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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter 2

Abhay's POV

Darn,I thought, here we go again.

You know...my haters in college(There are plenty, trust me) call me Abhay, the Principal's Errand Boy. If Princi feels in the mood to punish someone? Make ABHAY the monitor! If Princi wants to call someone to his office? Well, he can't make an announcement like normal human principals do. He has to send ABHAY around. But the truth is that the Principal of Mount College is just a puppet, totally under the control of my parents, the Raichands. They have made substantial donations to the college: but no one will ever guess the principal owes the roof over his head to me, or rather my mom and dad. And no one will ever know that I'm not human.

Because I'm anything but a human.

No, I'm not an alien, because for my kind it's the humans who are the real aliens. Yes, we look the same, and we speak the same languages, and we do feel a certain range of emotions.But we are an ancient and powerful civilization spanning several centuries. We are the Supernaturals.(Though we are often called, vampires-bats!!-werewolves-yeah I'm some hairy animal-and magicians-the ultimate insult).There are few of us, not just because we always wanted to keep the race exclusive, but because many of us drop out in the hope that they have found a human soulmate. Luurrvee. The very thought makes me gag.

Sorry, I just went into History mode. I'll go into Abhay mode again. Though chances are you really won't like being inside my head.

So, today morning, Princi calls me again,and tells me that my parents, currently 'holidaying' in London(I'll explain the term later)have given him instructions that I'm supposed to show some new girl around town. Her name is Pia Jaiswal, she's from an orphanage in Mumbai, and she's very intelligent. I was clearly blown away. An orphanage!! I'm not the snobby types, but as far as I know, Mount College authorities are very very snobby. You see, the college accepts either the dumbest of the lot(who are rich enough to fund the college but slow enough not to guess there are people like me lurking around) or the most intelligent(Us Supernaturals.) But rumours were, that this girl was human.

But right now I had other pressing matters on my mind. I really couldn't care about Supernaturals education system politics. All I could think was that stupid Tanushree. Shaurya, the 'oh-so-cool' human in my class had dared me to go and ask that girl out. Great, I was going to be surrounded by two human girls the whole day. While many Supernatural and human boys get a kick out of it, I did not.

Because if there was anyone I had felt anything for, it had been someone who was now long dead. Buried under the ground, with some crappy epitaph which made me want to kick whoever had written it. But forget that.

So I waited near the college gates for the new girl to come and scanned the area impatiently. I do not like being kept waited.

And there she entered the gates and for a moment the sunlight blinded me as it shone off the iron gates, making them shine. I shielded my eyes and when I opened them, there she was, walking up to the college, an apprehensive look on her face. I knew she was the new girl by that telltale nervousness that was radiating off her. I could read people's emotions very well, including my own. And right now my mouth was dry, and my heart still, and my blood ice cold.

But it was just a momentary feeling. It soon passed and I found myself staring dumbly at her as she asked me, 'Um, where can I find the Principal's office?'

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To be continued...


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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow!!!!!!!! piya's entry was superb......................abhay already affected
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow.. Gr8 update.. Finally Piya entered.. Eagerly waiting for d next part.. Thanx for d pm..lol.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow the abhay in your ff sounds so carefree i love it and omg just at the entrance of pia he is struck god what gonna happen when he askes her out cnt wait plez update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow superb update darling..loved the entry of piya..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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abhay's POV, ahaan. another awesome chapter once again. :D

okay, soo, from this chapter i'm guessing that abhay ain't the only supernatural boy around, 'coz he was talking like he knows other supernaturals in the school and yeah, if he is, which i don't think he is, erm, i'm confused. 😆

he doesn't believe in love, yay. this makes their story all the more interesting to watch. so, erm, the love of his life (i'm guessing, maithali?) is dead, and he's stopped believing ever since, and when he saw pia.. he was..dumbstruck? - sortof? oh, well, does she remind him of maithali?

continue sooon. i love the way you made shaurya a 'oh-so-cool' human. 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow cool FF, so is Misha a witch by any chance.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sorry for updating so late guys!

This chapter is dedicated to Sanju-coz I was inspired by her FF 'Love can change your world' (come back soon from out of station, wherever it is 😆)-and Elizaa and Mangona for forcing me to continue this.

hope you enjooyy! 😊

If you're new to this FF please go to pg 1 and check out the index. 😊 I've updated only 3 chapters so far, so not to worry. 😆

Oh and chapter 4 is coming after tonite's epi or even before, depends. 😊

Chapter 3

Pia's POV

'Life has always been cruel to me', is a common complaint of many. But for me it is different. No matter whatever storm comes, I always look forward to the rainbow at the end. Because it makes me happier.

Ever since my mom died, I've received a variety of emotions-from pity and sympathy to disgust and inferiority, but never love, and forget romantic love, not even motherly love or friendly love. I spent many years trying to carve out a place for myself in people's hearts before I realized that mutilated hearts are the worst kind-the best are the pure ones, the ones that don't require you to make a space for yourself, because the special spot for you is already reserved.

And whenever I feel sad I remind myself that my mom is watching me from above, and just like any normal teenager might feel embarrassed on being caught crying by their parents, so would I. At least, that's what I think. In the school I used to go to before I got a scholarship into this prestigious college, I used to have a friend called Tanushree who always used to believe that your parents should never catch you crying, let alone a classmate or a friend. But then, she changed. She became one of 'them' the 'in' crowd.

I would never fit 'in' anywhere.

I walked up to the gates of the college, hoping that just like the movies, someone would come and offer to show me around and perhaps I might just find a place for myself here. No such luck. Everyone was busy in their own world.

And just then I saw that snazzy black Jaguar, as if it was waiting for me the whole life. The boy inside it-of my age-with sparkling bluish-gray eyes-or perhaps it was the sunlight that was making me feel that way. And the way he was staring at me, as if someone had taken an iron rod and banged it on his head.

It sounds funny, but can be a bit startling if it actually happens.

'Um, where can I find the Principal's office?' I asked.

He suddenly snapped out of his trance and said, 'I'm Abhay..Abhay Raichand..your guide, errm, unoffically.'

That was the last time I would hear him saying anything in a daze, apparently. Because soon he composed himself and was giving me a cool look, and by that I mean not a 'hip' look but a literally icy one.

'Oh okay,' I said, biting my lip. Jeez, the first person I had to meet was the Ice King of College.

I got into the car and he smoothly drove it into the college, and I could see everyone staring at us. A few boys made catcalls and said, 'Hey Abhay, new girlfriend huh?' 'Yeah what if T comes to know about this?'

Oh great, he probably had a you-know-what of a girlfriend and she wouldn't be too happy to see us together. I felt like someone had plopped me into some clichd high school drama.

Soon he pulled over in front of what happened to be the adminstrative building.

'Thanks,' I said with a smile. And then he smiled back, a chilling grin that sent shivers down my spine. He then went back to looking serious, though his eyes were surprised, as if even he was not expecting that he would smile back at me.

And something told me this boy didn't smile very often.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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REserve mummy i will edit tmrw now i am leaving :P
will miss u alot

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanjna4

REserve mummy i will edit tmrw now i am leaving :P
will miss u alot


will miss u 2...😭 😊

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