AN ANGEL OF MINE chapter 5 updtd page30 - Page 6

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

wow yaar awesome update. thanks shrishti. I love the way u expressed Abhiya's inner turmoil. i just wanted to show how much they are suffering because they can't be together in front of the world.They both luv each other & wnt 2 spent their entire life but destiny always play a joke on thm. so true everyone is so hellbent into separating them .I hope soon Abhay tell truth 2 Alina & v can c happy Abhiya😳 alina will soon know the truth but i m afraid its not abhay who will tell her

wow awesome update.😊

I love the way u expressed Abhiya's luv

continue soon

n thanx 4r d pm

tc😊

Originally posted by: Sivaranjani

Hey Shivani.. Nice update. thanks yaar. It not long though but not short even!!.. I really loved it. i can't write more than this i am very slow at typing it take almost my full day to prepare for an update and then type it. The way you conveyed Pia's feelings.. I felt the same while i watched the show..i always want pia to be more agressive rather than just consenting to everything abhay says like a poor little lamb Finally Abhiya had a moment there.😳. ya i hope i have done justice with that scene
I liked the way u narrated about Alina.. Her dreamy eyes, Fevicol..😆 alina is sweet in a way but i m really annoyed by the way she keeps on clinging to abhay

Pm me dear while you update next!! u r already in my pm list And eager to know the new character and the twist.. Please update soon!! i m more eager to write about it i will update pretty soon