Beshrmi FF: Abhiya Ka Bacha! Maithli nay chori ki! - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: pkyekrox

pia waked up the nxt morining, crying and then throws up! chandeena are worried and abhay tries evrythng to stop it...pia doesnt hv fever or anyhtng lk tht wen chandeena chkd n then, abhay gts pregnancy test...pia is found to be pregnant!! she kisses abhay in their room and they share beautiful moments 2gether!!


This Is a Wonderful IDEA/Piece of writing you have introduced. I suggest it would be brilliant if you could post this great idea to the CVS Email address. They would read and maybe who knows thy could get inspired by this IDEA and add it to their PLOT/SCRIPT to make the Show move further on. I hoping that the CVS bring the KHURANAS SAGA to an end and instead move on with the ABHAY-PIA-MAITHALI love track . I am hoping the CVS will now reunite Abhay & Pia soon on the show.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: winxricha

i'll try to continue ...if it comes out bad .sorry in advance...
abhay was in his most happiest moments, the second best thing happened to him after piya...his very own child...his love for piya grew even more...
piya:tum khush toh ho na abhay!!!!
abhay: khush m on top of the world.aaj tumne mujhe saari khushiyaan de di i feel like i am the best person on this earth...
piya: you are wrong mr raichand..sirf tum kyun iss most happiest persons ki list main toh aaj main bhi top pe hoon.
abhay:toh mrs piya raichand aaj iss happy happy couple ko kucch toh special karna chahiye...n thn he hugs piya tighly n picks up piya in his arms n begins to swing her around
(piya too could feel the love inside her...jst thn abhay remembers wat hassina told him earlier n his expressions turns tense, he puts piya on the bed n turns towards the window watching the jungle )
piya: wat happened abhay..tum ekdam se chup kyun ho gaye
abhay:kuch nhi piya...(his pjone rings) sorry piya main bs abhi aata hoon.
(piya senses that something is sure wrong..the abhay hurriedly brought back piya from paris ...she could still remember abhay how abhay was totally blanked out wen he told her that they had to leave paris immediatly without even telling her why...even chand n hassina too had gotten more careful towards her
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This is a Wonderful IDEA/Piece of writing you have introduced. I suggest it would be brilliant if you could post this great idea to the CVS. They could read it and maybe who knows they could get inspired by this IDEA and could add it to their PLOT/SCRIPT to make the Show more romantic & interesting & make it move further on. I hoping that the CVS bring the KHURANAS SAGA to an end and instead move on with the ABHAY-PIA-MAITHALI love track .
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: AbhiyaFan_Qusim

Hello Friends!


This is a FF of Abhiya containing alot of fun.. We have done a very good job from beginning.. Now Its time for Maithli back!

Do take part in it:) Click like button too..




Piya wants to get closer to Abhay on a stormy night but Abhay want her to be safe from him. But Unable to control his men inside, he and Piya spend a night together, Piya is very happy to be with Abhay. Jay see them together on that night and T come to know about it from Jay and she makes a vidoe of Abhay and Piya together in that hut. Khurrana attack Abhay as werewolf so the raichand family turn themselve to vampires and fight. Piya faints seeing this.There is a fight between the Raichands and Khurranas, Alina control everything saying that her mother is wrong and Abhay is innocent he didn't killed their bro. Neel and Jay feel sorry. They all grab Deepu and throw her. Piya gets her memory back when she opens her eyes back. Abhay with his vision power get to know about this and break down T's mobile but Misha gets the memory card later. She thinks that it is of T so she decide to have some fun by showing her vidoes to the all college. But Abhay and Piya vidoe is shown instead. Piya runs away from the college. Abhay follows her, Abhay takes her to the hotel and promise her that he will not get close to him in that night. In the morning Abhay tell Piya that they will marry to clear this all. So they do. Abhay and Piya lie that they were already married when they spend a night together so T was wrong in recording it. College is very sorry, Abhay and Piya is also accepted by Dobriyals and Raichands. When Panchi gets to know about it, she fails Piya's car break so she can kill her as she love Abhay but Abhay came to know about it by his vision power and he stops it. Abhay then relieve Panchi's intentions infront of every one. Panchi is kicked out of the house and spend to Jail by Arnab. Piya is very sad but Abhay makes her happy. They spend their sohgrat together, Piya thinking to have a baby. But in the morning Abhay says they cannot reproduce. Piya smiles but is hurted. Abhay to make her happy decide to go to honey moon. Piya is excited. They both get ready to go. They both reaches at Paris and are set to enjoy their.They both enjoy alot their by travelling,shopping and etc. But Abhay doesn't let Piya get too close to him as he can lose his control and get lost in Piya, that he don't want to have happen as it is dangerous of Piya sometime. Abhay mets Maithli in Paris and is shocked. Maithli says she is back to became the queen of all vampires by using Piya.Abhay warn her but she says she can even kill Piya. Abhay and Piya return back, Piya suspect something wrong. They both are welcomed by Haseena. Abhay tell Haseena everything. Abhay and Piya are sharing some moments together in the bedroom.


Continue..





This Is a Wonderful IDEA/Piece of writing you have introduced. I suggest it would be brilliant if you could POST this Wonderful IDEA/SCRIPT to the Creatives of the Show. They could read it and maybe who knows they might get inspired by this IDEA and then decide to add this writing to their PLOT/SCRIPT to make the show interesting & romantic to watch than b4 and make the Show move forwards. I hoping that the CVS bring the KHURANAS SAGA to an end and instead move on with the ABHAY-PIA-MAITHALI love track SOON. I want to see some ROMANCE now. Bandh karo LADHAI JAGHDE. I just want to see Abhay&Pia together and nothing else. This KHURANAS rivalry track is Just too sickening and boring. BANDH KARO ISSE
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
THEN PIYA CAME BACK TO ABHAY AND KISSES HIS BACK 😳
SHOCKED ABHAY :WHAT ARE YOU DOING PIYA YOU ???
PIYA (TEARS):WHAT HAPPENED ABHAY IS EVERYTHING OK ?
ABHAY :YOU ARE 🤬

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Posted: 14 years ago
#15
So romantic !!😳
I loved it !!!👏
Edited by priyadhar - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16
WOW!! U DO'IN GR8 JOB..
PLZZ UPDATE SOON...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
piya :what happened ???
abhay :i am bored with you now i want some🤬
piya ;what are you saying ?
abhay :anyways piya today is my date so i am going
piya tears roll down from her face
if you want that i will write continue
prees like bution...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
but she is his wife why he is behaving so rudely, "i am going to a date" what is this mean pia is pregnant with his child, what he wants now, now he wants divorce now. he said he wants his happiness, but from these harsh word he is hurting her so badly in this pregnant condition. well keep it up.
Edited by usha786 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
Abhay starts to move but Piya grabs his hand and slap him!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
piya :what happened ???
abhay :i am bored with you now i want some🤬
"piya ;what are you saying ?
abhay :anyways piya today is my date so i am going
piya tears roll down from her face "


after this pia was crying badly asked abhay, what do you mean abhay, our is contract base marriage,? "tum mere samne other girl ke sath date ki baat kar rahe ho, how dare you to talk me like this" what about this child, or you want divorce from me, or should i think you have granted me permission to be other guy, "agar ye hi sab karna tha, to then why did you get marry with me. what you want to me now. you are talking me like this, you want to date with other girl, you were flirting with air hostess in plane, "jab tum mere samne ye sab karte ho to mere piche se kya karte hoge, abhay you cheated me,she was crying badly, if you enjoy your date with other girl, then i will also go for a date, if you flirt with other girl then i can also flirt other guy, "tumhara mujse man bhar gaya ok. "tumhare man mai jo aa raha wo tum karo, and mere man jo ayega wo mai karoogee, just wait and watch.
Edited by usha786 - 13 years ago

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