Book 2::Eternally Waiting 4 U Update3 JAN 12 PG149 - Page 66

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Miracle_leo

Just now read part30,part31 n part32 sorry for late reply but its awesome👏 update ayesha.In part30 loved abhiya scenes n wow😉 mishu ne kya jawab diya jeh ko,just loved to see dat misha abhiya ke saath hai.loved to see pia n misha bonding,wow abhay came to meet pia at home when they r alone,loved abhiya romance😍,sach main yar kya hot😍😍 update di part30 ki,abhiya became one.In part31 what happen to abhay now becos of maithali,sid n alina ki wajase se abhay become monster n killed panchi too,dont know how pia will react to it,i hope pia n alina abhay ki help kare.In part32 depanita is after abhay apne bete ka badla lena chahti hai,aww poor abhay kya haal hogaya hai uska.abhay pia ki safety ke liye usse door rakhna chahta hai apne aapse but .pia is stubborn.loved abhiya hot😍 romantic passionate loved to eachother its mindblowing just loved it soo much,finally pia loved win over abhay protection towards pia n abhay hamesha pia se haar jata hai.pia stomach was swollen kuch garbad hai😉,abhay run away from pia just to save her.pia also went after pia,i wish she saved abhay uske thirst ko khatam kare.There will be big fight between deepanita n abhay,arnab is watching them,sid n maithali is also here,what happen next plz continue soon.

Its ok yaar. Better being late than never and U know what my motto is read when U can😆 Its not going anywhere.
Misha wasn't given her due on the show which is why she has an active part on my FF.
ABHIYA R a PASSIONATE couple so it was a given with Pia's seduction Mission to break down ABHAY'S defences would prevail after all Pia can do what no woman can do to ABHAY which is make him bow down to her LOVE because she paralyses him to the extent of melting in her arms.
Abhay can try to shoo Pia as much as he wants but Pia won't accept defeat from ABHAY so soon its her lifes mission to hound ABHAY till he gives her what she wants which is himself. After all ABHAY ki haar main hi Pia ki Jeet hai so in effect ABHIYA win through their darkest moments. Abhiya were never about having a smooth ride. They are about an IMPOSSIBLE LOVE made POSSIBLE because of their Unspoken BOND invisble cord that binds them FOREVER.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Whew since i dont know when u will update i read it from start one more time. I am waiting the precap is making me more impatient.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: snitchseeker

Whew since i dont know when u will update i read it from start one more time. I am waiting the precap is making me more impatient.

Update coming up today i need 2 hours to write it😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Eternally waiting for the update:-) i am snigdha. Naam to nahi suna hoga:-P
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Posted: 13 years ago

:::Update 33:::Killing me Softly:::

The excruciating burning sensation had blinded Abhay from thinking logically soldiering on clutching the ground to stop him from tearing any humans nearby namely Arnab Dobrial and then he could smell a few more humans in the same proximity. Girls to be in fact! His mind zonked out by the need for blood. The thirst was all he could feel and his skin was on fire. Damn Sid and his stupid gloating was p*****g him off. Abhay had a short fuse right now wishing to snap his brothers neck and punch his lights out. Sid was deliriously overjoyed at Abhay's mental state picking up the intensity of need flashing Abhay his dazzling smug grin.

Sid brought out a girl he'd compelled forward-Here Abhay let me be of service to U. I'll make this easier on U. Just snap the b*****s neck and drink to your hearts content. Your wounds will heal and then we can finish this mutt (Fighting off Jeh with one hand) Who i might add has been a pain in the backside. Poor Alina having to deal with this retard and his insults is a disgrace.
Jeh pushed Sid off of him tending to his Mother's dead body screaming in unheard of animal howl only derived from raw emotional bereavement.
Abhay spat in pain-Go crawl back into the hole U came from Sid.
Sid smirked shoving the girl in Abhay's face-Now, Now is this any way to talk to your elder brother? (Slashes the girls neck for Abhay with his sharp nails completely enthralled by his brothers monstrosity making him feel pride in the evilness he saw in Abhay's eyes. No it wasn't evil more like the hunger had gotten the better of Abhay meaning it wasn't long till his brother would lose his humanity forever) Its not easy is it fighting your predatory instincts Abhay especially after you've tasted the real thing. (Made Abhay's lips touch the girls deep red liquid gold)
Abhay's eyes turned black losing its colour and gave into temptation biting deep into the girls artery and sucking the life out of her until not a drop of blood was left inside of her. Abhay let go of her lifeless body feeling the thirst stir inside of him again. Jeh watched Abhay in disgust at the leech's self restraint. He was weak and managed to kill his mother. Jeh had to get his army here and finish Abhay off because right now Sid was on Abhay's side and from the sound of it so was his stupid idiotic sister. Abhay gazed at the damage he'd done and then saw his worst nightmare before him. Maithali's icy blues sent Abhay over the edge with her own group of girls she'd brought as gifts. Maithali's eyes drank in Abhay's intoxicated stated while Arna froze out of shock dialling his contacts. The Hunters had to get here fast before all hell broke loose.

Maithali saw Jeh knelt down holding his mother smiling brillianty at the loser then back to Abhay like she was floating on air. Sid mustered a stammering Maiathli like he was reverted back to being the lovesick Sidharth the human. Maithali wasn't interested in Sid but in Abhay but there was no harm in stringing both men for the ride. It boosted her ego knowing the effect she had on both men. Maithali would now have Abhayendra as her co-ruler and Sid would be their companion together forever. For now Maithali had to keep feeding Abhay till all he was consumed by was the bloodlust. Only then would Abhay kill Pia his so called greatest Love. Maithali was fully aware of Pia making her way here. This was her grand opportunity to finish the Accident prone bumbling fool making her Abhay's supper would be the icing on the cake. Pia had eaten most of Abhay's precious time with her idiocy gaving to save the human wench that stole Abhayendra from Maithali. This insolence had to be removed from Maithali's way for good and plying Abhay with the goods would provide her with a powerful ABHAY for Pia's blood had potent qualities in there thanks to her looking like no Maithali refused to say herself sickening her that a human shares any resemblence with her filling hatred into Maithali's very being.

Maithali flashed Abhay and Sid with her provocative smirk huskily arousing their senses-Abhayendra. My love U are finally worthy of becoming Maithali's Prince of Darkness (Ignoring Sidharth's gaping eyes and his distaste at Maithali's blatant attempt to flirting with Abhay) Look what i've brought for U my Love? (Give's Abhay the girls) Drink till U can drink no more Abhay. Feed my love. Blood is our Ecstasy baby. Together we will rule over these insects.
Abhay tried ti fight but the blood sang to him and he started ripping through the flesh drainking each girl making Abhay stronger than ever. The blood not only gave Abhay power but it took away all of his weaknesses. The more he drank the more he craved. He didn't care about anything for a fraction of the hour passing by him. Abhay didn't even care that Jeh had begun transforming before the vampires because he wanted to exact revenge on Jeh for attacking him but unlike Jeh; Abhay wanted to fight a battle with Jeh in his fullest form at his strongest.

By then Pia had arrived with Alina to see for herself her worst fears had come to life. Abhay had given himself over to his weakness drinking from another girl whose eyes haunted Pia. If this wasn't bad enough Maithali was back stroking Abhay like he was hers forever. Sid was back looking his pasty arrogant self only this time he appeared lost for words watching his horror become reality. Pia saw Jeh's truth frightening the living daylights out of her then snatched her hands away from Alina realising this heavy truth of Alina being one of them. The very thing that destroyed Pia's peace a year ago taking away Abhay from her.

Abhay roughly threw the lifeless body to one side. This time Maithali paced to Arnab dragging the scared human before Abhay-Now try this vintage nosy old wannabe Sherlock Holmes Abhay. He knows about us we must end this human before he brings our downfall baby.
Abhay sneered at Arnab's wide eyes grabbing him by the throat-With pleasure.
Pia saw Abhay about to take a bite out of her father with a blood curdling scream-Nooo!!!!!!!!!
Arnab's body fought to get free-Pia run beta run!!!!!!!!!!!!! Abhay U don't want...

Too late. Abhay had given in viciously drying him quenching his never-ending thirst. Arnab's life force fuelled Abhay deeper into his true Vampire sardonic form curling his lips showing his insatiable need to feed had only just begun. Pia tried to move Abhay off of her father but it was all in vain. Abhay clung to Arnab while Maithali allowed Pia to watch this nightmare unfolding.

Pia cried helplessly-Please Abhay let my Dad go!
Maithali hissed with venom pouring out of her-This is what U deserve Pia to be all alone. Abhay killed your sister now your father. U can't still want him after what he did to U Pia. U can't be so shameless to still love him.
Alina spoke up for Abhay-Pia this was all their planning. I am trying to atone for my part in this. I slipped Abhay human blood into his drink and then Maithali did the rest. Abhay fought but when U have Maithali its difficult.
Pia's tears for her father were lost on Abhay then saw Jeh again this time he was joined by more werewolves touching Abhay's cold skin-Abhay what have U done? (Disbelief filled her eyes as she clutched her stomach with one hand. Abhay had destroyed everything. He'd turned her world upside down all in one night. Pia had no rational thought other than saving Abhay. she didn't know how but she'd lost too much.)

Abhay felt Pia's trembling shaky hands on his skin. His eyes grew dark losing sight of who was in front of him. Pia's scent drove him crazy with need. Abhay saw the repulsion in Pia's eyes only adding to his hunger. Pia tentatively tried to pry Abhay away from Maithali but her tears made her vision a little blurry hearing the groans of pleasure rippling through Abhay. Pia's heart ached for Abhay and what these animals had done to her Angel. Her Abhay had locked himself away to protect her and now he was staring at her like she was the tastiest drink he'd ever laid eyes on. Pia had to get Abhay away from them all.

Maithali saw Pia's colour drain gloating at Pia;s state. Sid tried o get to Maithali but she shook him away holding Abhay. Sid was completely broken inside feeling his empty heart shatter. Alina clenched her fist at the sorry sight of Sid. She wanted to punch his sorry lights out for playing with her heart. Sid then gazed into Alina's eyes and saw the same look in her eyes confusing him further. Sid couldn't understand what this was he was experiencing? Why did he care if Alina's heart broke? Sid loved Maithali only then why did it now bother him what she thought of him?

Maithali to Abhay-Now finish Pia off for good Abhayendra. Her blood will give U immense Power my love. U must kill her to garner the power U need to be my equal baby. (Maithali knelt down licking Abhay's lips with hers antagonizing Pia further) Kill her.

Pia let go of Abhay running. This was her only option to get Abhay away from them. She had to reach out to the lover in Abhay. Pia stood up letting go of Abhay then one last look at her father and ran like she'd never run in her life. Pia had kept a little secret from Abhay maybe this would save Abhay.

Abhay wasn't in his right mind and allowed Pia to run. Chasing her would be fun he thought. Jeh and his werewolves followed Abhay's trail only to be stopped in their tracks by Maithali and Sid. Alina was torn by 3 directions go after Abhay or protect her clan or Sid? She owed Abhay so the first option was what she'd decided on. Alina's heart betrayed her, her brother was selfish to the core and Abhay was the only person who'd given himself to her fully trusting in her. Alina morphed into her werewolf form and tracked Abhay behind to save him from making the biggest mistake of his life.

Sid started taking as many werewolves down as possible with Maithali. Sid would rather finish baby brother himself than let werewolves do the job. While Maithali would never allow one werewolf to lay a finger on her Abhayendra. Both were enough to finish as many as possible. Jeh ordered his pups to back off mentally to his pack.

Back to Pia she'd run out of energy. Pis prayed not for herself but for the new life inside of her. Pia needed Abhay back. Could she forgive Abhay for what he'd done was another matter? The lover inside of her only wanted Abhay back fighting fit protecting her. Pia hurt herself gashing her skin against the bark of a tress wincing in pain. Pia prayed Abhay returned back. Pia was cornered by Abhay

Abhay held a breathless Pia still watching her shocked eyes feeling nothing. He bore his fangs glimmering pearl white at Pia-Is this all U had left?
Pia had no fear for what Abhay was about to do but instincts took over-Abhay (holds his hand bringing it to her chest making him feel every beat of her heart) Feel it Abhay. (Comes closer to him daring him back) Feel my breath against your skin. (Takes Abhay by surprise by crushing her mouth against his. It was an act of desperation. Talking to Abhay was useless not if he took no notice of her before when he'd brutally...Just give Pia is all U can do for Abhay. Pia had felt Abhay's mouth taking everything she had to give him moaning and graoning in pleasure of tasting her mouth. Emotionally draining out Pia's unconditional love for him began taming the beast within him)

Abhay almost forgot what he was doing with Pia just reverting back to his old self momentarily greedily savouring Pia's mouth agisnt his. Abhay's hands' had gripped Pia's hair forcing their faces to collide. Pia let a groan escape her and then moved his hand that lay on her heart slowly to her wiast making it rest against her abdomen.

Pia could no longer kiss Abhay. Her oxygen had run low needing to break away from him but Abhay kept his hold on her. Pia pushed him gently tears trickling down her cheek bringing Abhay back to his senses.

Abhay remembered his thirst again tightening his hold against Pia-Pia, i need...
Pia felt Abhay's after-effects on her sore mouth-Fight your needs Abhay before U kill everything. You've already taken My Father from me. My sister. Now U want to take away my future. (Places his hands firmly against her swollen stomach) This is what i've been keeping from U. I didn't want this to come out like this but you've obviously given up on me.
Abhay shocked to the core-Pia i don't understand.
Pia through all of her pain emotionally pleaded-I still love U Abhay despite everything you've put me through. I shouldn't but i do. Don't take my unborn down with U. I beg U come back to me Abhay. Don't let her win. Don't let the demon inside of U win. I need my Angel back Abhay. I need him not for my sake but for our Baby's sake Abhay. Bring back my Angel Abhay. U can fight this Abhay before U permanently take my reason for living because i can't do this alone.
Abhay had his world fall before him. His Pia was begging him to spare her for their baby. Abhay fell to the ground wavering. Pia lifted her top to show Abhay her small bump-Pia, I'm sorry!!!!
Pia felt Abhay's lips touch her stomach and then felt wetness. Abhay's tears were shed in red colour-This is the result of our Love Abhay. We made this happen.
Abhay cried feeling remorse and crippled by the heightened emotional overkill to the extreme take over him-What have i done Pia? I don't know if i can come back.
Pia promised Abhay-I will help U Abhay every step of the way.

Alina finally arrived to see Abhay about to give in. Pia had won this round and Alina was relived until she saw Maithali and Sid heading in Abhay's direction looking very p****d off.

Pia clung on to Abhay fearing they'd take him away from her but Abhay kept Pia behind him ready to ward them off of her. He didn't trust himself not to hurt her. Then Jeh entered taking Pia away from Abhay. Alina out of panic blasted Maithali, Sid away from Abhay but Jeh got away with a screaming Pia who locked her away in a room all on her own.
Edited by matwamango - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
😎😎i knew it...pia is pregnant ...ayshu ayshu ayshu... lovely update...sid and metz... pls yaar kill... them off ...soon they are so evil...sid ke saath jo hua sahi hua... he didnt love alina ...only used her na ...metz also did the same i am happy ...😉abhay is turning... a danger ripper yaar... hope we get old abhay back...and arnab killed😆show me na sahi... yaha pe to mara😆... felt bad for pia... becahre ke samne... uska papa mara...😭and the way pia revealed ...her pregnancy perfect time...👏 but jay has taken pia... 😡ab kya hoga update soon... 😛🤗
Edited by strawberryrashu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh dear, hope pia remains alright. waiting the angel abhay to return. last few updates were too much for me. honestly cant see evil abhay.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ohh my... Ripper Abhay's pain was soo deep It was veryy beautifully written like I could picture it 👏
Im so glad Piya could make it or I sud say their unborn baby did 😃 I hope he will come around soon... I felt bad for Alina bcoz she really loved Sid and Metz...ufff 😡
for the first time, I wish some1 could kill metz.. and now wat will Jeh do with Piya? 😕
superbb update Ayesha 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowoowow
continueee sooon
itsss gettting shooo interestinggg lovely

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