Abhay-Piya FF: And I will be waiting.Book 1 Ended. - Page 32

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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update Poca..
Sam is such a naughty wolf..
Maithili's raaz won't open so soon rite..??
Piya is sure gona cross examine Abhay..
..can't wait to read the next update..
Edited by NIDIZ - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing update!! All my love for Sam just died! What a jerk!😡 And Misha?? So much for being Pia's best friend! She'd rather believe a guy than her! I"m really disappointed in her😲 But Pia better tell Kabir soon that she can't be with him. It'll be sad if he got to find out from some other source!! As far as the kiss is concerned, well, Pia is blank and I think she knows that that is when the kiss, if at all, had happened. Beware, Abhay Darling! You're going to be bombarded with some serious questions by our Curious Connie Pia! Awesome part, once again, Poco!👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg continue poco pls i wonder whats nxt
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG. POCO. Hats off, girl. You manage to leave me awestruck every time I read a part. 😳

So.. Maithali is back? Or did Abhay just see a vision? Sam said, ''That witch is back.''... Is she? Is it going the Katherine way like TVD? =)

And.. Geez. Poco. Something has happened to me! Sam is no longer my crush. :'( I don't get that 'omg' feeling when I read their parts. Ye kya ho gaya, Poco....................!?
But nonetheless, you wrote it amazingly. 👏👏 Hats off.
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Posted: 14 years ago

At Raichand Mansion'

Abhay comes rushing into an attic like room that is stacked with old trunks, artifacts , photographs , clothes and books. He is throwing open things and looking for something desperately.

Flash : Maithli beckoning him from the door of the study at Dobriyal House.

Abhay ( hunting for something)- It has to be here! It just has to be here!

As he is hunting for that mysterious object , Chaand , Haseena and Anushka come running in and they are taken aback at the sight of what Abhay is doing ' throwing everything around with supernatural force and searching for something.

Chaand( bellows )- Abhay! What do you think you are doing? You have not touched any of this stuff in decades ! What is wrong?

Haseena ( worried )- Abhay , will you just tell us what happened? Why are you behaving like this?

Anushka ( goes nears him)- What is it!

As soon as Anushka touches Abhay to turn him around, he jerks her so hard that she is thrown towards a pile of trunks with full force and Haseena has to stop the trunks with supernatural force from falling on Anushka.

Chaand ( screams )- ABHAY! Come to your senses!

Abhay slams an almirah shut and glares at them with flaming eyes and a tense red face'

Abhay( shouts back)- I AM IN MY SENSES , you bunch of blood suckers! FINALLY , I AM!

The three of them are shocked at Abhay's violent reaction and as Haseena is about to open her mouth, Anushka cautions her to keep quiet'

Anushka ( in Haseena's head)- Don't react, aunty. Let him finish'

Abhay ( tearfully )- I saw her!.....I saw MAITHLI ! And no! It is not a vision- it was her!

Chaand ( faltering on his own words)- Maithli?

Abhay ( emotionally charged)- YES! ..What did you all tell me? That she is never coming back! '.( shakes Haseena by her shoulders )' right? But I have been seeing her' seeing her since past few days ' I didn't see her for a 100 years but am seeing her now!

Haseena ( feeling like a fool)- Abhay' ( not meeting his eyes)'.Piya has been playing on your mind'she is reminding you of Maithli, and you are'

Abhay ( his voice booms )- ENOUGH! Don't drag Piya into this, Mom! That innocent woman has nothing to do with us '.i know I saw Maithli and'. ( turns to Anushka)'you! What had you told me' my witch soul sister?

Anushka ( backing away)- A-Abhay'I'.

Abhay ( throws a vase to the ground)- SHUT UP! You said that Sambhav and his clan had destroyed Maithli's body '.that she is never coming back' but I always had my doubts !... I trusted you, Anushka!...and now'

Abhay grabs Anushka by her shoulders . Chaand puts a foot forward to stop Abhay but Haseena grabs his arm and holds him back. Abhay's pupils turn red and Anushka can see his canines rising and his eyebrows protruding.

Anushka ( clenching her fists )- Abhay no' don't'.

Abhay ( hisses at her )- I won't '.i have to keep you alive , soul sister' otherwise who will find Maithli for me?

Anushka ( her eyes going wide in shock)- Find her?

Abhay leaves her and going to a trunk , he slowly pulls out a ragged purple dress with stain marks that have shriveled the cloth ' he holds it in his arms and they all look at the dress in horror'.

Flash : Maithli being dragged away by the werewolves , screaming for help. Abhay held back by Chaand , Haseena and many other vampires''Maithli screaming Abhay's name and her voice echoing in the jungle.

Abhay ( fingering the fabric lovingly)- This is all that I found'. Not her'.she must have screamed and bled a lot when she died'( tears rolling down his cheeks)'.and I could do nothing'..( looks at Anushka)'.i asked you'didn't i? If Maithli could be brought back' I didn't believe the teasers of Sambhav' I believed you!

Anushka ( looking down)- I had no option, Abhay! You were weak ' you were vulnerable ' I ' I couldn't tell you'.th-that'.the werewolves had preserved her body'..

Abhay has to clench his fists to restrain himself from hitting Anushka'.he takes her hand and puts it on the dress. She looks at him with tears but Abhay's face stays firm and hard.

Abhay ( in a scary warning tone)- Put your powers to use. I have seen Maithli and she is nearby. So is the witch's cross' witch's cross is not a myth! It never was and now , I know it is in Dobriyaal Mansion. '..(grabs Anushka's neck)'find. Maithli's. body's. location'.or'.DIE!

With this Abhay strides out of the attic , his tears not stopping and his face not softening'.

Anushka looks at the dress in her hands and then, at Chaand and Haseena'.

Chaand ( alarmed )-She is coming back''she has reached Abhay'.

Haseena ( shocked )- Reached Abhay from beyond the reaches of life and death'

Anushka ( healing her own neck that has been bruised by Abhay )- I still have Maithli's words ringing in my head'.she had always said that Abhay will always be her's'.( looks at the dress)'.isn't it strange that Abhay has found Maithli just when Abhay is softening to Piya?

Haseena ( shaking her head )- This is a lull before a storm'We know Maithli and what she is capable of'

Chaand ( nods)- Possessive of Abhay, she was' possessive enough to envy the wind that touched Abhay'..if she comes back, Piya is'..

Anushka looks horrified and Haseena thoughtful'..

At Sambhav's house.

Sambhav is lying on the couch in his off white pajamaaz , bare chest and his sculpted body glistening in the moonlight spilling in through the large window of the living hall. He is looking up at the ceiling ' his grey eyes stormy and his eyebrows narrowed. He is fingering the wine glass lying at an arm's length and he appears thoughtful. The animal skulls and skins adorning the posh walls seem to be looking at him. On the table are lying pictures of Abhay , Piya, Maithli , Misha, Kabir and everyone else who is important. There are some ancient manuscripts lying there as well. Sambhav looks to his left at the table and then, sits up. He lights a pipe and takes in a puff'.a thoughtful grin is playing on his lips as he ruffles his gorgeous black curls and picks up a manuscript.

Sambhav ( reading )- If Maithli comes back' if at all, knowing what Abhay is capable of , I will need to control Maithli'.a witch. I need to protect myself from her and for that I need a female werewolf'a female werewolf with Maithli's blood in her. If I manage that , then , even if Abhay gets Maithli , my life will not be endangered from her. '.but whom do I convert into a werewolf?

Sambhav looks at the pictures and his jaw tightens'

Sambhav ( sighing )- Piya? No way! Abhay will make pulp out of me and how will I confuse him about his feelings , then?...besides , I have to find out how exactly this chick is Maithli's doppelganger '.Misha? Hmmmm'.beautiful and she is my new fancy, can't risk her'..aha, Tanushree and Tracker'now, maybe finally I can put these bimbos to some use' ( rolls his eyes )' how I hate my job! So good looking and so badass .. but somebody's gotta do the bad work.

Just then, the doorbell of his house rings and Sambhav gets alert. He looks at the wall clock and it is 3 am. He is alarmed and his eyes glow. He quickly stuffs the pictures and the papers into a folder and gets up.

Sambhav ( going towards the door )- Can't be Jack or any of the new boys. My men don't use doorbells and Abhay doesn't visit me'..who could it be? Misha?

Sambhav slips on his vest and opens the door. He is taken aback to see a fuming and confused Piya at his door ' he has to blink his eyes twice or thrice to make sure he is seeing what he is seeing.

Sambhav ( letting her in)- Piya? Piya Jaiswal? Whoa! What are you doing at my house at this hour? Abhay' oops Kabir will kill me .

Piya walks in furiously and slamming the door shut , glares at him.

Piya ( blasts him)- What did you tell Misha, Sambhav? That I and Abhay were getting all heated up in the garden ? That.. that Abhay kissed me?

Sambhav smiles and sniffs Piya's hair and neck from a decent distance '.

Sambhav ( leaning onto a sofa)- Shouldn't you be asking this to Abhay, Piya? I think there is enough heat between the two of you for even the polar bears to go and get ACs attached to their bodies' and don't tell me you didn't realize that you are carrying Abhay's perfume on your skin!......( dramatically )' oops, did you forget that Abhay kissed you? Sigh! You both looked so dreamy under that tree .. that I had tears in my eyes.

Piya smells her shoulders and she is stunned.Yes, it is Abhay's scent! He was that close to her? Sambhav is observing her confused expressions. He is amused and he puts his hands on her shoulders and looks at Piya ' looking into her eyes powerfully and Piya becomes zapped.

Sam( naughtily )- Abhay kissed you, Piya' go back.. remember'he was on your skin and he kissed you''asked you to return to Kabir'..

As Sambhav says so, Piya recalls Abhay kissing her and her senses going for a toss.

Sambhav ( observing her )- Remember now?... ( Piya is dazed )'.Hmmm' Abhay is such a hotmess , isn't he? He dazes women and they forget what he did to them'

Piya ( in shock )- Abhay'

Sambhav leaves her shoulders and jams his hands into his pockets lazily.

Sambhav ( seriously )- Falling in love with him, eh? Poor , poor Piya'

Piya almost trips on her feet and Sambhav gently makes her sit on a couch. He gives her a glass of water to drink and she takes it like a natural reflex action.

Sambhav ( to himself )- You are lucky , Abhay. Whoever you have met in your life has always fallen irrevocably in love with you' but what about you? What are you going to do'..Maithli'. or' ( looks at a dazed Piya)'this angelic teen who has you stamped all over her ?

In the woods,

Abhay is sitting all alone on a rock ' numb and holding Maithli's locket in his hand. His eyes are swollen and blood shot even as his chiseled face shines like a marble sculpture in the moonlight against his black pullover'..

Abhay ( ridden with emotion)- I am bringing you back, Maithli' I am bringing you back'.

He holds the locket close to his heart and closes his eyes'

Flash : Abhay kissing Piya in the garden.

The locket drops from his hands as his eyes fly open in shock'

TO BE CONTINUED'.

Edited by Pocahontas - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG! Poco, I swear I had tears in my eyes seeing Abhay's condition!😭 Poor guy!! Horrible stuff has happened to him! More than he deserved! And now, he's in for a tough decision to make: Maithili or her doppelganger??! Something tells me Maithili is going to come back and be a kabab mein haddi for AbhIya. Sam!😡

Lovely update!👏
Edited by Chill_Out - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG this was Awwwwwww..
Abhay's anger,his luv for Maithili..it's too strong..
Talking about strong I think Maithili is much stronger than Chandeena i.e they afraid..
Sambhav wonder whom will he change into a werewolf..??
Piya finally remembers that Abhay kissed her..gr8 update Poca..& I'm sooooo waiting for next updates..
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Posted: 14 years ago
continue poco pls
i want maithili to return and have abhay choose piya over her
cant wait to read the next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
read all your updates... like the way the story is moving forward.. good work..
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Posted: 14 years ago
LOOOVVEEDDD the update, Pocz. 😳

Abhay is stuck in the same position as Stefan.. when he realised that the girl he used to love, once, has come back. And I hope, like Stefan, Abhay chooses the girl who loves him, not wants/obsesses him.. But I can't be sure about Maithali... She doesn't seem evil, just possessive and doesn't let anything get in her way..like Katherine? Great going. 👏👏

And.. LOL, Do I even need to say this? My crush for SAM is back.. I wonder whether the whole 'lying bare chest in the sofa' did the trick. 😆 And.. Can't wait to see who he changes! =D


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