Book 2::Eternally Waiting 4 U Update3 JAN 12 PG149

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shivanirajput

@shivanirajput

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#641

Originally posted by: matwamango
I thought U said it was A TWISTED LOVE that was your favourite?
Both Abhay and Pia are ONE ENTITY. One cannot survive without the other. They refuse to and its for this reason Abhay can never shake Pia or she him. They are one BEING. So their HUNGER for each other is the same unlike in the show where ABHAY'S love for PIA far outweighs any LOVE PIA has for ABHAY. I prefer to balance this relationship evenly in my writing. ABHAY'S SOULMATE cannot be so flimsy or a wreck. She will be STRONG. Like Abhay is only they have strengths and weaknesses that compliment each other
Deepnaita has her death waiting for her so she's got a short life ahead of her anyway.
Abhay's humanity has its cure and he'll fight hard to keep it.

hey twisted love will always be my favourite but this one comes after that
infact i even loved soulmates to the core
but they both r finished and only this one is running right now and i have huge expectations from it
i have earlier also requested u to continue this
thanks for listening to our request

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sohini

@sohiniluvsmusic

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#642

Awesome update aysha it was amazing nd piya is so stubborn nd knows her abhay too well nd finally she succeded to seduce him abhiya part was vry hot nd where is alina?nd felt vry bad for abhay he is fighting with his emotions nd cn't control his thirst sry cn't write long commnt continue soon thanks for the pm nd tc

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STUTI KANSAL

@arunsunita_gm

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#643

pia ka stomach jo sore hai i think she is pregnant wth abhays child hainaaa ?????!!!!!!!😊

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Aysha

@matwamango

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#644

:::Precap 33:::Killing me Softly:::

Abhay was surrounded fell to the ground feeling the burn to his scarred flesh. The balm with the white oak tree's ashes began to absorb into Abhay's system. He needed to find relief somehow. He had to heal himself. Abhay needed blood and fast. Sid sniggered out of the darkness smirking at his brothers pitiful situation. He saw those black eyes that had once plagued him long time ago but now the hunger no longer bothered him. Giving into temptation eased this thirst in time but his brother wanted to fight against his nature.

Sid knelt down mocking his brother-Poor little brother! I find U in the most wretched of places. U are always so low Abhay. Always fighting an impossible fight. U are satan itself so why are U bothering to fight a lost battle. Give in brother. It will make it easier for me not to kill U. Join us.

Abhay screamed in agony-Get away from me. I'm nothing like U. Nothing!

Sid taunted Abhay-Baby brothers in denial. We'll sort this out in no time. U need blood Abhay. I know just the person for it.

Jeh had felt his Mother's dying soul. He'd raced to the scene to find Sid and Abhay deep in conversation with each other. Then he scanned his eyes darting them to his Mothers body. She was dead but her soul was still in tact. Jeh had to get her out of there. Everything was a blur when Sid winked at Jeh and tore the stake out of Deepanita causing her permanent death. Jeh saw red and attacked the vampire brothers.

Pia by then had already made her way into the Jungle in search of Abhay. She had to get to him before he killed anyone. Pia couldn't lose anyone else. On her way Pia bumped into Alina looking a little frazzled and a little pensive.

Alina to Abhay-Pia i was just on my way to Abhay. (She'd sniffed Abhay's scent all over Pia) Is he still at home? I need to meet with him ASAP.

Pia shook her head-I am looking for him Alina. U said U were a healer. Abhay needs help. How can U heal Abhay; Alina when he's not...

Alina blurted out too soon-Human? I have gifts Pia. I know what Abhay is. We always did. My family know everything about him Pia. I don't have time. Abhay's in danger.

Pia and Alina both ran in search of Abhay.

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anjali

@adnilover

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#645

finally alina is back but I hope abay doesnt hurt piya in his condition

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Akshita

@Akshi0019

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#646

nyc dr!!! so alina is coming 3 help abhay!!!

i hope alina n pia help 2 get back d real abhay!!!!

cont soon...

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#647

Plz update soon 😊 Waiting to read it...

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#648

Is it done?

hope alina helps abhay now and realize Sid and Metz evilness

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Rehma

@Miracle_leo

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#649

Just now read part30,part31 n part32 sorry for late reply but its awesome👏 update ayesha.In part30 loved abhiya scenes n wow😉 mishu ne kya jawab diya jeh ko,just loved to see dat misha abhiya ke saath hai.loved to see pia n misha bonding,wow abhay came to meet pia at home when they r alone,loved abhiya romance😍,sach main yar kya hot😍😍 update di part30 ki,abhiya became one.In part31 what happen to abhay now becos of maithali,sid n alina ki wajase se abhay become monster n killed panchi too,dont know how pia will react to it,i hope pia n alina abhay ki help kare.In part32 depanita is after abhay apne bete ka badla lena chahti hai,aww poor abhay kya haal hogaya hai uska.abhay pia ki safety ke liye usse door rakhna chahta hai apne aapse but .pia is stubborn.loved abhiya hot😍 romantic passionate loved to eachother its mindblowing just loved it soo much,finally pia loved win over abhay protection towards pia n abhay hamesha pia se haar jata hai.pia stomach was swollen kuch garbad hai😉,abhay run away from pia just to save her.pia also went after pia,i wish she saved abhay uske thirst ko khatam kare.There will be big fight between deepanita n abhay,arnab is watching them,sid n maithali is also here,what happen next plz continue soon.

Edited by Miracle_leo - 13 years ago

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visma

@kuttu

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#650

This was too short. So now Alina and Pia to save Abhay. Wonder what Alina will have to say to Sid. And will abhay come to knwo the master mind behind him loosing his humanity as Sid. Pia sure is in for some big shock. and what has happened to Arnab

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