Abhay-Piya FF: And I will be waiting.Book 1 Ended. - Page 17

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Posted: 14 years ago
I just luved u're Dialogues honey..!!
Abhay was too good..I see a deep bounding that's growing btw AbhiYa..
The way Piya was worried abt Abhay when she heard wolves..n she totally forgets everyother nasty thing..n even she's not scared to face wolfs..n goes inside the forest again, only to save Abhay..!! I'm desperately waiting for the next update..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Sambhav is pacing about angrily in his room , rubbing his hands together to calm himself. Abhay's image is flashing across his mind and he only getting angrier. We can see that his house is adorned with animal skulls and skins and paintings of wolves and werewolves. He looks very upset. Just then, the doorbell rings and Sambhav goes running to open the door.

Sambhav ( opening the door)- What took you so long, Jack? I was…

Sambhav's words die in his mouth as he sees a shocked Misha looking at him, holding her helmet under her arm. Sambhav becomes alert and his face breaks into a charming smile.

Sambhav ( leaning on the door )- Aha, I like that, Miss.Dobriyaal. I never gave you my address and you found me… pretty fast and smooth , I must say.

Misha ( blinking her eyes at him in disbelief)- Are you gay, Sambhav? Your parents will get so depressed that you are making a real life Dostana!

Sambhav is puzzled.

Samvbhav ( letting her in)- What? What did you just say? I am GAY? What made you think that?

Misha ( laughs )- Well, if a man opens the door of his house at 1am in the night in full excitement taking a man's name , what should I think? … Jack! Oh Jack!

Sambhav raises his eyebrows with a grin and closes the door.

Sambhav( making himself comfortable in a couch )- We will discuss my sexual orientations later, madam… first , you tell me what are you doing here ?

Misha (fascinated by Sambhav's house interiors )- I didn't know it was your house, Sam. My bike broke down and I preferred to seek refuge here than become a king's dinner for some downmarket wolves.

A small smile comes over Sam's face but he says nothing.

Misha ( looking at the living room)- WOW! Sam, your house looks like some classic wildlife museum , dude! Are these real or just artificial reproductions?

Sambhav ( amused by her wonder)- Real. All this is real, Misha. My ancestors were hunters ….

Misha ( gleefully )- Cool! That is interesting.

Sambhav ( getting up)- You wait here. I will just go and see what is wrong with your bike.

Misha ( makes a face)- It is an imported bike, desi hunter.

Sambhav ( turns at the door )- You will be at your home by 2am, madam. Chill.

Sambhav goes out and Misha continues to look around the house and pick things and observe them. Just then , she sees a silver box that is empty. It looks very old and there is a dragon face carved on it. There is a fit space inside it that is empty. Misha narrows her eyebrows as she picks it up.

Misha ( puzzled)- What is this doing here!

Suddenly , she hears the roaring sound of her bike and the box drops from her hands. It rolls and goes to Sambhav's feet who has just walked back in. He looks at the box at his feet and picks it up. His face goes grave and he clutches it.

Misha ( rushing over to him)- I am so sorry, Sam! I dropped it by mistake. I hope it didn't break.

Sam ( closing his hands on the box)- No, such things don't break, Misha. Go, your bike is ready and just fine. And…. ( looks at a confused Misha)…. Misha, are you listening to me? What are you looking at ? I told you that the box didn't break.

Misha – No, it's not that…. I think I have seen this box somewhere….or something that looks like it … I see it everyday.

Sambhav is stunned to hear that.

Sambhav – WHAT? Are you, are you, like sure?

Misha nods.

Sambhav ( putting up an act )- Never mind. Go home now and… ( puts his hand forwardz)…. And I shall see you in college tomorrow.

Misha shakes his hand and as she does so, Sam closes his eyes and through Misha, he mentally visits her house, holding the little box in his other hand. Sam's eyes stop in Arnab's study again and again. He releases her hand and Misha falls back.

Misha ( rubbing her hand)- Whoa Sam! You have the hand of a monster.

Sam ( taps her bare arm)- You need some muscle up there , young lady! Go, get going now.

Misha smiles and goes to go but Sam blocks her way by putting his arm on her abdomen.

Misha ( laughs)- You are flirting with the wrong girl , Sam.

Sam ( grins)- No. I am just removing all your doubts of my being gay.

Misha looks at his grey eyes for a few seconds and then, removes his hand and leaves..

Misha ( jokes )- I shall think it over , Sam… dream about Jack!

Misha buzzes off on her bike and Sam's expression turns grim. Just then, Jack jumps in through the window.

Jack ( huffing and puffing)- Sam ! You won't believe what I found at Piya's orphanage.

Sam ( turning towards him)-What?

Jack ( shows him a paper )- Piya was brought to the orphanage at the age of 6 from Jaamgarh!....

Sambhav ( looks at the paper)- Jaamgarh….That is the same place as …. Oh no! Jack, get our men together and in 48 hours , I want this chick's whole history! Even before Abhay can smell it

Jack – Don't worry. We are leaving tonight…..but what are you so worried about?

Sambhav ( fingering the door from where Misha just went)- I need to get close to Misha.

Jack ( surprised )- Do you like her?

Sambhav ( irritated )- Don't be stupid. Jack. It is not about my liking…. It is what she has possibly hidden somewhere in her house ….something that needs to be destroyed before Abhay finds it.

Jack ( horrified )- Oh no…..you mean… you mean the .. the Witch's cross?..Misha has it?

Sambhav ( grimly)- It is in her house. That is all I know and I must find and destroy it….otherwise all of Abhay's doors will open to Maithli and nobody will be able to stop him from bringing her back to life! Abhay should not get the witch's cross – NO WAY!

TO BE CONTINUED…

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Posted: 14 years ago
plezz carry on bt more focused on abiya plezzz
bt very good indeed 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow!! Amazing!! Loved the Sam-Mish seen but what a captivating twist! Mish has something which Abhay shoudn't get and hence, Sam will use her! Ooohhhh, this will be interesting. And what about Pia's history? I can't wait!! Please update soon!!😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Poco,
I am really speechless...............What a OS yaar and loved the updates!!!!!!!!!!!! Loved it and i adore the way how u r making it so interesting.
U r the best,brilliant and an awesome writer.
I am loving yr OS more than the show now.
I am loving it completely, Its a complete entertainment.
Eager for next update.
Keep going.
Edited by ssdtvgojan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow, that was again a great twist.

Hmm ,.. Is Piya mets? with a new name? This will be good. Can't wait to read the next part!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Next day , Abhay is sitting in the library early morning with a whole stack of books and the librarian and all girls are watching him. He is busy scribbling on papers with his left hand but to everyone's shock , he is not even opening the books. The librarian comes and stands over his head.

Librarian ( clearing his throat )- I don't think you are really using those books, son.

Abhay puts the pen down and looks up.

Abhay (coolly )- Of course , I am using them, Mr.Vohra '. ( holds up his notes ).. you want to check? '( runs his fingers over the books)'.or do you want to ask me which page says what?

Librarian (adjusting his specs) - How will I know what is written in which book ?

Abhay (smiles) - Exactly. When you don't know what is written on what page , how do you know that am not using the books?

The girls suppress a giggle and the librarian feels embarrassed.

Librarian ( pushing up his spectacles )- They are precious books ' only for reference and'.

Abhay ( irritated )- And lying here since 1821, I know that!

The librarian looks surprised but without a word goes away. We see what Abhay has been writing and they are actually details of werewolf attacks in 1900 and connected witch hunt. As Abhay returns to his writing , he suddenly sees the chair opposite him pulled up and a fuming Piya glares at him. Abhay gives her a bored look.

Abhay ( going back to his writing )- Did you see the mirror in the morning that you are so upset? I know it is tough to live with such an ugly face.

Piya (fuming) - Cut the crap and come out with me' right now!

Abhay ( looks at her )- With you? I'd rather die in a dark cell than get seen in public with you. Leave and let me do my work.

Piya ( slaps her hand on the paper that he is writing )- Abhay! Do you want me to create a scene here? About you and Maya?

Abhay lifts his eyes to her face and gently removes her hand from the paper and puts the papers in a leather file.

Abhay (getting up) - Come out , then. I don't have much time to waste on you. There is work to be done. '.( smiles at a pretty young girl )'..Kiara, do you mind handing over these books to the librarian.

Kiara ( gushing happy )- Of course! Anything for you, Abhay.

Piya makes a disgusted face and literally grabs Abhay's arm to take him out of there.

Piya is taking Abhay through the back corridor and he jerks off her hand.

Abhay ( coldly )- I am not going to run away, Piya. When I am coming with you , I am coming with you. So, stop trying to find reasons to touch me.

Piya ( shoots back )- Touch you? Yeah, sure. Maybe my next lifetime'. ( takes out her cellphone and dials a number )'. Hello, Maya. Me and Abhay are in the back alley. We are waiting for you. Come here ' RIGHT NOW.

She ends the call. Abhay shakes his head and goes and stands near the parapet wall, resting his elbows on the same. He is just looking out at the hills, the trees and the sky. He looks totally unperturbed. Piya comes to him.

Piya ( sternly )- You do remember that today is the day of your decision.

Abhay nods but does not look at her. Just then, Maya comes and as both Piya and Abhay turn towards her , Abhay is shocked to look at her state. There are bruises on her cheekbones and her forearms and it seems she has been crying all night. Maya just looks at him helplessly. Abhay is about to react but realizing that Piya is right next to him , he just clenches his fists and keeps quiet.

Piya brings Maya in front of Abhay and she looks as livid as she was in the library.

Piya ( furiously )- Do you plan to continue torturing Maya like this, Abhay?

Abhay says nothing.

Piya ( angrier )- Is it a yes or is it a no? Do you accept her and her baby or you don't?

Abhay looks at Maya but she says nothing except looking guilty. Then, Abhay looks at Piya.

Abhay ( calmly )- You believe that I have beaten her up?

Piya ' Yes.

Abhay ( sharply )- You believe that I m capable of making that kind of pulp out of a pregnant woman?

Piya looks at Abhay on this and she remembers all the times that Abhay saved her life. She looks softened for a few seconds but then, hardens up , looking away from his eyes.

Piya ' Yes.

Abhay ( in a warning tone )- Think and answer, Piya. Your opinion of me today and the action that follows seals our fate right here.

Maya wants to intervene but cannot.

Piya ( puzzled )- What do you mean?

Abhay ( firmly )- If you send me to prison today or expose me or do anything against me today , I swear and I promise that I shall never speak a word to you again in my life. I step out of your life.

Piya is stunned to hear that from Abhay and she looks hurt that he would say something like that. But her resolve gets the better of her.

Piya ( strongly )- I don't care.

Abhay ( shrugs )- Great then. I am the father Of her baby , right Maya?...I am a serial abuser and I accept it. Now, do what you please, Piya Jaiswal.

With this Abhay turns to go and a furious Piya dials a number on her cellphone.

Piya ( into the phone )- Hello, police station?

There is a strange smile on Abhay's face as he goes away from the two women.

TO BE CONTINUED.

Edited by Pocahontas - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey nice one yaar....i liked it...will u pm me when u update??
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved ur update. i think in future u will be a good story writer.👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved it Poco.. I think I prefer to read your OS more than watch the TV.... If you don't mind could you PM me when you update..... I certainly don't want to miss any of it.....

Ann.

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