OS Abhiya:She is all mine(part 3 updated pg9)

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Resh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: Gals_11
wowww amazing yaar.. loved all d 3 parts.. u should write more Os.. sorry for d late reply..lol.

thnx a lot sweety.I'll write more OS whenever i'll get time

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

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Posted: 14 years ago

#132

awesum blossom srish!! :)

loved d OS!!

so write sm more Os's!!

wud love 2 read dem!! :)

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Resh

@SheDevil

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: Smitz_LIGHTS999

awesum blossom srish!! :)

loved d OS!!

so write sm more Os's!!

wud love 2 read dem!! :)

Thnx a lot.I'll write more 4 sure😊

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--Signorina--

@--Signorina--

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#134

aaahhh! superb ,amazing dont know what to say👏

out standing

that is what i want 😳

shanti mil gayi😆

thnx for pm n ya write some more osz na you are awesome at writing

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shila

@quarkinsen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: ANTARA-2244
👏 i seriously wish k kaash aisa kuchh serial mein hota!! Par cv's.. 🤢
i liked sugandh-abhay scene,sab log to shayad bhool hi gaye the Piya ki mom ko..loved dat scene where Piya slapped Abhay...i'd love to watch dis scene in near future..
Waise mujhe tumahaari previous dono O.S ki link chahiye..i wana read dem too...plzz!! 😳
i hope k aage vi tumhaari writing padhneko milegi..chalo ff nahi,O.S hi sahi..😊

u r absolutely right

sugandh ko sab bhoolgaye hain

baki rahi piya aur abhay ki romantic scene ki flsh back main hi sahi kabhi to dikha dete

atleast track itni boaring nahin lagti

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Resh

@SheDevil

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: black_scorpio
aaahhh! superb ,amazing dont know what to say👏
out standing

that is what i want 😳

shanti mil gayi😆

thnx for pm n ya write some more osz na you are awesome at writing

Thnx a lot.Oh I m glad u liked it u asked me 2 PM u my link so I have 2 & I m glad tht u liked it😊