Love's never too easy UPDATED Pg 19 - 18/11 - Page 6

Originally posted by: ManEet_KaSh

Awesome FF

Loved the story till now!

Pls add me to ur PM List..

P.S. Update soon!

Yamini

plz do PM me :) just loved it....!!! Great..!!😉

Originally posted by: Arushi.

Hey 😊

Seems like an interesting concept. Will get back to it for sure :)

EDIT:

Hey there again,

I like the story. It's not original, but to me it looks like a very good adaption of both Twilight and TVD. (If you arent inspired by them, then I should tell you, your updates reminded me of these two stories). You haven't dwelled on the character of Pia much, so I cant say anything on that, except that she is one of the feisty-damsell-in-distress types, if you know what I mean.

Thanks :)
Yes it is inspired by both Twilight and the TVD.. I am a big fan of TVD ( And damon, needless to add. 😆 ) And I wanted to write a story based on vampires with a college setting just like PYKEK provided. And yeah, based on the characters of Pia, Kabir, Misha and Abhay. Keeping the originality intact, but providing different layers to different characters.
I haven't dwelled on Pia's character because I have been experimenting with different POVs. Like, in the next part, I have thought of bringing in Kabir's POV. To understand his character better. And no, Pia is no damsel-in-distress.. Well, not I have in mind anyway.. Lets see how am I able to bring that out. :)

Abhay, aaaah, pehli nazar main pyaar ho gaya boss? 😆 On a more serious note, I like the way he is confident of himself, and yet he loses himself to the plays of nature when he first see's the love of his life, finally (may I add). Just by seeing her he develops a sense of protectivness and duty towards here, wonder what'll happen when he gets to know her more.

That is supposed to be the idea. Knowing she is your soulmate when you look in her eyes. The magnetic attraction, totally Bollywood types! 😆
The AbhIya angle will build up on a more mysterious sense in my FF rather than the romantical angle involved. That's what will mark the line between the real PYKEK and my FF! :)

Kabir, doesnt look like negative to me. He is wallowing in his own grief. To be given something that he never asked for, to be paying for someone else's faults, to lose someone you adored so dearly. I use the word adore and not love, because I am not sure if that was love. Like Abhay said, your soulmate stays with you in whatever form you are. So, I guess I will wait for this one. But I do hope, you shed more light on the story of Neha as an when required, because I think that is something which will help us understand his character better. Guess, he is still living 200 years back with her, and his past.

I agree. That's what I was trying to put out. He never asked to be a vampire, he was just trying to protect his brother, and got bitten and lost everything. And about Nisha, ( Nisha, not Neha :) ) well, you understood it all. She is not supposed to be her soulmate. Someone else is. But Kabir has been wallowing in self pity much too far to notice that he can live without her.

I'd be waiting, and also for a PM for each part.

I sure will PM you. :)

It's really nice till now, and I like it :)

Thanks :)

Much Love,

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Originally posted by: radt

AA gayi teri nikammi!!!!!!!!!!!

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ab bata kahan hai update.....?

*searches frantically*

kuch nai!

koi nah ....... purana hi read kar lia dobara!

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Originally posted by: Edwardbella

plz do PM me :) just loved it....!!! Great..!!😉

Originally posted by: radt

meri toh koi importance hi nahi hai!

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