(update-8 sep) OS My name is Trouble (pg 13, 14) - Page 12

Awesome yaar, but metz death are so tragic, I feel bad for her,

Originally posted by: peehu24

ausum tanzie...fab...what an update...my heart wrenched seeing maithili die..i never thought this would happen to me for metz...beautifully written...just loved it...abhiya are 2gether..their love won...the two soulmates will be 2gether forever...gosh!! what an update 👏

Originally posted by: abhayfan_dishu

great ending tanzie. and your last quote was very nice.

Originally posted by: heena_mehta

finally i m here Welcom swty 🤗

hey tanz first of all a bear hug to u for giving a perfect end to ur os... thanku so much Heenu...u knw how worried abt the ending I was.. i never ended ny of my stories...this 1 was the first 😕

tanz u managed it so well, otherwise wrapping up d whole story in 3-4 updates is reli difficult, although its my personal opinion ,coz when i tried to finish an unknown desire widin 3-4 updates, it never happened😕 hell it is man 😳 i had to skip so many things.. u can imagine 😕 i had to skip the entire trip of abhiya.. i had to skip Alina.. and offcourse what happened to Jeh..i intend to wrt a bit more abt him bt i guess i will do it in some other OS 😕

i loved d whole set up of d story,it was power packed , wid abhay-pia's roller costal emotional ride!!! thanks swtz

i loved dat part specially where pia said dat she wl kill herself...n after dat d way abhay accepted everything!! beautiful!!! threat ke bina Abhay sunta nehi hai 😆 emotional blackmail ka time nehi tha 😛 so direct threat 😃

then whole fight sequence was well written!!!

jay-abhay scene was nicely written

n loved d last part where mathali proved her love!!!

overall as an os this was reli very nice!!! Thanks a lot.. I wanted to give Maithli a proper ending and that was the OS abt 😳

n pls nw update tilld end of timne...i m dying to read nxt part!! i m writing 1st FF now...havnt updated it...thn 2nd one 😳

luv u 🤗 luv u too 🤗

Originally posted by: luvd

Wow tanzie it was awsm n heart wrenching.at least maithli died 4 gud.hats off 4 this update.

Originally posted by: Rozy77

nice ending tanzie👏, action packed😆👍🏼 abhiya's reunion was awesome😳 so touching...

felt bad for jeh, but i guess that's how it was meant to be

atleast metz did 1 good thing🤔

thanks for the pm dear

take care

Originally posted by: missglam

Awesum update tanzie
the ending was superb
beautiful OS
i loved it
though , i didnt like metz but i'm glad dat she saved abhay !
Whooopieee !! Finally. . Abhiya together forever!
Thanks for the pm
tc