Love's never too easy UPDATED Pg 19 - 18/11 - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
thanks for the pm. I am late in replying because i was caught up with exams and other assignments

brilliant update. liking your diffrent pov style. i am more intigrued by kabir-nisha's story than abhiya's. are you making them a couple? would love that though i don't want them to be a couple in the serial. and i am quite amused how you used the imprintation thing with the vampire😆. i never watched TVD. if you have some free time can you please tell me about it's concept?
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Nirjhor105

thanks for the pm. I am late in replying because i was caught up with exams and other assignments

brilliant update. liking your diffrent pov style. i am more intigrued by kabir-nisha's story than abhiya's. are you making them a couple? would love that though i don't want them to be a couple in the serial. and i am quite amused how you used the imprintation thing with the vampire😆. i never watched TVD. if you have some free time can you please tell me about it's concept?



Hey. 🤗
No worries. You have commented, that's enough. 😊

Thanks. 😊 If you ask me, I am more for Kabir-Nisha too in the FF! 😆 Me neither. They are like bro-sis in the actual show. 😆

Imprinting is like, copied from Twilight. There, the wolf pack imprinted on a particular girl in their lifetime. I used the same concept. 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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(Kabir's POV )

Nobody understands. Nobody has ever understood, and nobody ever will.

I rushed out of the room, fetched my keys, sat in the car and started driving. I wasn't quite sure where I am going, but that place would be anywhere but here.

I have always been misunderstood. What does Abhay think? I have been making a big hue and cry for the last 200 years over a random girl. All of this is just my obsession? That we were never meant to be? That she wasn't the right girl for me? That there can be someone else?

I pushed the brakes. It felt like I would start crying. But nothing came out. No tears. And that only made it worse. The feeling that I had been changed despite my will. I had been taken away from nisha. And my love is being deemed as 'nothing'.

Why is the world so unfair? I have loved her since the last 200 years. And yet, I didn't get her. But..Abhay. He never believed in love. He never believed in imprinting. And he gets his girl.

And, to top that. He thinks I am gonna kill Pia. Me. He thinks im that evil. That Im gonna kill her girl only because I didn't get mine.

Why does nobody understand me? My pain, my feelings, my grief? Im not evil. Im not evil at all.

I reached the college and parked the car.

Same old life. Since the last 200 years. You don't change. You go to the same college. Again and again. Everyone changes. Go to different universities. But I don't. I stay the same. Everyday. Always. Forever. And I am sick of it.

But atleast I get to go to different colleges in different parts of the city. I managed a slow smile as I climbed up the stairs towards my first class.

I didn't notice a girl coming from the opposite side of the stairs. And I collided into her head-first. It didn't hurt me. But yeah, the girl must have felt like colliding with a stone.

''Sorry'' I said. Though I didn't mean it, she should have been more careful. But yeah, no one fancies a collision with a iron armour, so I felt bad. Kinda bad.

She was wearing jeans with a top. Funky bangles in one hand. A bracelet in another. 'No one messes with me' written on her shirt. And a cool junk necklace.

''OMG Who are you? Are you wearing a iron armour or something? Yikes.'' She rubbed her face with her hands, and then I noticed. I gasped AlI could hear was that. Blood started rushing through my ears and eyes and drowned everything else. I looked at her , eyes wide, a frown on her face. And I couldn't keep my eyes off that face. It was like, I was living a dream 200 years ago. The same black big eyes. The same nose. The same lips. The same..''Nisha?''

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( Misha's POV )

''Dude can't you see where you are going?'' Damn. Great. Just great. Right on my first day. A collision with someone so strong it freaks me out. ''And it's misha, with a M. Now excuse me.''

I stumbled out of the way, still recovering. Woah. It felt like my nose will start to bleed any second. I turned around. He was still standing there. Omg, weirdo.

I touched my nose. It wasn't bleeding. Thank god. The last thing I needed was a wet patch on my face on the first day.

I turned straight and collided with someone.. again. But this time it was someone soft. Female. I looked up to see a girl with long black hair and brown eyes leaning over me. ''I am so sorry.'' She said.

''Its alright. I have been getting quite a lot of this, you know?'' I pointed to my nose.

Her eyebrows slid higher in confusion.

''Nevermind.'' I smiled.

''Okay.'' She grinned. ''Hi, I am Pia. New student?''

''Yeah.'' I extended my hand.

She took it and smiled. ''Me too.''

''Great..so do you know where the class is? ''

''Yeah''.

I smiled and let her lead the way.


This part was a bit random. I didn't know what to show. 🤔

Spare me this time. I promise I will provide a nice AbhIya part in the next part. 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is Freaking Engrossing!
It's just so captivating!!!!!!
It gets better with every passing day!

My Akshu is Just soooooo talented!

*raises her collars*

This was just too good to read especially Kabir's POV!
I mean readers can easily sense his misery and position...
I love the way you focus on each and every characters expressions!

WHAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!😭

I want more!!!!!!!!!!1
😆

Update sooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!
Promise me..... wont you????
😳
Edited by radt - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
Shut up.....
Its not at all boring!
I'll give u one now!

I love Abhiya's scenes no doubt... like they make me feel the passion n all.....
But the way Kabir's feelings and thot process was expressed was awesome too!
👏
🤗

Please give space to Kabir too along with Abhiya!
Warna......😈🤣
Edited by radt - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
hey akansha awesoooooooome.............
wonderful.fab.superb.......upd.
loved it...........
do cont.soon.........
thanx for the pm...........
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: mayadika11

hey akansha awesoooooooome.............

wonderful.fab.superb.......upd.
loved it...........
do cont.soon.........
thanx for the pm...........



Thanks Maya. 😊
Really? Woah. I thought this is the most boringest part I have ever wrote. I couldn't think of anything.
Thanks again. And yeah sure. 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: radt

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is Freaking Engrossing!
It's just so captivating!!!!!!
It gets better with every passing day!

My Akshu is Just soooooo talented!

*raises her collars*

This was just too good to read especially Kabir's POV!
I mean readers can easily sense his misery and position...
I love the way you focus on each and every characters expressions!

WHAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!😭

I want more!!!!!!!!!!1
😆

Update sooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!
Promise me..... wont you????
😳



Thankssss Radhaaaa! 🤗

You are one of my encouragements, do you know that? 😃

It was hard, you know? To write and imagine what a vampire must feel like. I have no experience in the field whatsoever. 😆 So I relied on what Damon and Stefan felt in season 1 and likh daala. 😆

U will get more tomorroww!!
U will get a burning hot classroom scene with all the characters! 😉

Keep waiting! 😛

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Posted: 14 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: radt

Shut up.....

Its not at all boring!
I'll give u one now!

I love Abhiya's scenes no doubt... like they make me feel the passion n all.....
But the way Kabir's feelings and thot process was expressed was awesome too!
👏
🤗

Please give space to Kabir too along with Abhiya!
Warna......😈🤣



Kabir's feeling weren't easy to write.. But yeah, koshish karo toh sab hai asaan! 😆
Thank youu Radha! 😊

Haan haan..obviously! You know I am biased toward whatever jodi contains Kabir in it. 😳😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
Burning classroom scene......
m already burning with anxiety!
write soon!
good luck sweety!

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