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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: _Sayu_

<font color="#0033ff">Really enjoyed a lot...... I love Indian functions....😊
n that [Sayu wan to visit Pluto] part was awesome.... Now I really want to visit 😉
happy that u wrote long update.....PraSha's ruthana-manana...song sequences...fight between gals-boys....n all.... nice yaar...😆 Thanks.....
do continue soon...😊
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Thankyouuu, I also love functions, and I'll definatly accompany you to Pluto😉 Im glad you enjoyed the long update, a lot of effort went into it! Glad you liked it and thanks for commenting. Update will be up soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: curry-sistah

LOoooooved it!

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(btw: thanks for the pm)



Glad you liked it, enjoy!
And no problem for the pm!
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Originally posted by: lalmirch28

<font color="#ff0099" size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Chotiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii😃😉😆!

</div>Loved it❤️u know ur di sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo well wow great job grabing the money part was soooooooooo me lol😆😊
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n ijusted luved the dancing scene with me nmy dreamy shanky😳😍☺️great song to pick thatnks 4 fulfilling my request!!!!!!!!! loved it awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee👍🏼job rooooooooocking chapter n good luck on ur exams u will do great thanks soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
much choti dil khush hua i need this after a blah and nonsense in my life it real brought a smile on my face thanks 4 cheering me up by ur lovely chapter

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Didiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii, where are you? Your Choti is missing you lots and lots and lots.
So this update was very special for you. I imagined the money part and the dance part perfectly for you. Amd you wish was my command, toh your dream dance became true!
Toh I'm glad you liked the update and you've said it know, the remaining of my exams will go great with your luck. And di, don't worry about all the tensions in life, focus on the upside!
And I hope you keep smiling my lovely Di!
Toh Im glad you liked it, and Thabkyouuuuuuuuuuu soooooooooooooo much for the great and long comment.
Lav Ya Di!
Chotiiiiii❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: prachi..panchi

awesome update

loveed it yaar

conitnue soon and thanks for the pm



Glad you liked it the update!
Will continue soon, and no problem for the pm!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Lily96

HI ALUUUUUUU!!!!! 😃 😃 😃
I like totally LURVED the whole chappie ⭐️. It wz a very nice shadi function and i'm glad u invited me 😆. Nice to see prats getting jealous 😉, and i rlly like ur twist of bringing us in it as well.
And OMG the time wen I was reading ur update, AT THE SAME TIME I was thinking to myself that I soooo hate studying (my exams are on 1st June), and so when i read my wish of graduating without studying I was 🤣. THANK YOU SOOO MUCH!!!! 🤗

But overall, I rlly rlly rlly liked this chapter. KEEP IT COMING!!!!!!!!! 🤣
All the best for your papers 👍🏼 . Keep rocking.
P.S. Can u give me a slightly bigger part in the next chappie 😉? PLEASE 😃!!!



HI LILAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY❤️
And how could I not invite you, you topped my guest list! I also liked the Prats getting jealous scene.
I just imagined you not wanting to study, like me😉 My exams are also on, I have ten more left!
I'm glad you liked it sooooooooo much.
And you wish for having a bigger part will come true in a few chapters. Just wait and watch.
Love Youuuuuuu!
And STAY TUNED!
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Mein aagayee! App sab ko eik acha sa update dene ki le! Sorry for the delay, I am admist exams, with ten more to go! Wish me luck. Anyway, thanks for all the comments on the previous chapter. I'm glad everyone liked it! So here goes another chapter. Enjoy....

Chapter Twenty Two

'Cholo, Radha kushi kushi apne ghar chalegee' Radhas mum said.
'Magar aunty uske begar ghar kitna sona sona lagra hain' Lily said upset.
'Woh toh hain. Magar tum sab usse kal reception pe mil re hoon na' Radhas mum explained and left with her husband to clean up.
'Chalo ladkia, hum kuch air karte hain, maan halka karne ke le. Toh hum jiju ke paise split karte hain. ' Fiza said. All girls getting excited sat on the floor and fiza counted the cash once again.
'Yeh total mein 9000 hain, aur hum ladkia bhi naun hain. Yeh toh simple hain, sabko ....' Fiza said but was cut by Lily.
'1000 each! Yesss! Dekha mera maths kitna good hai' Lily said proud of herself. Laughing at her childness, fiza split the money, and gave everyone 1000 each.
'Yeh mein apna Shahid Kapoor Fund mein dalu gi!' Maru said causing everyone to laugh again.
The girls carried on chatting one what each girl would do with their money.

At the Manhortra Mansion, Radha had finally reached, with the whole family awaiting to greet her. Standing in front of the doorstep, Nandita an Sonia stood there with their arti ki thali. Welcoming them, Radha stepped in, dropping the Rice, and entered the house as the Bahu and wife of Millind, offically becoming Mrs Radha Das.

'Chalo beta, baat jaon, taak gi hoon gi na.' Sonia said, and helped Radha sit down. Radha felt very much at home and loved the lively atmosphere.
Sitting down, everyone got comfortable after such a long day.
'Aunty, hum aaj yehi ragyee, I'm too tierd to go home.' Araina said to Nandita who happily agreed.
'Okay, sabse pehli, ek aur rasam.' Nandita said and bought a bowl full of milk and rose petals. 'Iss mein ek angotee hain. Jisne sab se pehli doond le woh hi zada upar hoygaa!' Nandita explained.
'Come on Bhabie, you can do it! Beat Bahia!' Prateeksha supported, alongside Araina also. Both Millind and Radha put their hands in the bowl and tried looking for the ring. A few minutes passed and the ring had not been discovered yet.
'Come on bhabie! You can do it' supported Araina.
'Nahin Bhaia app he jeetege!' Ronak said louder. The cheers grew louder and louder until finally the ring appeared in the hands of Radha.
'Yeees Bhabie. I knew you would win!' Prateeksha said cheering.

Smiling, Radha put the ring, on her finger, and slighly yawned, noticed by both Nandita and Sonia!
'Millind beta, chal Radha ko hotel mein leeja. Itne thak ge hain!' Nandita said.
Radha blushed and realised that people had seen her yawn.
Standing up Millind helped Radha get up, and where about to leave, when Araina and Prateeksha ran to the front door blocking the way out.
'Bahia, app yaan nahin hain, magar hum paise toh leingee. Chale nickale!' Araina said. Smiling Millind, took out his wallet, and handed his both sisters a wad of money each. Turning around he held some out to Suhaani also.
'Tum bhi meri behn jaise hoon!' Millind said and Suhaani took the money and smiled.
Millind finally took hold of Radhas hand amd both left for the hotel.

'Chalo bacha log, Dadis toh chalegee hain soone ke le, hum bhi jarre hain. Tum log bhi time pe sogana, kal reception bhi hain' Vikram explained and left with Sonia, whilst Subhash left with Nandita.

'Ajj baut maaza aaya! Mein toh baut takh ge hoon, I'm off to bed' Suhaani said.
'Me too!' Aziz said who was also falling asleep.

'I'm not tierd, well i am but not sleepy.' Araina said.
'Ek kaam karte hain, let's watch a movie' Shashank suggested.
'Good idea! I love movies. But has too be an Horror film!' Araina said!
The four got ready and place themselves on the sofa. With Ronak and Shashank in the corner and the girls in the middle. They had decided to watch Saw!
It had been an hour into the film, and Ronak and Araina had fallen asleep. Shashank was nearly asleep also, but Prateeksha however was really scared and had the scarf of her ghahra choli covering her face at times. The film continued and Araina, Ronak and Shashank where asleep on the sofa, whilst Prateeksha was scared out of her mind. Not being able to get up and turn the tv off, she carried on watching it, scared. Wincing at the bloody parts, Prateeksha carried on watching until the film finally finished! With the tv screen going banck, Prateeksha finally sighed in relief. Looking around she realised the tv remote was infact just on the table in front of her. Reaching out she turned the tv off, and looked around finding all three sleeping. Not bothering to wake them up, she too leant back onto Shashanks chest, resting her head on it, and shut her eyes, and within mometns was fast asleep. With both couples sleeping on the sofa, no one realised when the middle of the night became the morning and everyone had woken up finding the four children, the girls sleeping on their respective partners chests, on the sofa. Surrounding them where the whole family, and Radha and Millind, all smiling at how they all where still in their wedding clothes.
'Yeh bache upar kyon nahin gayee?' Asked Nandita.
'Laagta yeh bache raat ko tv dekh geh ether hi soygayee.' Sonia said.
'Aunty meri paas ek idea hain' Aziz said laughing cheekly. Telling everyone in silent, everyone agreed to chip in, with the Dadis being most excited.

'Ready?' asked Aziz.
'Yes!' everyone replied simultainuously.
'Three...Two...One....Goo!' Aziz said.

Its 6 A.M.
I Love You Mom
I' ll Have Some Corn Flakes
Mujhe Milega Dum
I' ll Have Good Shower
And A Shave
Listen To Music
Its Got Me Late
Put On My Jeans
And Provogue Shirt
Ladki Dhoondoonga
With Short Short Skirts
Mere Dil Mein Phool Khil Rahe Hai
Chaand Tare Din Mein Khil Rahe Hai
Pyaar Hone Ko Hai
Dil Khone Ko Hai
O Ho O Ho O
Good Morning India

The Stereo screamed! Everyone laughed quietly at how the four would react.

Dolly Ganj Pohchoonga
Kya Bola Chotu Main Bolunga
Ladki Bolegi Ki Hollo
Main Bolunga Array Chalo Chalo
Ikbari Samosa Roshgulla
Misti Bhai Khaayenge
Mere Dil Mein
Good Morning India

With the volume increasing, Prateeksha sat up instantly scared, at what was happening. Not remembering where she was, she started to scream or Shashank!
'Shahsank, Shashank, SHASHANK!' She screame as he finally sat up.
'Kya hua?' He said rubbing his eyes.
'Yeh awaaz kaise hai?' she asked.
As te music had been turned down complety, Shashank could not hear anything.
'Prateeksha tum paagal ho ge hoon!' Shashank said.
Aziz turned the music up again loud, when he saw Shashank sitting back on the sofa again!

Do Din Ki Hai Zindagani
Deewane Ko Mile Deewanee
Hogi Shuru Phir Yaaroon
Dono Mein Prem Kahani
Aamra Naw Ka Cholayre
Me Taal Ganga Maayya
Poitar Khane Gange Chal
Ulthe Naw Chawlayya
Aamra Naw Ka Cholayre

'Areee, music baan karo!' Araina screamed!
'Chup kar Araina!' Ronak screamed.
'Oi, mujh se aise baat maat karo' Araina screamed.

Jo Ladki Chahe Robindro Sangeet
Woh Hi Banegi Mere Jeewan Meet
Mere Dil Mein
Good Morning India
O Ho O See You Tomorrow
Good Morning India
O Ho O Ho O
Good Morning India
O Ho O See You Tomorrow
Good Morning India

'Turn the damn music off!' Prateeksha screamed.
Aziz turned the music off instantly, and hid away in a corner, as the rest of the family where hidden.

Looking around the four found no one, and thought they where imagining the music.

'Yeh music koon play kara tha?' Prateeksha asked.
'No one, Prateeksha tum paagal hoon!' Shashank said shutting his eyes again.
'Apne maangetar koon koi pagal balata hai kyan?' Prateeksha asked angrily.

'KYAAN!'

Standing up, Prateeksha realised what had just happened, and started to dress it. As everyone slowly got out of their hiding places, as this was much more shocking than the plan, Prateeksha felt extremly worried.

'Prateeksha mein maazak kara tha!' Shashank said not realising at how everyone had heard Prateeksha!
'Shashank, chup karo, Saab hain ether!' Prateeksha muttered under her breath!
'Kya! Speak up Jaaneman!' Shashank said not realising.
Prateeksha wanted to slap Shashank right now so he would be quiet. But no one could stop him now.
'What's all this noise about!' Araina said standing up, but facing towards the tv, and away front he famiy. 'Jijuuu, chup hog...g....y...eeeeee' Arian said but the words just left her mouth when she realised the whole family was there and had heard her say, 'Jiju'
'Oh Shit! Abb toh yeh gayee!' she said under her breath.

Silence filled the room, with the slight snore of Ronak and Shashank!

Chapter Twenty-Three....Suspense, I can't tell you 😉
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Toh, I was feelig bad for leaving it at a cliffhanger, sooooo, I gathered up some extra time, and another update is present! After this I think I deserve a break! Anyway, here it goes, Enjoy......

Chapter Twenty-Three

'YEH KYAN HORA HAIN?' Boomed Subhash's voice throughout the room!
Scared out of her wits, Prateeksha looked down, not knowing what to answer!
'BOLO! he scremed again!
'Woh....Woh' Prateeksha began but just couldn't continue!
'MR SHASHANK SINGH MANHORTRA' Screamed Subhash, sending chills down everyones backs.
Taking Shashank and Ronak off guard, both stood up and nearly fell, and the sudden quickness!
'OVER HERE!' His voice boomed. Shashank turned around, and saw his whole family standing in a line, with his father in the middle looking angry as ever!

'Kya......Kya H..Huaa?' Shashank stuterred, feeling worried.
'KYA HUA, TUM MUJSE PUCH RE HOON KYAN HUA!' Subhash screamed at his son. Nandita stoo next to him and tried her level best to calm him down, but her efforts went into vain!
'NANDITA, NOT TODAY, TODAY I WAN AN ANSWER, KAB SE YEH SAAB CHAL RA HAIN?' He asked.
'Dad, please listen to me, I love Prateeksha, we both are really happy with each other...' Shashank said but was cut off!
'KAB SE?' Subhash said.
'Dad, I don't know, a while, a few months after we started working together' Shashank said.
'AUR TUMNE SOCHA BHI NAHIN HUMKO BAATNE KAH?' Subhash asked.
'Dad, I was going to, we wanted to tell you, then Millind Bahias wedding came, so we where going to tell you after the wedding!' Shashank explained.
'THAT'S NO EXCUSE! THIS IS VERY FUSTRATING!' Subhash said.
'Dad, it's Prateeksha, you already know her!' Shashank said, not looking directly at his dad.
'SHASHANK, NO, ME AND YOUR MOTHER HAVE A LOT OF DREAMS ABOUT YOUR WEDDING!' Subhash said.
'Dad, you can still live those dreams, I've just chosen my life partner!' Shashank explained.
'NAHIN, BAAS, MAINE AUR KUCH NAHIN SUNHA' Subhash said.
Saying so he left inside towards his room, followed by am extrmly worried Nandita. The Dadi also followed Subhash to explain, alongside Vikram and Sonia. Outside Prateeksha was in tears, feeling dejected at how Subhash uncle had rejected her. Millind walked upto Prateeksha, and held her hand.
'Chalo yah seh, apne ghar chalo!' Millind said. Crying, Prateeksha hugged her brother for understanding. Millind held Radhas hand in one hand, held Prateeksha in the other. Araina held her Bhabies arm, whilst Aziz had come over and was holding Araina protectivly over the shouldar.
'Chalo.' Millind said. The whole family slowly walked towards the door.

Tumhi dekho na yeh kya ho gaya
tumhara hoon main aur tum meri
main hairaan hoon tumhen kya kahu
ke din mein hui kaisi chaandani
jaagi jaagi si hai phir bhi khwaabon mein hai
khoyi khoyi zindagi
tumhi dekho na yeh kya ho gaya
tumhara hoon main aur tum meri

Prateeksha turned around, and saw Shashank helpless. Calling out he tried to stop her.
'Bahia, rukh je na!' Shashank said.
'Shashank, jab uncle Prateeksha koon dil se accept karege, phir hum waapas aygee is ghar mein.' Millind said.
Shashank could not say anything further, and crying felt extremly helpless. One side was his father, the other side was the love of his life

behke behke se mann
mehke mehke se tann
ujli ujli fizzaon mein hai
aaj ham hai jahaan
kitni ranginiyan
chhalki chhalki nigaahon mein hai
neeli neeli ghataaon se hai chhan rahi
halki halki roshni
tumhi dekho na yeh kya ho gaya
tumhara hoon main aur tum meri
main hairaan hoon tumhen kya kahu
ke din mein hui kaisi chaandani

Turning around, Prateeksha saw Shashabk crying and felt helpless aslo, but she couldn't do anything. Hugging her brother even tighter, they left the house.

main toh anjaan thi yun bhi hoga kabhi
pyar barsega yun toot ke
sach yeh ikraar hai sach yahi pyar hai
baaki bandhan hai sab jhuth ke
meri saanson mein hai ghul rahi pyar ki
dheemi dheemi raagini
tumhi dekho na yeh kya ho gaya
tumhara hoon main aur tum meri
main hairaan hoon tumhen kya kahu
ke din mein hui kaisi chaandani
jaagi jaagi si hai phir bhi khwaabon mein hai
khoyi khoyi zindagi
tumhi dekho na yeh kya ho gaya
tumhara hoon main aur tum meri
yeh din mein hui kaisi chaandani.

Ronak, throughout the whole happenings had stayed silent, and was shocked at what just happened.
Shashank fell onto the sofa, and Ronak rushed to him, making him feel better.

Chapter Twenty-Four.... That's is a suprise for know, I love this twist!

So, these two chapters had no IF membors, but no worries, you lot will be back on action in a few chapters, which will be as a turning point for the FF, so enjoy these, and be ready for more, Specially you Lily, a lil special role for you😉 Stay tuned.
Alu😊
Ps, I'm veryyy busy at the moment with revision, so the pms may be out later, like tommorow, please forgive me this time if I do not find time to send them.
Pps, Im expecting double comments for this double update😉


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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey thanx a lot for the PM.. nice updates.. Erhhhh whts up with this Subash... poor PraSha.. waiting for the surprising twist.. do continue soon..
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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyaaaaa
amazing update, and thanks for the double bonus!
Really liked it!
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One word Allu, roller-coaster👏.....Painful twist but atleast everyone knows about PraSha, a little drama is good reading....Waiting for the next part😊....P.S. Loved the wake-up scenes and everyones lines😆......P.P.S. Best of luck for your exams!😃

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