::OS::The Chosen One:: 1 OCTOBER pg 41

Pari Gupta

@Pari-Gupta

Dazzler

21

Posted: 14 years ago

#41

awesome update
CWB helped Piya to remember her past was gr8
continue soon
thanks for the PM

Reply

Quote

rashika aggarwal

@rashika27.1997

Navigator

12

Posted: 14 years ago

#42

awesome dear

awesome
waiting for the next
thnx for the pm

Reply

Quote

Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

38

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#43

Awesome 👏 Loved it. Please continue.

Reply

Quote

Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

Sparkler

30

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#44

Awesum!!

loved it as usual, ayesha!!

u r d best!! :)

Reply

Quote

Aysha

@matwamango

Stunner

36

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: PrincessKhizra
Great yara, part was vry gud. Especially piya's convo with CW . V (pkyekians) r craving to c old cute lovly piya, who always lvd abhay to the core of her heart. OMG,,, now i thnk only fics r our hope. Keep it up dear.

This is what we are all craving. The Old Pia with an undying love for Abhay that used to melt him rend-less bowing to Pia's irrevocable love to which Abhay could never back away from

Reply

Quote

Aysha

@matwamango

Stunner

36

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Deepi20
Super awesome start! So Piya is the chosen one, hopefully she will play a huge part in ending this feud between the vampires and the werewolves! I hope Piya acts on the Chai Wala Baba's advice and goes and gets her Abhay! Eagerly waiting for the next update! Continue soon 😊

Pia is partially the key and so are Abina

Reply

Quote

Aysha

@matwamango

Stunner

36

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Eowyn
This is very much related to the present track na Aysh...
I loved it when Alina actually wounded her brothers...she needs to grow stronger...
Dipannitha😡 least said the better
Abhay is in his usual sacrificial mode only he can't run away from this responsibility...
Piya's meeting with CWB (Liked him very much😆) was superb...
He is right about Piya "all questions an no action"
So she is chosen to end an age old war...interesting
Kudos for this new one Aysha👏

I wasn't going to start from scratch yaar. Keep the main principles of the track but add my twist to it.

Alina will grow during her phase with Abhay drawing strength from him and he will learn a little something from Alina.

Pia has been about all talk and no walk. So in this shot she'll come good and retrace her steps.

Reply

Quote

Aysha

@matwamango

Stunner

36

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: pkyek55
Hey!!!Awesome start..OMG u have like 10(or less?)os n ff 2gether...How can u handle it..If I was u I was gonna be dead by now(LOL)...Anyways Loved it..Very brilliant start...Want abhina to be bestties n want someones new entry for Alina..She deserves someone special...She deseves happiness...Plss make someone only for her...

Thanks for d pm...

Continue!!!!

I have 12 OS's to my name and 7 FF's 2 of which are complete and a third A Twisted Love is about to finish. I keep busy and everyone knows how crazed i am on ABHIYA.Alina to gain a man is a mean feat. U might not like where i am taking Alina on this Shot.I am merely exploring possibilities

Reply

Quote

Aysha

@matwamango

Stunner

36

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Selinapiya

Awesome...mindblowing...Chai waala baba...rocks!!🤣..poor Piya is confused...
thankss for the PM..update soon...

Chai wala Baba is the bestPia is always confused nothing new here

Reply

Quote

Aysha

@matwamango

Stunner

36

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#50