'PYAAR KI YE EK NAYI KAHANI'(THE LAST PART)

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@hreeyaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

sorry 4 late update........😃

PART:-
NIGHT:-
PANCHI:saab complete hain na?
KABIR:yaa saab hogeya...
PANCHI:vishal😳
PIYA:(in mind)abhay abhitaak nehi aya...saab aageye..
PANCHI:piya kise dhundrehi hoon?
PIYA:amm nehi bo vishal aaya ya nehi dekhrehi thi...
PANCHI:ok
ABHAY ENTERED........
PIYA:😳😳😳abhay!
ABHAY:not carrying
PIYA:abhay...tum aageye!
ABHAY:kyun yahan tumhe mere jagai koi aur dikhraha hain!
PIYA:no bo..
ABHAY:excuse me...mere paas tumhari faltu batein k liye tym nehi hain!
PIYA:😕
VISHAL CAME:-
EVERYONE:" HAPPY B'DAY 2 U"......
VISHAL:oh ....😳thanks everyone!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
VISHAL HUGGED EVERYONE BT NOT PANCHI:-
PANCHI:(in mind)😕maine saab plan kiya aur meri taraf dekhbhi nehi raha hain..
KABIR:ok cake katna wageira saab to khaatam aab dance ho jaye!
EVERYONE:yaa
KABIR DANCING WITH MISHA,ABHAY DANCING WITH OTHER GIRL,VISHAL DANCING WITH MANY GIRLS....
PANCHI:😡😡maine itna kuch kiya aur yeah😭😭
PIYA:abhay....😭😭😭
PIYA WENT WASHROOM:-
PIYA:bo samajhta kaya hain khudh ko.....😭😭😭😭
BOY:wow..kaya hot girl hain...hello?
PIYA:hi..
BOY:kaya hua BF ne kuch kahan kaya?
PIYA:excuse me..jara door se..
BOY:kyun kaya hua..main to hoon na..aao pass aoo..
PIYA:choro mujhe..bachaou..choro...
ABHAY:haat chor!😡😡😡😡
BOY:abe tu koun hain..oh iska BF itne der kahan tha aab jaa...
PIYA:choro.
ABHAY:chor usse...
BOY:ahh...
PIYA:choro abhay...
BOY:chorunga nehi tujhe....
ABHAY:tum thik hoon piya!
PIYA:kyun meri itni fikar kyun ho rehi hain tumhe..main maar bhi...
ABHAY:shhh...aysa kabhi bhi maat kehna...
PIYA:looking abhay..😳
ABT TO KISS:-

SUDDENLY MISHA ENTERED!
MISHA:pi...awww..😳😳😳
PIYA:misha..
ABHAY GONE:-
MISHA:hmmmm..ahemmm....piya mujhe to yea nehi pata tha....
PIYA:wat misha!😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
MISHA:hmmm..naughty girl...
PIYA:misha tum kuch jayadahi samajh ti hoon.😳😳😳😳chalo...
MISHA:😆ok chalo...😆

HERE:-
ABHAY:piya...keyse door karu tumnhe...baar baar mere karib aajati hoon aur main khudko rook nehi pata...kyun piya..kyun........😭😭😭😭
PIYA:abhay!
ABHAY:tum yahan...
A CAR IS COMING:-
PIYA:bo ab...
ABHAY:piya..
THEY BOTH FALL.:-😳😳😳😳
ABHAY:piya!tum khudhko sambhal nehi sakhti
PIYA:abhay tum ayse kyun baat karrehe hoon!
THE END..................

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Aromal saxena

@--AROMAL--

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

hey its a nice update dear !!

update soon...

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Ramani

@RB81

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

hei ria,
update was nice..but pls dont make abhiya same as tat in the show..dont let abhay use harsh words on piya..do continue soon..

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mangona

@mangona

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

hey pm to kar deti wel it was nyc and misha was gr8

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Gals

@Cute_Gal

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#55

Hey Ria Nice Update.. Y is Vishal avoiding Panchi.. n Abhay is rude is ever bt he saves Piya always.. Dat's wat I love abt him.. Continue soon.. Thanx for d pm..lol.

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mansim

@mansim

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#56

that was a really nice part👏

i think vishal is not understanding his feeling that is why he is avoiding panchi😆

loved abhiya as always😳

oops misha wrong entry😲

thanks for the pm😊

update soon😉

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VRITIKA

@karantakiar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#57

wao yar wat an updt!!!!!!!
Luv abhiya scenes.
it ws so romantic.
superb yar,totaly amazing dear.
thnx for d pm.
plz cnt wid nxt part soon.
nd
dun 4get to pm me....(Waise Dear i knw ki u will not 4get to pm me but still i dun want to take any risk.)
I realy realy like ur ff.
do cnt soon.
luv u
vritika

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tanya.dsouza

@tanya.dsouza

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#58

wow..!!!!!! awesome update ... really loved it.. please update soon ..!!!!!

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ria

@hreeyaa

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#59

hello frnd..thanks soo much 4 ur lovely comments!🤗

PART:8(PIYA NE KEH DI AAPNI DILL KI BAAT)

PIYA:abhay tum humesha mujhse ayse kyun baat karte hoon....bachate bhi hoon aur ayse baat karte hoon...
ABHAY:tumhe khudko sambhal na sikhna cahiye
PIYA:kyun abhay aur kiss liye..kiske liye...
ABHAY:(in mind)mere liye..aapne liye
PIYA:abhay...main aur nehi seh sakhti....tumhari yea karwi batein mujhe bohot taklif deti hain....
ABHAY:silent
PIYA:(close)meri akhon mein dekho abhay..kaya tumhe kuch memsush nehi hota..kaya kuch dikhai nehi deta tumhe...
ABHAY:(in mind)no piya..no..maat kaho kuch!
PIYA:abhay..abhay am in love with u....main tumse payar karne lagi hoon..cahkarbhi tumse door nehi reh sakhti...I LOVE U abhay!

ABHAY:piya bohot raat ho chuki hian..chalo main tumhe hostel chor deta hoon.
PIYA:abhay....
ABHAY:chalo....
PIYA:(in mind)tum ne kuch nehi kaha...
ABHAY:(in mind)kaya kehta main....jo tum sunna cahti hoon bo main keh nehi sakhta aur jo mujhe kehna parega bo tum sunnehi paougi...
PIYA:tum mujhse payar nehi karte!😭
ABHAY:tumhara hostel aageya..jaou...
PIYA:paar
ABHAY:go...
PIYA GONE.:_
ABHAY:kyun kaha piya tumne yea...aab main keyse tumhara samna karunga..aaj to keysebhi taal diya paar kaal..age keyse talunga..

COLLEGE:-
PANCHI:i hate vishal..i just hate him..kaya samajhta hain bo aapne aap ko..maine itni mehnat se uske liye sara intejam kiya aur bo..huh..
MISHA:are kaya hua...achai hain na..aur tumhe itni taklif kyun ho rehi hain... haan?
VISHAL:hey hi mish.
MISHA:hi
VISHAL:hi basket..tum kaal party mein thi kaya ?nehi bo kaya hain na mujhe tum nazari nehi ayi
PANCHI:nehi thi main party mein.😡.(gone)
VISHAL:are isse kaya hua..
MISHA:vish..u knw na panch ayi thi party mein aur usnehi sabkuch plan kiya tha then tum usse ayse kyun baat karrehe hoon
KABIR:yea tum nehi samjhogi ye hum bhaio ka secret hain..
MISHA:oh god knws..bye
KABIR:well done dude
VISHAL:tu aur yea teri sari hui plans..aab gussa ho gei na..aab kaya karoo.
KABIR:jo jo jeysa sikhaya hain waisahi karte jaaa..dekh fir bo khudhi tujhe aakar bolegi..main tumse payar karti hoon vishal😆
VISHAL:hope so😳
HERE:-
PIYA:abhay kahin dikh nehi raha..aya nehi kaya...
KABIR:hey piya..kaya hua?
PIYA:nehi kuch nehi...(saw abhay)..kabir main aati hoon han.
KABIR:ok.
MISHA:hey kabir
KABIR:oh misha
MISHA:i knw tum dono panch ko jalane k liye yea saab karrehe hoon na..😆
KABIR:😆
MISHA:thiki hain..mujhe bhi lagta hain tht she lyks vish.
KABIR:haan..bo thik hain...paar aapne bareinmein kaya lagta hain....
MISHA:aapne bareinmein?
KABIR:(close)haan aapne bareinmein..k iss nachiz ne kaya thoda jagai banasakha hain aapke dill mein...
MISHA:😳
KABIR:haan..haan bolo
MISHA:hmmm.thoda thoda😳
KABIR:are misha rukho...misha itni sharmati hain to aaji dekha maine.😆😳
HERE:-
PIYA:abhay..
ABHAY:what?
PIYA:kaal kuch baat adhuri thi humari...
ABHAY:kuch adhuri batoon ko adhurahi rehne dena cahiye..kaya pata k unke pure hone se bohot taklif mile!
PIYA:
RAICHANDS:-
CHAND:abhay..
ABHAY:yes dad?
CHAND:tum thik hoon na?
ABHAY:haan dad...
CHAND:kisi ko taklif dekar agar unka acha ho sakhta hain to bo taklif achi hoti hain..jayada achai kabhi kabhi dushroke taklif ka kaan baan jati hain..tum samajh rehe hoon na....
ABHAY:haan dad..u don't worry..aysa kuch nehi hoga..main saab sambhal lunga..
CHAND:good...(in mind)agar tum khudh sambhal paye to achai hain warnah!
DROBRIALS;-
MADHU:to arnab kaya thik kiya hain panchi k bareinmein..main baat karu usse.?
ARNAB:haan..tum baat karke dekho...
MADHU:thik hain aaj main panchi se baat karti hoon..
PANCHI:hi mom
MADHU:panchi beta tum aagei ...fresh ho lo
PANCHI:ok
MADHU:yea lo coffee..
PANCHI:thnx mom
MADHU:acha beta tumhe yea vishal keysa lagta hain?
PANCHI:vishal!😡usska to baat hi maat kijiye..ek number ka sadhu hain..stupid...i hate him..kaya mom mode hi kharab kardiya..
ARNAB:kaya hua baat ki?
MADHU:bo to uske naam sehi chir gei..i don't think she lyks him!
ARNAB:😕

................THE END......................

Edited by hreeyaa - 14 years ago

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VRITIKA

@karantakiar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#60

Yepi!!!!!!! M d first member who read ur updt.
it ws an amazing nd awsm part .
totaly rcking dear.
luvly,mindblwing.
thnx for d pm.
do cnt wid nxt part soon.
do pm me dear.
luv u
vritika

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