AN ANGEL OF MINE chapter 5 updtd page30 - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Saphira_flames

Amazing piece of writing! thanks a lot for ur sweet comment The inner turmoils of Abhiya were so well described. thanks yaar i was so afraid that whether i will be able to do justice with their feelings or not The way Abhay apologized and made Piya understand his situation was touching. he has to afterall he just can't let pia suffer like this Continue soon! 😊 will sure do

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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
awesome!i want pia to say all this to jeh in show also!he's too possessive!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: prerna26

Fab update!!!⭐️

Pia is surely going through a lot yaar...When you get something with much difficulty, you fear that you might lose it.
so true abhay is the air she breath the path she walk on a single thought of losing him can make her go mad
Same is the case with Pia. You have expressed their inner turmoil brilliantly.Loved it! thanks a lot i m glad u liked it Continue soon.will sure do Thanks for Pm. my pleasure Good luck!
👍🏼 thanks again

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Posted: 13 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: luvd

Superb shivani. thanks
Bechara jeh ushki toh bolti hi baand hogayi. ya i always wanted pia to thrash jai for his over possessiveness
Piya toh full to sherni bangayi thi loved it. i want her to be like this only after all she has to handle a vampire bf😉
Agree wid u alina...dreamy...fevicol.. ya she is annoying sometimes.
Gf ko manana toh koi abhay se shikhe...aww...that was so romantic.really loved it he has to pia was so furious no other option was left than his famous kiss therapy 😳.thanks 4 d pm my pleasure.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: abhiora

aww!!such a well-written part,shivani!!u described their inner turmoil perfectly..luvd the lil romance btwn them..eagerly waiting 2 c who the nw character is..keep it up n thanx 4 the pm. 🤗


thanks a lot tora ur comments are really precious for me i was so afraid that whether i will be able to express their feelings rightly or not m glad u liked it the new character will be the heart of this ff i am planning to give it a good entry lets see how well it will work
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: madhuri16

Gr8 update shivani.👏👏..thanks a lot luved the way abhay convinced piya😳...beautifully written👏..thanks i was so frightened whether i will be able to do justice with that scene or not.n alinacol😡...thnx 2 ruhi...i never liked ruhi this much.🤗. ya it was ruhi in the show seems to be really happy for alina so i decided to use her .n piya shouting jeh i really luved it😉😆😆... i always wanted her to thrash him for his possessiveness after all at the time of sid she also thrashed abhay even when his intentions were just to save her do update soon, sure i will waiting eagerly😊...n thnx 4 the Pm😊 my pleasure

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Posted: 13 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: peehu24

hey i loved it. Wat a update ya..awesome. U described their turmoil so well. Poor thing they r nt able 2 do anything. I hope al get wel soon. Lovely. Update soon. Thanks for pm


thanks a lot peehu. i hope i did justice in describing their condition
everything will be soon more than fine
thanks for bearing with me

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Posted: 13 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: piyali.1228

wow awesome update.😊 thanks lot

I love the way u expressed Abhiya's luv their love story is eternal i can't fully describe the depth of their love even if i want to

continue soon sure i will

n thanx 4r d pm my pleasure

tc😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: ilove99

awesome!i want pia to say all this to jeh in show also!he's too possessive!


same here i also want pia to thrash jai
she has really thrashed poor abhay when he asked her to stay away from sid jai should get the same treatment

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Shivani...
Lovely update...
Poor Piya is really hurt...
So Abhay will join as Piya's bodyguard????
Loved the way Abhay consoled Piya...
U described everything so well...
Thanx for the pm...
N Im so sorry for the late reply...
Love u...
Renuka...

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