bumped into Jonathan, an ugly 25 years old boy who is the son of the main trustee of the orphanage. He is black complexioned, with spunky hairs, tall, his tummy reflecting out of his spider man t shirt. He used to came here 5 month ago on a regular basis to have some "fun" with the girls of the orphanage. He used to make vulgar comments on them and even sometimes try to touch them. Many of the girls were afraid of him. But some of them even liked his company as he was always generous when it comes to young girls. Spending a small amount of money at the cost of having a little fun was not a big deal for the rich filth like him. Pia used to loathe him to the extend that if he will die she most probably would distribute sweets throughout the orphanage . He was paying quite a regular visits but this time he has showed up his ugly face after almost five months. As soon as he saw Pia, he got frightened and was shivering badly.

"Please don't do anything to me please I ermm I have changed I swear. I just came here to apologise as this is your last day here" he was sweating profusely unable to look directly into Pia's eyes.

She herself was confused at his behaviour. Then she recalled the incident that transpired five months ago and finally understood the reason and said sternly with the same cold expressions she give to everyone "Jonathan stop shivering and stand still" With this he stood still in attention position as in Hitler is ordering him something and if he will defy him , he will be beheaded then and there. She continue "I can never forgive you . what you tried to do was something so disgusting that I can't even mouth it. If you are serious about seeking my forgiveness then you have to earn it. After all you owe it to many girls whom you have harassed and used badly. Try being a human being first. I have nothing else to give to you except my best wishes for a good future where you will respect woman rather than thinking them as just ur playtoy"

He stood still there dumbfounded with tears running out of his big black eyes. Yes "The Jonathan" , the tough bad guy was crying. He has got everything even the illegitimate things he wanted in his life. But a girl has refused to grant him forgiveness . "That's truly what I deserve" he thought sadly.

She was leaving and then suddenly turned back "And next time if you try to put ur grubby hands on any girl, just try reminding my face. May be you will spare that poor soul". With this she went away upstairs to her room.

An old frail woman in her 60's wearing the normal sister white cloak witnessed the whole scene. She was livid at Pia. That small bitch has dared to talk with the son of a trustee like this. "You will be punished for this Pia" she looked determined having a devil smile on her face


here i end this part please hit the like button if you genuinely liked it and leave ur precious comments


Edited by shivanirajput - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow nice story plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Da update ws really gud.cont soon nd dnt 4get to pm me.
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Posted: 13 years ago
shivani how were ur exams hun ? btw update was really good 😃awww poor abhay i really feel bad after hearing his story how they died ? n who came to their house ?😕 aww thats so sweet that abhay listens to haseena 😳 what r u planning wid pia what she did wid that guy?😕 update soon n thanks for the pm 😳
take care dear 😳


Edited by cuteteddy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
guys the update is not complete
there is much more to add to it please wait for a while

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update shivani.🤗🤗...really missed u yaar😔...how was ur exams...hope they were good!!😊shivani i really luved d flash back.😳...aww...abhay n maithli were sooo cute😳...luvd their convo...it was magical😳...when maithli said that she felt princess only in his arms...it was sooo romantic.😳..u portrayed them well...wow..those moments they shared together was sooo romantic.☺️...wat did jonathan do 2 piya??...guess he got a slap 4rm piya...for misbehaving with some girl😕...wish piya gets out of d orphanage soon...i soo hate that sister's look...continue soon..m waiting eagerly..😊
Edited by madhuri16 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 2 updated on page 16
i m not feeling well right now so will send the pm's tomorrow after 1pm
Edited by shivanirajput - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update! I absolutely loved the flashback in the past of Abhay and Maithali in the forest! The way you described their love was so beautiful like a fairytale! As for Abhay in the present, I'm sure his belief that he can't love anyone else after Maithali will change when he meets Piya! 😳 I just can't wait till Abhay and Piya meet soon! 😛 Looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
brilliant writing nce more shivani..beautiful style..so is piya maithili?
Edited by abhiora - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow dear awesome update I so loved it yaar.Oh Ametz scene were so romantic.I really feel bad 4 her.Pia is quite cold here.Lets c how 2 cold ppl blend together.Plzz continue😳

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