Abhay-Piya FF: And I will be waiting.Book 1 Ended.

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Neetz

@.Jane..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#151

the last thing I need is a crazy pathologically obsessive teenager stalking me.

You need to brush up your vocabulary , Piya. You have been calling me that for ages now!

🤣🤣🤣

Awesome update. A lot of things got cleared out here. I still don't get Maya's problem though.

And I loved the end! So last update, Abhay's sensitive side came out and this time Piya! I can totally sense a love story in its most premature stage!

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maheen

@Maheen210

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Posted: 14 years ago

#152

wow that was quite unexpected. im so excited now... well, lovely update!! keep up the good work.😉

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meaw

@meaw

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Posted: 14 years ago

#153

u knw wat ur story is driving me crazy

go nd meet ekta n present this to her lol

n plz pm me when u update

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Mona

@.:.MONA.:.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#154

hey that was a really interesting part..really well done..aww poor piya came back to see if abhi was alrgiht and despite being thankful he yells at her..lol....

❤️MONA

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-Lostindreams

@-Lostindreams

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Posted: 14 years ago

#155

Ur so so soooooooo good. Actually had read the first part whn it came out and today i read the rest. Man i love this. And i just love how fast u update. We don't have to wait long for an update from u.

Loving this FF, keep updating.

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Sonam

@prcns

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Posted: 14 years ago

#156

I refuse to understand situations of cowards'' ..............👍🏼 nice line

And stop sobbing like a soap queen . ..........🤣

Are you some sort of night creature that you keep wandering in jungles ? You are worse than a stalker, seriously, Jaiswal...............🤣 he called her Jaiswal😆

Abhay ( continuing the argument)- You know sometimes' ( pulls Piya closer and she squirms in his grasp uselessly) ' sometimes I think you are just jealous that I did not father your babies! ..................😲😲...........wht does he thinks of himself😡😆😆

Abhay (losing patience )- Piya, you need HELP. You are becoming obsessed with me and the last thing I need is a crazy pathologically obsessive teenager stalking me. ................gosh, really he thinks of himself highly🤣

Piya ( anxiously feeling his head , cheek and arms )- You okay? I heard a wild beast and I got so scared, I thought something might happen to you and'.................awwww😳☺️😍

me: black bold

nice read again, Poco. thnx
😊

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TheBlackJaguar

@TheBlackJaguar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#157

Thank you so much everyone for taking out time to read my work. It means a lot to me and i am glad that you all enjoyed reading it. I shall update it in an hour or so. 🤗

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-Doppelganger-

@-Doppelganger-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#158

Abhay ( continuing the argument)- You know sometimes' ( pulls Piya closer and she squirms in his grasp uselessly) ' sometimes I think you are just jealous that I did not father your babies! 🤣 🤣

Awesome update.....Ekta should read this and give such dialogues to Abhay!

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deepti

@.VanishingDream

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Posted: 14 years ago

#159

awesome OS dear!!!!

do continue soon!!!!

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Neetz

@.Jane..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: Kritz08
Abhay ( continuing the argument)- You know sometimes' ( pulls Piya closer and she squirms in his grasp uselessly) ' sometimes I think you are just jealous that I did not father your babies! 🤣 🤣
Awesome update.....Ekta should read this and give such dialogues to Abhay!

I think poor Viv and Sukku won't be able to give the shot because they'll be so busy laughing!!🤣

I was surprised they gave the 'demo chahiye' without even a smirk!😊