i hate to love u ff - part 6 updated - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Its awesome..

I just love Abhay..

He's the best... also loving the conflict he's picking up with Kabir and Misha...

Continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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HI. Where are you dear? Where is your update dear? Waiting for the next update.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awssome start dear
loved it
can u plz pm me whenever u update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice start.... plz add me 2 ur pm
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wow loving it add me to ur pm list great job😳
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hey dat was cute cont soon n plzz pm me on d next prt
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part - 3

Abay : now........ (Sarcastically)

abay saw kabir leaving... he said to her..


Abay : let's go.....

(pic of abay and piya leaving)

She sat inside the car' Abay started driving'. He took another way deep inside the jungle' Piya noticed it and she asked him'

Piya : Abay' where we' its not the way to my Hostel'

Abay : Relax' PIYA JAISWAL.. I'm not kidnapping u' just chill' it's a short cut' (Abay lied)

Suddenly the car stopped in the middle' she became panicked '. And asked him ..

Piya : wat happened? Why u stopped the car'???

Abay leaned closer to her' and piya leaned backwards' she was scared seeing him leaning towards her'. She hit the window and there was no space for her to move' she saw his facing coming closer' she closed her eyes tightly' his cheeks touched hers'. She felt his lips on his earlobe and she felt his breath' she swallowed the lump in her throat' she was scared ' but he whispered in her ears '

Abay : I don't know'

And he moved away smiling seeing his effect on her.. she opened her eyes and glared @ him angrily'

Piya : wat the hell?

Abay : i don't why the car stopped ' let me check'

He laughed and opened the door and went outside' he opened bonnet'. He sighed' and said "perfect time"

Piya : kuch kaha'

Abay : why u came out of the car?

piya: should I take ur permission to come out of the car?(sarcastically)

Abay : this girl is ( murmured)

Before he complete she cut him in'

Piya : wat??? Now stop' murmuring and start the car'

Abay : wat do I look like to u???

Piya :'. Wat???

Abay : yes' do I look like a mechanic or driver to u????

Piya : just shut up'. I wanna go home'

Abay : go' who is stopping u' (sarcastically)

Piya : Abay' I don't wanna fight' its already late'. Plzz ' lets go'

Abay : as if I'm interested to fight '.

Piya : Abay'.. Stop it' let's go' I wanna reach hostel before 12..

Abay moving towards piya' she moving bavkwards'

Abay : I don't think ' u will reach before 12..

Piya : wwhyy??? (stammers)

Abay : bcoz' car has broke-down''.

Piya : wat???? ( shouts)

Abay close her mouth with his hands and says "shut-up' piya'. My eardrum will break'". Piya looked into Abay's eyes and he into her's'. EYELOCK'

Abay was 1st to recover from his trance' he looked away and moved his hands from her mouth' both felt awkward '

Abay : let's walk' there is no other way..

Piya : wat'. How will I reach hostel in time? Wat will warden think of me??

(her eyes were filled)

(pic of abay and crying pia)

pre-cap : still in jungle

Edited by kinju100 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Abhay too......... NAUGHTY😉. Super update yaar can't wait for the next part👍🏼. Please please please update soon. 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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it was nice plz continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
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plz continue !!!!!!!!!! thanx for pm!!

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