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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice dr, Abhiyaa were good, nd that Alina😡ahh...
lovely dr.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh one more OS
wating...😃
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Hey Aysha
loved the new OS. Entirely diff concept..
Amazing update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Fantastic lovely wonderful. Vampire Pia, Evil Alina what more can u ask? Oh yeah Abhiya.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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😲omg...ayesha what an instict of creativity...
nice update...want to read more
with regards
jazz
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: KriYa_life


Hey Aysha
loved the new OS. Entirely diff concept..
Amazing update

I try to test out new ideas on all of my FF's and One Shots
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: snitchseeker

Fantastic lovely wonderful. Vampire Pia, Evil Alina what more can u ask? Oh yeah Abhiya.

A perfect recipe i know but i have more in store
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Originally posted by: dolma.rose

😲omg...ayesha what an instict of creativity...

nice update...want to read more
with regards
jazz

heart heartsThanks for the positivity. I only have maybe one update left on this.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 2-Delerium

Pia arrived to confront Abhay about her recent development. Her head was throbbing with this new found memory of hers. It hurt to think. Pia's fingers trembled on Abhay's buzzer waiting for him to answer. How was Abhay going to get out of this she wondered. Abhay was an expert at getting out of sticky problems. He always had an answer for everything.

Abhay came out from his mansion with his trademark smirk causing Pia's heart to flutter melting into his hypnotic eyes-What is it this time Pia? U want me to stay away or do U want me with U? Isn't this the same question you've asked me. U know i have no time for your absurd ramblings. Where are my in-laws?

Pia frowned as her eyebrows shot up sounding alarmed-What?

Abhay chided Pia-The police where are they? U said i tried to murder U remember or is it your turn now? What have U brought with U to end my life Pia?

Pia shivered out in the cold-Wwhat? I haven'ed called the police on U. They think i'm a joke thanks to your whole cover up conspiracy theory i'm still trying to figure out. Did U blackmail the Khurana's into giving a false alibi?

Abhay waved Pia into his abode-Do U ever think about anything other than what i am up to Pia? Who have i tried to kill or if i've threatened people just because i don't care about U. Just because i am messing U about doesn't mean i'll do the same to others Pia. U are a special nut case i like to take pleasure in hurting just because U let me. In this weather why do U bother wearing skimpy cloathes when U should have a coat on get in before U really have a reason to have me locked up.

Pia stepped inside in the warm dark home with hardly any lights making Pia reminisce the old times when she used to stalk Abhay-Can we go somewhere a little private Abhay? I have to ask U something. Are your parents home?

Abhay nodded-Yeah. U can come to my room Pia That is if U think you'll be safe there and i won't make a move on U.

Pia trusted in Abhay more than her own life-I wasn't born yesterday Abhay.(Abhay led Pia up the stairs to his room with Pia checking out the place like she'd never forgotten it touching Abhay's door) Oak. It smells so familiar Abhay.

Abhay eyes Pia suspiciously shutting the door behind him-What is it U want Pia? If U want me to stay away from your boyfriend Jeh then its my pleasure so long as he doesn't come chasing after me. I think the guy has the hots for me.

Pia sat on Abhay's chair folding her arms-Abhay how serious were we? I mean i know we dated and everyone thought we were meant to be and then we broke up and the resy is all a haze but i have had an epiphany Abhay. Only U can help me solve this.

Abhay nodded trying to decipher Pia but her face gave nothing away but confusion-Shoot my spitfire gun. (Abhay restrained himself) Sorry fire away.

Pia held Abhay's eyes-I keep having these flashes of our time together Abhay. I guess every accident i've had has been a blessing in disguise because i half partial memory back.

Abhay's features turned hard-So?

Pia sighed feeling the disdain-I know what happened to me isn't from normal cause Abhay. Something dark. I know U are my only link to my past. For some reason U keep pushing me away everythime i come close and then U give me scraps of whatever is left inside of U and then U push me away.

Abhay sounding serious now-What are U getting at Pia?

Pia continues looking pale-Why am i mesmerised by U? Why di i feel drawn to U? Why do i feel like if i lost U i'd lose my life? Why is it all about U? Why can't i get over U? Most importantly why do U try so hard to make me hate U? When in actuality its me i hate. The answer is simple U are not human Abhay. For a human can never make another human feel so compelled by their very presence the way U make me feel. Why Uare the only one who has the power to make me take all my defences down. I can argue and fight back with everyone but U. For some reason i can't even lay a hand on U forget hurt U other than get U where it hurts Abhay.

Abhay's mood went dark-Pia U on crack? Are U on some drug? Some kind of high? U were the one who said i tried to kill U the other day and now U claim i have taken over yor mind. Its not my fault there's something wrong with U. A few wires have got mixed up. U can attack me as much as U like. U give as good as U get so what are U talking about.U lashed out at me the other day.

Pia couldn't hold on her overflowing emotions no more-Abhay U are one person whom my heart beats for. A person who I see something as, where as my heart sees just the opposite. A person who is always there for me in my times of trouble, but throws an attitude of indifference when i look up to you. A person deliberately keeping me away from you not hesitating to go to any extent. A person who never keeps himself away from me.

What do you do when you meet such a person. Where the conflict of the mind and heart drives you mad. How can I be at rest, being able to accept either of the reasons. "Yes You love me but wants me to stay away for some reason. No U are indifferent to me" . You would just do anything in the world to bring your true side. Sense/Logic/Reasoning has no place where my heart is involved Abhay. For reason is nothing but just empty hollowness in my gaping mind.

That very person, confesses his love and suddenly I emerge victorious. The very next day, its back to square one. , you ask me to pretend as if nothing happened.

How do you expect one to feel. I remained calm. But that is the calm before a storm Abhay. Fury emerging within myself. I keeps on searching in your eyes demanding for some explanation. But you have just accepted the company of some other girl. She is full of your thoughts that she doesn't hold back talking about you to his arch rival. Suddenly I meet with an accident and Jeh is not to be found and again as always, he is there out of no where, to save me.

Instead, the fury erupted. " Why are you killing me" This is the question which I suppressed within myself when you told me to pretend nothing happened last night. I am still furious, angry, helpless, vulnerable, and a person in this state is hardly sensible and hardly has control over the words. So I just splurt whatever comes to my head. I in return said " You want to kill me, then kill me but don't do this to me. "

Abhay looking at Pia like she was about to lose it-Pia U aren't making any sense to me.

Pia finally answered- There was only the hurt of being rejected while not actually being rejected. I'm only human. I can't take it anymore Abhay. I have reached my limit and i'd rather U just finish me off Abhay. I can't bear it anymore. I swear i'm going crazy. All i see is U. When i said before about accusing U of killing me i meant emotionally Abhay. I'm dying inside and U are revelling in it. So now U know it wasn't personal just me lashing out my frustrations at. U. So to make it easier for U Abhay i brought some things U can used to kill me because i'd rather I die at your hand than anyone else kill me.


Abhay looks at Pia like she was really crazy watching her take some items out of her bag-They have my finger prints all over them so all U need to do is wear a glove. I've brought a rope, a knife, or better yet how about sucking the life out of me Abhay? U can bite me with your fangs.


Abhay backed away-What are U saying Pia?

Pia stood up demanding answers-Are U a vampire Abhay?

Abhay was taken back by Pia's blatant qusetion shocking him still-Now U really have lost it?

Pia strolls to Abhay with determination-So this is just all out of my head is it? Am i just delirious with insanity seeping through me. Am i to believe that i am imagining what i have seen from my memory.

Abhay lied through his teeth-Have U watched a late night movie?

Pia shook her head getting herself ready-I know my own mind Abhay. I also know how good U are at twisting your words from all the lies you've fed me. U love me U love me not. Its not about this any more because i can see from your eyes what is true.

Abhay was no longer tolerating Pia's intrusion-I think U better leave Pia before i call the mental asylum to take U in.

Pia hugged Abhay whispering in his ear-I know how to get the truth out by crook Abhay. Sorry.


Abhay feels the sting of the silver chain touching Abhay making him change dramatically in front of Pia.


Abhay looks on in fear-Pia.


Pia covered her mouth backing away from Abhay-So i was right. U aren't human. U did this to me Abhay. U took away my memories. U took away my life. U took away U from me Abhay. I gotta get away from U.

Abhay chases Pia out of his home holding her as she took the knife with her. He feared she'd do something stupid-Pia! Stop running. Give me the knife back.

Pia spat back in the Jungle-I'm in love with a vampire. Who has made me into a puppet? U made me into what i am. A confused messed up girl. U push me and pull me about. Don't worry i won't tell anyone about U. But i want U to give me my memories back Abhay. I want U to take me back. I know U love me. If U wanted to kill me you'd have done it by now. Either U take me or i fly Abhay. Choice is yours.

Abhay angered by Pia's rationality out the door-U find out i'm a vampire and all U want from me is to be with me by force.

Pia cut her wrist-This is what U drink right Abhay? Then finish me off now.

Abhay got his fangs out and then looked away controlling his inner demon-U win Pia. U win.

Pia kept her eyes on Abhay unafraid of his true form because she'd seen it all in her head and felt safe in his arms despite being in a killers arm-U mean it Abhay? U aren't going to try take my memories again


Abhay healed her with his powers-I'm sorry for putting U through this. I know i've killed U bit by bit inside but we have enemies Pia. I have to keep U safe.

Pia finished-Together we can face any adversity Abhay.

Abhay kissed Pia's wet cheek-Salty. How did U find out Pia?

Pia made a face-I dreamt about us Abhay only my world was turned upside down. I guess my head got tired of being made a laughing stock by U and part of me always suspected but never saw the potential that such beings existed. I saw our love story in reverse Abhay. Why kept pushing me away like i was living through it myself. My unexplained miraculous recoveries to U always being there and always knowing where i am. The biggest clue is this locket Abhay. (Show him it) U gave it to me didn't U. Its protected me ever since i gained conciousness

Abhay nodded-Yes Pia. And now will U stop hating yourself Pia. The only person U were ever meant to hate is me and as always U always have the last laugh. U are wired all wrong.

Pia kissed Abhay back lingering that one kiss to make it last an eternity drowning herself to quench her thirst for Abhay and breaking free finally-I know Abhay and i'm glad because its taken me forever to get U back.


Then they finally embrace.Abhay was no longer alone. He had his Pia back even if she wasn't fully back he got his power source back. No more hiding and pretending. No more hurting the other. But a fear remained with him. How to protect Pia from Jeh and Maithali.

Edited by matwamango - 14 years ago
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NICE UPDATE...😊👏 NICE CONCEPT....YOU ARE REALLY VERY CREATIVE!!!
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