FF: Love Ajj Kal: Ch8 updated on p12 - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
#21
Awesome parts, I loved them both, love how you are showing the problems I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#22
amazing parts
cant wait to see what happens...plzz update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
Hiiii

Back to reading my Fave FFs (your's and alu's) seriously you guys make my day ........ I love you for writng this .............

the part was Awesome as usual :) Raunak and hi arrogance Araina and her ill manner UFFFF they are Killing...

Do continue soon

Lekha
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24
Really like how you can write good scenes, I can only make up a general picture. Can't wait for Prasha to meet.😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25
Diiiiii, I'm not first😔 ah well. Great update, loving how the couples are not good together, meaning mote space for the proper couples to get together. Lol. Di hurry up and update, and I'm also expecting an commet on my FF, which I updated. Lol.
Tc Di.
Choti
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hello all my wonderful Reader
how r all of u? hope u are all doing great !
here is ch 3 and their is a suprise for all of u hope u like it ! sorry for being late but i've been sooo busy and will b n the coming weeks so once agin sorry if the other ch are late as well
anyways enough with this don't forget to comment and press the like button.
chapter 3

Early morning at the at the Rai's house

Preteeksha is walking down the stairs wearing a white sari with multi colored polka dots and wearing hoop earrings that have multi colored stones in them . (looking stunning)

Preteeksha: Raju, shanti

Raju and Shanti: ji didi

Preteeksha: mein aur Suhaani are going shopping aaj toh agar tumhare Raunak Bhaiya poocha toh batana ki aaj late ho saktha. Aur haan jab Raunak jagjhai breakfast daydoh

Raju and Shanti: didi breakfast main bhaiya ko kya baanana?

Preteeksha: kuch nahi raat ka joh bhi khaanaa hai woh doh.

Raju and Shanti: didi aur raat ka khaana mein kya baanaai?

Preteeksha: kuch nahi aaj mein pizza order kar thi hoon aur bhaiya office jaane kay bade tum dono relax karo.

Raju and Shanti: (smiling )thank u didi aur aaj tum yeh sari mein bhot pyaari lagri haan.

Preteeksha: thank u kaka gaari baahir nikalo

Das is house

Preteeksha walks in the house and see's Suhaani chasing Aziz with the bailan

Preteeksha runs to her: omg Suhaani tum yeh kya Karen give me the bailan, aziz ab kya hua

Aziz: kuch nahi di mein tu sirf poocha kay aaj phir aloo kay paraathai aur phir she started chasing me with the bailan.

Suhaani :haan your right tum ko yeh nazar hai kay aaj phir wohi same khaana but tum yeh nahi dehka ki kal raat I didn't sleep a wink kyunki nihaal kept me up, aur I got up early to feed him, phir I quickly iron ur clothes , make ur Tiffin for lunch then rush to make ur breakfast .

Preteeksha: aziz this is not right Suhaani tum aur niahaal kay vasste yeh sab kart hi haan aur instead of appreciating it u complain that's very wrong .

Aziz: ur right di (holding both ears and bending down on both knees) I'm sooooooo sorry my rasgula u do soo much for us and I don't even realize it thanku for being such a wonderful wife and mother I'm truly sorry.

Suhaani : theek hai I fogive u *smiles *

Preteeksha looking at them and wondering aziz is such a good pati he knows when he's in the wrong and apologies to her kaash Raunak bhi.

Aziz: ok u both have fun shopping I'm running late

Suhaani : what abt breakfast?

Aziz: I know u made it with so much luv but I'll get something at the office

Suhaani :oye pati ji tum kuch bhole toh nahi

Smiling Aziz turns around and comes bak to suhaani and kisses her on the forehead : have fun bye

Suhaani : prats give me 5 min then we'll leave

Preteeksha: sure no problem take ur time.

Out shopping

Suhaani : Preteeksha I have a surprise for u look over there

Preteeksha: omg Devika !

Devika comes running to them wearing a white anarkali with dark and light blue polka dots wearing sliver hoop earrings.

Preteeksha: Devika kaise ho ? itne dino kay baad aur uncle kaise haan

Devika: I know bhot time kay baad aaj hun theeno ek saat aaj toh masti kay din aur papa toh busy haan election time u know how it is . aur ek aur chees hai I'm in love

Preteeksha and Suhaani shocked with last thing she said

Suhaani :what kab kon aur kaise

Devika : ek larka haan Milind he is too cute but papa is very protective if I even smile at a guy u how he is na and with these body guards toh life is difficult but today no guards I told papa I was meeting u guys so he was fine with it. Any way yeh sab later lets shop

Shashanks office

Shashank is at his desk working away on the laptop just when Milind walks in the room

Milind: yaar Shashank I need ur help big problem hai

Shashank: ab kya hua

Milind :pyar yes I'm in luv

Shashank: kya toh pyaar kar kay problem hai ?

Milind:no yaar it's her papa he is a politician he never lets her out of his sight she always has body guards with her!

Shashank: wah kya baat hai sirf ek politician ki bati mili kya tum ko?

Milind: come on Shanks help me

Shashank: ab woh larki khaan hai?

Milind: out with her friends shopping at the mall kyun

Shashank: cool chalo I have a plan

Milind: plan what plan shanks ur plans always scare me

Shashank: shut up and let's go

Meanwhile at the Rai's

Raunak comes home early Raunak: Raju Shanti !

Raju and Shanti: ji bhaiya apa

Raunak: haan chalo muhje help karo apa ki Preteeksha di kay liye ek surprise karna haan

Raju tum market jao aur bring me 100 roses 50 red 25 white and 25 pink aur haan shanti tum raju kay saath candles lake aao big small any size and haan colors should be red, white and yellow

Raju and Shanti: wow bhaiya so sweet of u aur kuch karna hai toh bolo hum ko

Raunak: no abhi kuch nahin baad mein decorate karna hai muhje bhot kam hai Chinese order karna phir jeweler kay pass who set pick up karne aur sab kuch preteeksha kay anna say phele hoona

Raju and Shanti: bhaiya yeh sab kuch khass hai kya ?

Raunak: haan because of Preteeksha I signed a huge contract jao blue file Mr. Shaw ko submit karna tha who galti sa Mr. Rao ko submit hua and he loved it .

At the mall

Shashank and Milind are looking for Devika at the mall

Smiling Shashank: so my rajesh khanna where is your spano ki rani

Milind: yaar she's over there point s to Devika she's wearing Polka dots

Just when Shashank is locking up to see who Milind is pointing to Preteeksha comes in front he mistakes her as Devika

Shashank: yup I see her in the polka dots, black shiny black hair hoop earrings

Milind looks at Devika and see her wearing hoop earrings

Milind: yup just then his phone rings hey Shashank I have to go to the office and sign important papers so we better do this later.

Shashank: no its fine u go sign them and meet me at your house in half hour I will bring her there .

Milind: ok u sure you know what you're doing?

Shashank: yes trust me go

Milind leaves Shashank follows the girls they go in to the season's store

After a couple of mins they come out just then he grabs Preteeksha's hand and pulls her in his car and drives away.

Taken back by what just happened Suhaani and Devika get in their car and follow them.

That's it for now precap ch4 : what will happen when Shashank finds out that he got the wrong girl

i always look forward for ur guys is comments so don't for to comment and press the like button
take care all u Love aaj Kal Fans

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Posted: 15 years ago
#27
nice part...waiting for the next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
😊Can't wait for the next part !
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
Diiiiiiiiiiii😊
Right this is annoying,😡 I wrote my comment three times, which got deleted each time. So my fourth, and hopfully final time trying to comment on this update.
Okai dokies, back to update.
Bravoooo!!! 👏 Really good di. I loved the whole shopping trip, but Shashank taking Prateekshas hand was just the best 😉 Hmmmm... I wonder how they will react, make it good Di 😆
Ronakkkk, not good. Angry one moment, Nice the other. But I guess that's how he will be. That's why him and Araina make such a good pair. Like there both bossy, PERFECT😉 I hope tour getting my hint 😛 You know Prasha all the way 😃
Right di, no probers in the delayed update, BUT, I would like a update which is longggg to make it up diii 😉 Im sure that's reasonable😊 LOL. Don't worry diii, Choti is giving you permission to take your time, we get updates, that's all we want😳
⭐️ for the update😊
Oh and di Thankyou for the pm.
Hmmm...
I'm thinking it's time for me to leave, and return to my boring revision.
And I think went a bit.... Just a bit over board with the smiles, they just clearly took my point across 😆
Tc my lovely Diiiiiii.
Chat soon.
Apki Pyaari se Choti 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
👍🏼 Nice part yaar! Luking forward to the nextttttt one!!! 😃

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