AN ANGEL OF MINE chapter 5 updtd page30 - Page 9

Originally posted by: pkyekrox

nyc!!

Originally posted by: heena_mehta

dat was truy amazing shivani!! thanks a lot heena to take some time out of ur hectic schedule in reading my crap

loved it!! thanks

u av desribed abhay-pia's emotions beautifully!!! m glad u like it

jay -pia fight, i reli wish, something like this happens in serial also!!! same here i always wanted it

believe me shivani, u r very good writer!!! now i m feeling really shy😳😆

i loved very dialouge of abhay-pia's convo n then last u put it so smoothly!!

mindblwoing!! thanks yaar i was so afraid whether i will be able to do justice in depicting their eternal love and their yearnings for each other

do continue soon i will n thanx for d pm😊 my pleasure

Originally posted by: princess_xeelan

This is really nice Shivani 👏 👏 thanks a lot tanzie i didn't pm u last time becoz i was so afraid that a gr8 writer like u would like to read my post or not. thanks a lot for reading a comment from u means a lot to me afterall ur one of my favourite writers on the forum ,my inspiration

I loved the way you described Abhay and Piya's emotional turmoil 👏 m glad u like it and Piya bajaoing Jeh was really good...much needed I should say... i also think the same way thats why i added it and Abhiya romance...superb... real romance is still to come thanks for the PM dear...anytime continue soon 😳 i will for sure

Originally posted by: love-piya-abhay

nice one yaar

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu

Nice update shivani loved it 👏sorry for the late comment

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu

shivani i have thought about it very deeply yaar and i am no more in a mood to continue it sorry for that

Originally posted by: abhayarsh

nyc1 . . .Please add me to your pm list