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mansim

@mansim

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Posted: 14 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: amail1601

Thank you sooooooooo much Mansim!! 😊😊😊

n lovely emoticons!!!!!!!!!!!!👏

When we publish our book, we'll hire you to illustrate. 😉

I will be glad to do it😉

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amail1601

@amail1601

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: kaushiki9
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Haseena was waxing Chand's leg 🤣🤣

koi fashion show bhi h kya party m, chaand special show🤣

i have read all d updates guys

i must say : u all rock 👏👏👏

now need to go & keep up d gd work 😃

Wait n watch!!! 😉😉😉😉

Thanks sooooooooooooooooo much!!!!!!! 😳😳😳

Take care yaar...hope to see you again soon! 😊

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Ritzie Ring'gghania

@Ritzie

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#193

Thanks mansim and Kaush.

Mansim - I loved your emoticons.

Kaush - we are so much praying for your speedy recovery as we already missing you

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Kaheela

@ka7eela

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#194

🤣🤣once again both updates hilarious🤣 , good job👍🏼 thanks for making me laugh🤣

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Anindita

@MyArchangel

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#195

Awesum anu,ritz and adi..u pple honestly mke my day..wat with Abhay being in so mch pain in the show i am depressed..bt u guys honestly mke me laugh..😆..
@anu-yaar tu bhi na..phulo ke daam pata hai..sid ko phul khilaye i hi ja rahi hai..😆
@ritz-lol replacing cigratte 4 a pen..awesum
@adi-leg waxing..😆..and Abhay wants money and haseena ka neck movement 😆..
Keep it up pple..

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Payal <a href="http://www.glitter-graphics.com"><i

@lighteningbuzz

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#196

🤣🤣 Seriously, Chand's flashbacks remind me of Johnny Depp's weird flashback from the move, Charlie and the chocolate factory....!!! They both have the strangest memories as child with the world jumping around them bullying them around which in turn makes them emotionless later on in their lives!

@Ritz knows how to look smokin'. Ouch, that's difficult as Ritz doesn't smoke but the vamp should smoke. Otherwise, how will audience know that smokin' is bad?

🤣Seriously, you guys are good when it comes to making up jokes and comedy! 👏

And ewwwwwww why is Chand waxing his legs??? Why do vampires need to wax their legs?🤣

And what is this, vampire drinking "rooh afza?" ahahahahaha!

*runs before anyone catches me*

Edited by lighteningbuzz - 14 years ago

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Ritzie Ring'gghania

@Ritzie

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: ka7eela
🤣🤣once again both updates hilarious🤣 , good job👍🏼 thanks for making me laugh🤣

Thanks a lot Kaheela 😳. We are so happy that we could make you laugh.

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Ritzie Ring'gghania

@Ritzie

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: MyArchangel
Awesum anu,ritz and adi..u pple honestly mke my day..wat with Abhay being in so mch pain in the show i am depressed..bt u guys honestly mke me laugh..😆..
@anu-yaar tu bhi na..phulo ke daam pata hai..sid ko phul khilaye i hi ja rahi hai..😆
@ritz-lol replacing cigratte 4 a pen..awesum
@adi-leg waxing..😆..and Abhay wants money and haseena ka neck movement 😆..
Keep it up pple..

Angel - I know what you mean by Abhay being in pain. So, we are glad that we could make you laugh.

@on anu's behalf - Sid ke liye kuch bhi. Aur vaise bhi Mehra's and Raichand's have lots of money so, no worries

@Ritzie says thanks - she knows she is very clever. Ideas come late but when they come, they are superb. (She is just being modest 😉)

@Adi- Raichands are very conscience of their image whether it is waxing or Rooh Afzaa supply or nexck movements. hee hee

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Ritzie Ring'gghania

@Ritzie

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: lighteningbuzz
🤣🤣 1. Seriously, Chand's flashbacks remind me of Johnny Depp's weird flashback from the move, Charlie and the chocolate factory....!!! They both have the strangest memories as child with the world jumping around them bullying them around which in turn makes them emotionless later on in their lives!

2. @Ritz knows how to look smokin'. Ouch, that's difficult as Ritz doesn't smoke but the vamp should smoke. Otherwise, how will audience know that smokin' is bad?

🤣Seriously, you guys are good when it comes to making up jokes and comedy! 👏

3. And ewwwwwww why is Chand waxing his legs??? Why do vampires need to wax their legs?🤣

4. And what is this, vampire drinking "rooh afza?" ahahahahaha!

5. *runs before anyone catches me*

1. Payal, we sooo look forward to your comments. They are hilarious too,

Even I was rofling when I read about Chand's flashback. I haven't seen Charlie and the chocolate factory but sounds really funny. Depp has his class.

2. Thanks for liking Ritzie's ideas. She is blushing right now. Not typical of a vamp to blush but Ritzie is still a novice. She will improve with time.

3. Regarding Chand - Well, it's more about Raichands' public image - they want to have a Clean image. Now, I think you will understand why Chand was waxing.

4. Oh Regarding Vamps and Rooh Afzaa - it's a famous joke here at the Forum that the drink Raichand's have doesn't look like blood but more like Rooh Afzaa hee hee.

5. We will catch you, anyways - we have supersonic speed Vampires with us. 😉

Edited by Ritz93 - 14 years ago

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amail1601

@amail1601

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#200

Post 7.Parts 19-21

Ritzy's Part 19

In the parlour......

Ritz is looking smokin' hot, sexy, beautiful and evil.

Satisfied with her appearance, Ritz goes to the payment counter.

Ritz turns to the audience: Any guesses on how I will pay?

The audience replies for the first time: Ritz will use Abhay's credit card.

Ritz: It's toooo obvious. **sexily turns her back to audience** A vamp can't be that obvious.

The audience yawns: Okay, you will use somebody else's credit card.

Ritz thinks in the background, "The audience is not scared of the Vamp, at all. I will check on that part later. First, I need to complete the scene."

Ritz goes for the payment. She shows the parlour owner her empty wallet. The owner **faints**. Ritz runs. Her revenge with the Parlour lady is complete. **evil grin**

You know Ritz chorified **faints** from Adi's writing style and yawns from Anu's - that's a real bad habit. Ritz is ready to be a Vamp now but she needs to practice more evilness to be successful.

Adi's Part 20

Adi has seen Pia hanging around Abhay. She knows his eyes are about to turn blue. She calls Anu.

Sid (calls out): Adi!!!!!!

Adi (coming into his room): Yeah?

Sid: Yaar…I'm hungry.

Adi: Abhi toh two trays bhar ke flowers diye the. You ate them all?

Sid: Nahin….ek tray koi decoration ke liye le gaya, and doosri I gave to this…gundi.

Adi: Gundi? Mujhse badi gundi kaun hai yahaan?

Sid: I don't know…weird clothes. Blue top, pink lehnga, orange dupatta, purple clutch, and a huge silver flower in her hair………………

Adi: Ohhhhhhhh! Tracker!!!!! Use kyun diya?

Sid: She wasn't leabing otherwise na!

Adi: Uffo! Tum vampires ki attractiveness bhi na. Angad nahin tha saath?

Sid: No. She was alone.

Adi: Achha wait. I'll look for him.

Sid: Can I eat him?

Adi: Arey no! I'll bring flowers for you.

[She leaves.]

Sid (calling out): Tulips bhi!!!

Coming out of Sid's room, Adi hears screams at one end of the corridor. She investigates.

Adi (yelling): What the hell Angad? Why are you yelling?

Angad (running to her): Woh…yahaan…m-m-m-monster!

Adi: Very funny! Mere parents-in-law ko monster mat bol.

Angad: Nahin…sacchi..

Adi: Dafaa ho..dekhne de.

(She goes to where Angad is pointing, and falls back in shock. Screaming, both Adi and Angad run away. Tracker follows them, covered from top to toe with flowers…….)

Meanwhile, Anu calls Abhay.

Anu (angrily): You were supposed to be here Abhay!

Abhay (in a placatory tone): But Sid is my brother..

Anu: So? Adi hai na wahaan.

Abhay (quietly): Tabhi toh main bhi hoon yahaan.

Anu (sharply): What?

Abhay (quickly): Oh nothing.

Anu: Come here then. Right NOW!

Abhay: Ok..ok..

Anu (to herself): Tera kaam toh maine kar diya Adi….now it's your turn…

At the Raichand's place, Panchhi is walking towards Sid's room.

She disappears.

A shadow moves stealthily.

A voice: Ooooooooooh!!! Aaaaaaaaaaaah!!! Ouch!!

Ritz's Part 21

Ritz was planning to be introduced to all other characters at the hospital. But she got late in getting ready (women's problems, you see).

So, Adi suggested Anu-Sid's upcoming sangeet ceremony.

That sounds fun!!!

Ritz is all ready.

But oh nooooooooooooooooooooooo… What about my dress, makeup and accessories…………………….?

That doesn't suit the occasion. How can Ritz wear a short dress to a sangeet ceremony? Does that mean she has to start from scratch and do all the shopping and matching make-up again? That way, Ritz will again miss the sangeet ceremony.

If Ritz switches on the tubelight now, it will take lots of time. So, she searches in the tubelight box for older ideas.

Yes, that one works.

"Vamps are supposed to break all rules".

Ritz will wear a short dress to the sangeet ceremony. It works more effectively, you see, with all the competition fully covered up in suits, lehngas and sarees. But the vamp is looking smokin' hot, sexy, beautiful and (**they should not know**) evil.

Ritz is waiting for the invitation but they didn't invite her.

No problems – Ritz will gate crash the party.

She has missions there **evil grin**

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