The firefly dived into the flame.

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The firefly dived into the flame.

She wondered that why everything and everyone around her had come to standstill. She wondered why Ruhi suddenly seemed an ice statue . She wondered why everyone had frozen in their spot . Her big baby brown eyes turned in the direction of the magnetic field and her innocent face craned to see who and what that shocker was…. And as soon as her eyes fell on that dark knight without an armour but a blinding aura , time stopped. Her heartbeat stopped. Her whole sense of being stopped. While everyone whispered , gushed , wondered and gossiped about the return of Abhay Raichand, Piya's eyes didn't even once leave his face . She didn't even get up from her chair. She didn't even move. You could very well mistake her for a statue amongst them all. Her vision , her eyes, her whole being had frozen because the man she had dreamed about , the man she had lived , the man she had seen , the man she had touched – he had stepped out of her mind and straight into her life.

Abhay knew that everyone's jaw had fallen on the floor and everyone had crowded to get a glimpse of him but……. His eyes , inspite of himself , sought Piya out from the crowd. You can never really tell that why Abhay made it a point to go and meet Piya first. You can only guess that either he wanted to prove himself a first rate beep beep beep to her in the very first meet so that she minds her own business . Or maybe , he could not resist the urge to just go and talk to her once , take a close look at her once. How can you? His face emanated nothing but sheer power , arrogance and calmness of a predator on prowl.

As Abhay walked past everyone , straight to Piya , she slowly rose from her chair , still magnetized and held in the spell of those magical ice-blues. Her heartbeat returned and her eyes blinked. The signature smirk, grin , gait and attitude of Piya Dobriyaal was all gone. She looked like a delicate doll who would crumble under the pressure of Abhay's gaze. That innocent , besotted and virgin face of Piya Jaiswal returned…….I don't think she even heard what Abhay said . She was in her own world where everyone had ceased to exist except Abhay. Unconsciously ,s he almost smiled at him , her eyes totally star-struck and she put her hand forward to shake his hand. Or was it her urge to touch him and feel that he is REAL. But Abhay never took that hand. How could he? He is not here to take her hand , he is not here for Piya. He is here for his father and for Jay.

So, off he went with his armcandy , leaving Piya with a heart that threatened to burst out of her bosom if she didn't see him, if she didn't go after him, if she didn't talk to him. Kicking back the world that loves her, like a firefly , she threw everything to the wind and went after Abhay. Something inside her just pushed her towards Abhay with full force . Yes, her mind has forgotten Abhay……..but her heart still beats because it remembers Abhay.

She didn't listen to anyone and ran after him , sought him out , not even knowing why she wants to stop him. Not knowing that why she is boomeranging to a man who is not even a distant memory. Emotionally charged , emotionally wrought , the girl inside her shattered , fascinated , intrigued , excited and broken , Piya herself will never know that what force made her run behind Abhay like a firefily diving into a bowl of fire.

Piya will never be able to describe or find a logical reason to why she was near tears when she screamed at Abhay to stop.

As Piya's heart cry spilled into Abhay's ears , all his firm arrogant gait , his focused energies and his pretentious smirk went for a toss and his heart lurched. The high cheekbones dived , the ice-blues melted . The sad part is that Piya didn't see the love and emotional turmoil in his eyes when he stopped in his tracks hearing her scream his name. Abhay gathered himself within seconds as he begged Piya inside – Don't make all this more difficult for me than it already is, Piya. Not now. Release me . Let me go.

Then, taking a deep breath , he wore the villain's mask and turned to Piya…..

Her face a myriad of emotions and confusions and her eyes threatening to burst into tears , she looked at him and she questioned him like hitting him with back-to-back tennis balls . You can't walk away from me like this! I want my life back and its you who is the key to all the mysteries in my life. I know that we were in a relationship which is over ….but then, if that is so why were you my savior?

Abhay tilts his face into a ridiculing grin and a typical baddie smirk and says that she is mistaken. He was never there to save her . She needs to go and get a life….

He took the hand of his arm candy and walked past a broken , wounded Piya fighting back her tears.She thinks he abandoned her all over again. She thinks that he hates her. She thinks he has moved on from her. But little does she know that as she stood there , so vulnerable that even the wind could blow her away , his eyes were only for her…… On her…. Like they had always been.

Today you cannot decide what is worse. Abhay choosing his father , his clan and his duties over Piya. Or Piya so rattled , shattered and broken by Abhay's rejection of not only her but her existence as well.

But if I keep the emotional angle and pink sentiments aside, my heart is definitely going to go out to Piya. I mean, I have not seen her in this state even once ever since the leap. She was DEVASTATED . It was almost like she ran after Abhay like we run after our life when threatened with danger. Her heart screamed 'Abhay' but the poor confused soul had no idea that why she was picking up a fight with Abhay . She had no idea why she was crying and pained at Abhay's refusal to warm up to her, instead of answering him back. Piya knew nothing. What she did know was that Abhay had turned her world upside down , within a fraction of a second.

As for Abhay. Well, I can safely say that he was completely in control today , except for that one moment of weakness when Piya came running after him and screamed his name. He has his focus , agenda and mind in place. Yes, Piya runs in his cold blood but Abhay has his priority list set. He knows that he will have to hurt Piya but I think he is ready for it.

Its scary you know, if you think about it. Piya has just seen Abhay and he has hardly spoken to her- yet , she looked as though the whole world had crashed on her when Abhay left her standing alone. Piya Dobriyaal seemed to have flown out of the window today. It was just Abhay's Piya…..

Nobody ever had the power to hurt Piya to the extent of breaking her except Abhay. Nothing has changed.

FOOTNOTE :

Can somebody explain the college gang's behavior to me? When Abhay had 'LEFT' Dehradun , they all were friends with him and they all were on good terms with him. He did nothing to harm anyone of them. Then, what's with the cold attitude and hostility even though he is meeting them all so warmly?Infact , T and Tracker were genuinely glad to have him back in Mount College but their boyfriends whisked them away? If somebody got their behavior , then, please explain it to me. Kabir is excused.

But Abhay did not seem very ruffled by the coldness. Infact , he had a smiling smirk when he saw everyone was running scared of him. Haha. Man! Mount College desperately needed Abhay.

P.S – Is Jay gonna be Abhay's first friend after Maya? I mean, Jay told someone on the phone that he is going to stay very close to Abhay until he kills him. Now, for that to happen, logically, Jay cannot be at loggerheads with Abhay. I mean, its easier to kill your enemy if you befriend them. Just thinking.

P.P.S – YIPPIE! Arnab ko akal aa gayi , finally!


Love and luck always,❤️

GOD bless everyone. 🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Poco...wht a wonderful post...described it sooo beautifully...wow...I dnt evn hv wrds 2 say ...Well I wnt 2 welcomed Sadoo urf Coconut Raichand...bahar se sakht andar se naram...He shwd 2day y we love him sooo mch...the show's soul is bck...in full form...Whn he enterd the clg premises...nt only Piya evn I was jst drooling ovr him...He is Back...4...piya , 4 Jay...4 Chand...n mainly 4 us...

Piya D gone...tata...Piya J in...or else Abhay's piya in...n Again using Abhay's dialogue "Tum sawwal bahut poochti ho"?? It cme 2 my mind whn she was barsofying Q on him...She is back...
Best Reaction given by Misha...bechari ko din me taare dikhne lage...
Bt seriously students ko kya hua...dawai nhi lee kya...😆😆😆...Abhay wishd thm n thn Nooo response...bt he is Abhay...gve his popular smirk...Love u 4 this...is smirk paar to jaan kurbaan...
Finally Arnab ko akal aayi..uske char ki ab band nhi bajegi...thnk god...
N sab res karke chale gaye...😆😆😆...i hv dedicated a song 4 u in ur ff...comment thr...😆😆😆
Edited by zoozoo123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nicely written 👏👏👏...

so happy to d Abhay's Piya again... after all its d real Piya...

AFS behaviur of MC gang is concerned they were nvr so friendly with him...
& d reason of their behaviour 2day with Abhay could that they think Piya suffered due to him ...

he left her when she needed him badly... poor guys don't know that she is alive 'cause of Abhay only...😊


Edited by kaushiki9 - 14 years ago
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LOVELY NAUGHTICA👏👏👏👏

I will not give a bhashan on Abhiya because you have already given one lamba-chaudhha🤣

But about the college gang even i m disappointed and shocked because Abhay did not do anything bad with them. He was in really good terms with them so y dis behaviour? It's weir, shocking and disturbing at the same time😕

And I m happy that Arnab ne mentos khali and apne diamaag ki batti jala li😆

Edited by chakku - 14 years ago
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As always you are the best 👏 👏 Sooo beautifully described... 😊
I was waiting for your post... 😊
Today's episode made me sad and happy at the same time... too happy to see Abhay back in his royal style... arrogant and dont care demeanour... love him for that 😳
But my happiness was obviously shattered to see Piya 😭 Aww...poor helpless Piya... her desperation, confusion, sadness, helplessness everything was written on her face after watching him and it was soo sad to see Abhay left her even more heart-broken 😔

And about the rudeness everyone showed towards Abhay today because of his disappearance and thinking he would be a disturbing factor to Piya 😕 How weird... it would be nice if they actually thought of trying to know the reason behind his disappearance 😕

Edited by princess_xeelan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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amazing post pocodi👏👏👏👏
god how much i love reading your thoughts of abhiya. sometime i cry and something i jump with joy.

to piya it looked liker her dark prince that she keep seeing all this time came in front of her. he sure step in from her dreaming world to her reality world.

the girl who don't even give second looks to other guys here she forward her for a handshake with the devil. in front of abhay we really get to see the innocent loving piya b/c this piya is sure abhay piya like you said pocodi. all this time she has been saying abhay
kisi roz tumse mulaaqaat hogi and when he does comes back to her life he once again breaks her heart.

he opened her heart, riped it into tiny pices and added salt to it.awww piya darling abhay is not like others he will hurt you to keep safe and away from him. who said love is easy
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all my sympathy goes to piya. she knows he is faking, lying to himself and her but why she is unknown to that. she thought she will have a fairytale story with abhay but less did she now that she has fallen in love with selfless predator who will do anything for her even hurt her and push her to someone else so she can be safe but the only person who can keep safe is you mr.raichand her dark prince.
Edited by shewascool90210 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yes...poco today abhay was finally back in his typical style...he was rocking today...but he is still rude 2 piya...😛..And regarding piya she is finally back 2 her piya jaiswal...form... She was completely lost today...seeing her angel...her love...she was awsum today...loved her...😳
Edited by anurag24t - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i didnt see today's epi but still i think i saw it after reading ur description 😆😆
Abhay - that was so expected 😆...he is a rude arrogant sweetheart 😛😆
anyways, my only disappointment today is Kabir ...i had some hopes of Abhay and Kabir as friends after this leap but *sigh* i guess i shud leave this hope now, never gonna happen ...their chemistry is superb with their small nok-jhooks 😆, it wud have been better as a team 😛
anyways, Pia needed Abhay BADLY, not becoz she loves him unconditionally but bcoz Pia ko Abhay ke siwa aur koi nahi sudhar sakta 🤣...wait let me make a topic on this with details 🤣
Abhay needs a friend to find abt the werewolves like he said...Maya will def b there...lets see who else, if not Kabir then like u said mayb Jay 😕 🤣
Edited by Nishi.Singh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I for one expected this behaviour off of Abhay and i am glad the ANGELS back and raring to go. He was sorely missed at MOUNT College. Pia's reactions were as expected the little girl lost type of behaviour. I felt so bad for her because Abhay had made a chutney out of her emotions and adding salt into her wounds rubs his armcandy in her face. oor mite.

I am baffled by Abhay's peers. Talk about freezing him out in the cold for no reason.

Yeah i think your predictions maybe right about Jay befriending Abhay to finish him off for good. Its the best strategy by keeping your enemies close
Edited by matwamango - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Today's episode and your post has left me completely speechless...

there is a sea of mixed emotions...happy that abhay is back in mount college...we all waited to see him walk through the corridors of mount college...wanted to see abhiya talking to each other...but feeling pained after seeing abhiya hurt...and pia devastated...abhay is ignoring some one whom he loves the most...and that someone loves him more than her life...irony at it's best...abhay has a bigger and more important agenda...he can not allow his emotions to waver him from his duties...

The last scene left me heart broken...

Mount college became a lovelier place today...

i was also zapped by everyone's rudeness towards abhay...what's wrong with them...

it was great to see arnab behaving sensibly...i almost thought that every one gonna believe neel's story...but, thank god arnab was sensible enough to fathom neel's real face...

Poco...today's post is beautiful...i was teary eyed while reading your post...superb...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏


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