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Deepi20

@Deepi20

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Nice update! Looking forward to reading the next update! Continue soon 😊

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aayush1ang3l

@aayush1ang3l

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

piya came to the pool for the classes..she looked very beautiful in her swimsuit. abhay couldnt help glancing at her longingly..he thought what a girl piya is..then he came back to his senses and looked away..piya knew abhay was staring at him but she didnt said anything because she was feeling very nice the way he was looking at her...

misha- so our girl finally finished her make up ha..?
piya- come on misha dnt talk silly..no one do make up before swimming..
misha- accha..? o ya..i knew it..mai toh tumhara iq check kar rahi thi..(both laughs)

kabber- hey...tanushree?? will u swim too...
tanu- yes my baby..i will..
kabeer- oh then hame is pool se 100 feet door rehna chahiye
tanu- kyu?
kabeer- actually jab tum neeche girogi toh saara paani toh upar aa jaaega nd hum sab ka abhi surfing ka mood nahi hai.hehehe
tanu- u nonsense dumbo freak..i will sue you..
kabeer (acting)- i will sue you..(laughs)

coach- so students lets do the first lesson of our swimming ...we wil first try with air tubes...

tanu- air tubes ha.?? how tacky..these tubes is so yuks..it wont suit me...
hey coach(in a singing tone) actually these tubes r nt just made for me..mai toh inke bina bhi aaram se swim kar sakti hu..so pls inhe toh mujhse door hi rakhna
misha- ya ya..door hi rakhnge..school vaalo ko apna nuksaan thodi na karna hai..agr tum inhe pehnogi toh bechari tubes fat jaaegi..
(everyone laughs at tanu)
tanu- huh ..u dnt my swimming skills .maine london se training li thi..u just dnt knw...abhi pool mai toh chalu dikhati hu..
misha- yes yes madam as u say...i will risk my life...:p

piya with other girls steps on the pool with her airtubes around waist
coach gives them the basic lesson to swim and they were all enjoying..but.
suddenly piya' air tube air started leaking..she didnt knew abt it and she kept standing there..but when enough air came out she began drowning in deep water...
piya- help!help! koi mujhe bachao pls..help!!
all rushed towards piya but she was drowned..

abhay didnt lose a second and he jumpedd into the deep water...

to be continued..till then have patience...hehehe😆

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aayush1ang3l

@aayush1ang3l

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: CleviveDsouza
wow
awesome

great

fantastic

fabulous

excellent

continue soon

plz pm me

thnx a lot...u boost up my confidence 😊😊
actually m new here..i dnt abt all features...whts this pm..? 😳

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aayush1ang3l

@aayush1ang3l

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: sunu123
hey aayush😃awesome start yaar👏👏👏...attraction at first sight...loved it...precap really sounds interesting...
btw why u r making different thread to post ur chapter...i mean chapter one is on different thread n chapter 2 also...u can make in one thread also naa...
plz update soon n add me in ur pm list...hav anice dayluv usunita

thnx a lot siso 😳😳😊😊

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sunita satardekar

@sunu123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

hey ayush😃

awesome update yaar👏👏👏...loved misha n kabir...they r too much😆😆😆😆...i know abhay will save her😳😳😳...plz update soon...n thnx for pmhav anice dayluv usunita

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Deepi20

@Deepi20

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Nice update! Yayy, Abhay is going to save Piya! 😊 Looking forward to the next update! Continue soon 😊

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shivanirajput

@shivanirajput

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

nice update
thanks for pm and update soon

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aayush1ang3l

@aayush1ang3l

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

abhay jumped into the water..there he finds piya unconscious..he holds piya and came out carrying her...piya was still unconscious..water had got inside her nose ears and mouth..
abhay laid her on the floor 😲😲

abhay- open ur eyes piya! come on!
apni aankhen kholo piya plss...hosh mai aao..(worriedly)

misha presses piya's stomach and water came out from her mouth...misha repeated this several imes..but still piya not regaining senses...
she was rushed to medical room..🤢

coach- children pls dnt panic ..pls u all go out fro this room
and abhay u stay here pls.u saved piya ..u need to be there
abhay-ok
nurse came and examines piya's pulse and left..she went to coach..
nurse- this girl cant breathe properly and our nabolizer is damaged ..wht shall we do.
coach- oh my god! no way!! wht can we do nw..
nurse- just assemble all children..all we can do is pray for this child..😭😭😭.

abhay was listening all this..he thought
no way..piya is tarah nahi jaa sakti hai..uff ye insaan bhi na..but mujhe piya ke liye kuch toh karna hoga..he remembers his mon n dad warning ( dnt fall in love or get attracted)
he ignored them..he felt that he should save piya...piya's charm and beauty had somehow found a heart inside this heartless creature and now abhay was being very worried...😍
he then thought a way..but it seemed very awkward..." mouth to mouth air"😍
abhay- i can do it..i have to save piya and i have no option left now..he rushed towards piya ward😳😳

hey all m sorry..i know this is too small but pls abhi k liye itne se kaam chala lo..today i m very bzy...😔
i will continue soon..😊😊
pls wait😉