'PYAAR KI YE EK NAYI KAHANI'(THE LAST PART)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

wel wen u update it send me pm plz

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ria

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

hello frnds....hope u all r lyking my updates!thnxx 4 all the comments!..............😊

PART:4(Dance Dance)

ABHAY:(coming close)piya!kuch kehnese pehle soch lena cahiye.jaldh bazi mein koi faislah nehi lena cahiye k baad mein khudh ko kosh na pareh!
PIYA:shock...
(abhay gone)
PIYA:abhay ne kabhi bhi mujhse ayse baat nehi ki..aaj pehli baar ussne mujhse ache se baat ki...paar uske baton mein itna dardh kyun tha...aur yea kaya kehke geya bo...ohhh yea abhay bhi na main usse kabhi bhi samajh nehi paoungi...par ek baat to thik hi mein mujhe jaldh baji mein kuch nehi karna cahiye....haan..main pehel abhay ko thik se janungi k bo keysa bo mere bareinmein kaya sochta hain firhi usse kahungi!
IN THE PARTY:-
PANCHI:hey mish kaya hua?
MISHA:nehi kuch nehi yea kabir bhi na...
PANCHI:kabir kaya?
MISHA:aaaa..nehi kuch nehi...lets enjoy the party...
PANCHI:haan chalo!
TANUSHREE MAAM:abhay!
ABHAY:yes maam?
TANUSHREE MAAM:oh abhay...not maam...say tanushree...ur so ......
ABHAY:aapni haad mein rehiye...maat bhuliye k hum students hain aapke!
TANUSHREE MAAM:abhay...oh yea abhay bhi na...bt bohthi hotttt hain!
HERE:-
PIYA:misha?
MISHA:haan piya bolo?
PIYA:jara yahn ao mujhe tumse kuch jaruri baat karni hain!
MISHA:ye loo aagi...bolo?
PIYA:kabir
MISHA:oho piya main uske barein mein koi baat nehi karna cahti!
PIYA:no misha u have 2 talk....tum itni selfish keyse hoon sakhti hoon misha!!!!!
MISHA:main?
PIYA:ya u..he loves u n u...
MISHA:oh ussne tumhe batayan...usse maine samjhaya na fir?
PIYA:misha i knw u don't love him...bt tum usko ek chance to do kaya pata sahid tumbhi usse payar karne lagon!
MISHA:main aur payar..piya!
PIYA:misha tumne johi kiya acha nehi kiya...hum agar kisise payar nehi karte to kamse kam uske payar ka respect karna cahiye...u knw he was crying...tumne usske dil ko chout pouchaya hain misha..
MISHA:😕i don't want hurt his feelings...i thought he was joking!
PIYA:no misha its not a joke..hes truly lovesu lot!
MISHA:ya!😲
PIAY:yaa...n u should give him a chance .....dekho kaya hota hain...
MISHA:okkk..i will!
PIYA:ya misha!😃
MISHA:ya...bt usse bhi mujhe tym dena paregi...u knw na...
PIYA:ya ok...u don't worry...main abhi usse batakar aati hoon!
MISHA:ok
PIYA:kabir?
KABIR:😕
PIYA:aab to aapna latka hua face thik karo mishane haan kaar di!
KABIR:u r joking na?
PIYA:noooooo kabir...usne kahan k bo cnace degi..bt she needs tym u knw!
KABIR:really!!!!!!!!!!o piya....am sooo happyyyyy!!!!!!!
PIYA:aab chalo....😆
HERE:-
ABHAY:maya?
MAYA:haan bhai?
ABHAY:i hope maine tumhe jo samjhaya tha tum samajh gei hoo....
MAYA:haan bhai...main kuch der k liye bhatakh gei thi..thnx aapne yaad dilwadiya...aap firse aysa kuch nehi hoga..u don't worry main khudhko aur humsaab ko koi problem hoon aysa kuch nehi karungi!
ABHAY:good!
ABHAY:(in mind)achai hain jo tum khudhi samajh gei..main nehi cahta k main jis haal se gujarraha hoon tumhe bhi us haal je gujar na pareh!
THE THE PARTY:-
PANCHI:so everybody....main saab ko ek ek chit dungi aur us chit mein jiska naam hogai bohi uska partner hoga..ok?
EVERYONE:okkk
PANCHI:kabir yea rahi tumhari chit..
KABIR:ok
PANCHI:who's ur partner?
KABIR:😳😳misha........
MISHA:on no....
PANCHI:giving everyone chit....
PANCHI:ok finally abhay..
ABHAY:amnot interested!
PANCHI:tht's not fair abhay..sab karrehe he..
ABHAY:OKK
PANCHI:who's ur partner?
ABHAY:piya...
PIYA:😳
PANCHI:ok guys so star dancing with ur partners...............

SONG: "TUM MILE TITTLE SONG......"
LINK:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5vKC9bFnmj0

ABHAY:looking piya!
PIYA:looking abhay!

KABIR:thank u misha!
MISHA:haan...hehe...
PANCHI:aab main kaya karu....
VISHAL:lets dance?
PANCHI:tum hare sath?
VISHAL:aab kaya kare koi nehi to dhushmaan hi sahi..😆
PANCHI:haha...😆ok....

............END OF THE PART:4............

Edited by hreeyaa - 14 years ago

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Aromal saxena

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

oh its a very nice update dear !

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Ramani

@RB81

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

hei ria,
u took some time to update but its too short...however loved the update..tho maya ko koi partner nahi mili?is she not in the party?u paired up everyone in the game..waiting to read how their story is going to start..update soon yaar..

P.S:pls include page no too along with the part no in the title..it'll be easier to get to the update..

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VRITIKA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

Wao dear wat an awsm updt.
it ws vry beautifuly writen.
it ws superb,fantastic.
realy realy luv d part .
plz cnt wid nxt part soon.
luv u
vritika

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SwtHrt2011

@SwtHrt2011

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

wwwwoooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhwwwwwwwwwwwww.........!!!!!!!

osum wrk dear, outstndng.....!!!!!! 😊

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mansim

@mansim

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

that was a good part👏

thanks for the pm😉

update soon😊

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Gals

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Posted: 14 years ago

#38

Wow.. Nice part.. Mish-Kabir together.. Dance partner thing was gr8.. Waiting for more Abhiya scenes.. Continue soon.. Thanx for d pm..lol..

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ria

@hreeyaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#39

hello everyone..thnxx 4 all comments.i can't right so long coz words r limited u knw tht...😊n intro mein main always part n pg no likhdeti hoon....

PART:5(Feelings)

EVERYONE IS DANCING....
ABHAY:excuse me...
PIYA:abhay...
PANCHI:yea abhay ko kaya hua..
VISHAL:choro usse..bo aysahi hain.
PARTY IS OVER:-
PANCHI:party bohothi amazing tha na?
MISHA:kaya khakh amazing tha..boring dance yuck!
KABIR:mish tumbhi na...it was romantic... 😳
MISHA: ....
PANCHI:ok piya chalo hostel chor deti hoon..
PIYA:meri hostel yehi hain panchi 5 mins main pouch jaoungi tumog jao
PANCHI:sure?
PIYA:haan sure😆
PANCHI:ok bye piya
MISHA:bye piya see u tomorrow!
PIYA:ok bye
KABIR:bye piya ,misha,panchi..
PIYA IS WALKING:-
PIYA:abhay....abhay yahan kaya kar raha hain..
PIYA:abhay?
ABHAY:not listening
PIYA:abhay tum party se ayse kyun chale aye?
ABHAY:mujhe tumhare sath dance karna acha nehi lagraha tha...
PIYA:😕paar abhay(piya girgei)_
ABHAY:caught piya!

ABHAY:piya!tum thik hoon?
PIYA:haan...aouch!
ABHAY:kaya hua?
PIYA:nehi bo sahid peir mein mouch aagei!
ABHAY:dikhaou...
PIYA:nehi thik hain main chal paoungi...(after walking)ahh(fell)
ABHAY:tumhari hostel yahin hain na.
PIYA:haan
ABHAY:main chor deta hoon tumhe.....

PIAY:(in mind)kyun tumhare paas aatehi sara dard chala jata hain abhay....kyun tumhare karib aakar sari duniyako bhul jati hoon main.....kyun yea jante huea bhi k tum mujhse payar nehi karte sirf tumhise payar karna cahta hain yea dil....
ABHAY:(in mind)maat karo mujhse itna payar piya....baad mein tumhiko daard hoga....jitna tumse door rehna cahta hoon tum utnahi mere karib aajati hoon piya...keyse karu tumhe khudhse door....
ABHAY:yelo tumhari hostel..
GUARD:are piya bitiya kaya hua...
PIYA:nehi kuch nehi..abhay..are abhay kaha geya..yahain to tha..😲
GUARD:chalo main tumhe tumhari room taak chor deta hoon ..chalo
PIYA:haan....
DROBRIAL HOUSE:-
PANCHI:(in mind)aaj vishal k sath dance karte kuch ajib sa feel hua..main jaab usse larai karti hoon ya baat karti hoon taab aysa feel to nehi hota tha..aajhi aysa feel kyun hua...ya keysa feeling hain...aur main to usse nafrath karti hoon na sadu ..to aaj uske sath dance karne mein mujhe itna acha kyun lagraha tha...
MISHA:hey panchi kahan khoi hoon?
PANCHI:haan..aabbb....nehi kuch nehi..tum bolo keysa laga kabir k sath...
MISHA:yuck!
PANCHI:haan..kabir keysa hain na?..
MISHA:haan...keysa hain matlab..
PANCHI:dance karte waqt baki larkio ko dekh raha tha...(joking)
MISHA:kaya! no panchi tumhari akhon ko kuch problem hain...
PANCHI:nehi maine dekha....
MISHA:ayse keyse dekha maine dekha usse bo dance karte ty sirf aur sirf mujhe dekhraha tha aur kisi ko nehi...samjhi!
PANCHI:o..o....😆
MISHA:nehi bo...😳
PANCHI:ok ok...kabir sirf aur sirf tumhei dekhraha tha thik hain...😆😆
MISHA:tumbhi na..😳
RATHODE:-
KABIR:hey vis...tujhe misha keysi lagi?
VISHAL:thik thak hain..
KABIR:hey..wat do u mean thik thak hain....???
VISHAL:ok baba bohot achi hain😆
KABIR:haan meri choice hain na..achi to hogihi..😆
VISHAL:haan..😆
KABIR:wayse panchi bhi thik thak hain..😉
VISHAL:kaya..aabbbb..
KABIR:haaan...mujhe dikh raha tha dance karte tym keyse panchi ko tuk tuk dekhraha tha..
VISHAL:kaya baat karraha ..ja sone jaa..GOOD NIGHT!
KABIR:hmmm dal mein kuch kala hain......
RAICHANDS:-
CHAND:abhay?
ABHAY:haan dad?
CHAND:kahan se arehe hoon?
ABHAY:bo college mein part tha...
CHAND:mujhe acha laga k tum saab se ghul mil kar reh rehe hoon!..paar jara dhayan se..kisi se kuch jeyadahi ghul mil maat jana...u r understanding na ......
ABHAY:😕haan....

...........THE END OF THE PART:5........................

Edited by hreeyaa - 14 years ago

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VRITIKA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#40

Wndrful part yar.
totaly amazing ,superb part.
haye!!!!!!!
Luv all abhiya scenes.
BUT.......
WHY U HV NOT PM ME??????????
Plz do pm me yar.
i realy realy luv ur ff.
plz cnt wid nxt part soon nd dun 4get to pm me......
luv u
vritika

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