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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: _Mariam_

Hey alu just noticed you have updated I know i am very late as i am so slow as You must know by now 🤣anyways great update I loved it the way you introduced us lot and I loved lekha coming late excuse continue soon asap well i dont have right to say that as i commented very late but for the other readers sake

Love maru



Maru better late than never. Lol. Glad you the update. And for you and my readers sake I will cont soon. Lol.
Luv Aluuu
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Posted: 15 years ago
Update up next 😊
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Heyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!
I'm sure you have all read my previous post telling you how my part got deleted, so here it goes again. But before,
*Holds her ears*
sorry for such a long delay. I have exams till 15th June. So delays possible.
So, meri bak bak will finish here, and here is the next update. Enjoy....

Chapter Twenty

'Prateeksha, come here for a minute.' Lali said.
'Hain Lali, what's up?' questioned Prateeksha.
'Erm, we are friends know right?' Lali asked
'Haan, obviously.' Prateeksa said.
'Phir I will call you Pratz from know on. You like it?' Lali said smiling.
'Pratz, very nice. Orignal too.' Prateeksha said laughing.
Both girls linked arms and started walking, chatting away. Sitting down at the table the continued their talking.
'Toh, who is this S boyfriend of yours?' Lali asked winking, making Prateeksha blush.
'Er...He is my Mangetar.' Prateeksha said.
'Hm, abb shaadi kab hai?' Lali continued.
'Not know. And you can't tell anyone. Neither my brothers know, nor his parents. Only my sister and his brother.' Prateeksha said.
'Your secrets safe with me.' Lail laughed.
'Aur tum, boyfriend ya magetar?' Prateeksha asked.
Putting both hands on the table and resting her chin on it, Lali began to talk. 'Nahin, nothing, I'm still waiting for my knight in shining armour to come and sweep me off my feet.' She said dreaming in her own little world.
Clicking her fingers in front of her, Lali blushed as she realised she had dozed off in her own fantasy. Laughing both girls got up and returned to Radha.

'Araina, won't you dance for your bhabie?' Radha asked.
'Erm...Bhabie I don't want to do it on my own.' Araina said.
'Chal, we will do it together.' Lily said.
Both girls walked together onto the dance floor, with the lights dimming and the music starting.

Bole chudiyan, bole kangna
Haai main ho gayi teri saajna
Tere bin jiyo naiyo lag da main te margaiya

Le jaa le jaa, dil le jaa le jaa
Le jaa le jaa, soniye le jaa le jaa

Aah aah aah aah, aah aah aah
Bole chudiyan, bole kangna
Haai main ho gayi teri saajna
Tere bin jiyo naiyo lag da main te margaiya
Le jaa le jaa, soniye le jaa le jaa
Dil le jaa le jaa, ho

Bole chudiyan, bole kangna
Haai main ho gaya tera saajna
Tere bin jiyo naiyo lag da main te marjaawa
Le jaa le jaa, soniye le jaa le jaa
Dil le jaa le jaa, ho

Haai haai main marjaawa marjaawa tere bin
Ab to meri raatein kat ti taare gin gin
Bas tujhko pukaara kare, meri bindiya ishaara kare

Hoye, lashkaara lashkaara teri bindiya ka lashkaara
Aise chamke jaise chamke chaand ke paas sitaara

Oh oh, oh oh oh, oh oh oh oh oh
Meri paayal bulaaye tujhe, jo roothe manaaye tujhe
O sajan ji, haan sajan ji
Kuch socho, kuch samjho meri baat ko

Bole chudiyan, bole kangna
Haai main ho gaya tera saajna
Tere bin jiyo naiyo lag da main te marjaawa
Le jaa le jaa, soniye le jaa le jaa
Dil le jaa le jaa, ho

Apni maang suhaagan ho, sang hameshaa saajan ho
Aake meri duniya mein vaapas na jaana
Sehra baandhke maahi tu mere ghar aana

Oye soni kitti soni aaj tu lagdi ve
Bas mere saath yeh jodi teri sajdi ve
Roop aisa suhaana tera, chaand bhi hai deewana tera

Jaa re jaa oh jhoothe teri galla hum na maane
Kyoon taarife karta hai tu humko sab kuch jaane

Ho, oh oh oh, oh oh oh oh oh, ho oh oh oh oh
Mere dil ki duaa yeh kahe, teri jodi salaamat rahe

O sajan ji, haan sajan ji
Yunhi beete saara jeevan saath mein

Bole chudiyan, bole kangna
Haai main ho gaya tera saajna

Tere bin jiyo naiyo lag da main te margaiya
Le jaa le jaa, soniye le jaa le jaa
Dil le jaa le jaa, ho

Le jaa le jaa, soniye le jaa le jaa
Dil le jaa le jaa, ho

Aaja heeriye

Oh, jaa jaa ranjhna

Oh, aaja heeriye

Jaa jaa ranjhna

Le jaa le jaa, dil le jaa le jaa
Le jaa le jaa, soniye le jaa le jaa

Aa aa aa aa aa aa, kabhi khushi kabhi gham
Na judaa honge hum, kabhi khushi kabhi gham

The song ended with a huge round of applause. The girls all sat and talked till late in the night. There where still a few more girls who couldn't make the mehndi today, but where definatly coming for the wedding. All the girls had mendhi on, which looked extremly good.
After midnight the guests had finally left, and the nine girls remaining sat in a circle gossiping away. About half an hour later, Araina rang home for the driver to come pick them up.

'Hello Subhash uncle? Mein Araina bolre hoon. Can you please send the driver.' Araina said.
'Beta driver koh koi emergency se jaana para. Il send Shashank and Ronak.' Subhash said.
Hanging up the phone she sat down once again and all started talking until the boys didn't arrive.

About twenty minutes later the doorbell rang and the servant let the boys in who walked staright upto the circle.
'Hi boys. Im Radha. Sorry I can't get up. Wet mendhi on both hands and feet.' Radha said explaining to both.
'Don't worry it okay... Er...' Ronak said confused at what to call her.
'Arrey you call Millind Bahia, toh mein tumhare bhabie, understood' Radha said.
'Yes bhabie, you look really pretty.' Shashank said.

Meanwhile, the group of girls where drooling over the boys, until Swetha whisepered a little to loud, 'These are a pair of Hot brothers' causing the girls to errupted in a fit of giggles. The guys had heard this but chose to ignore. About ten minutes later, they finally bid their goodbyes to Radha.

'Ronak help me up na!' Araina whined as she couldn't get up. Helping het up both bid Radha goodbye an left towards the door.
'Acha bhabie, nice meeting you.' Shashank said walking towards the door. Stopping and turnig around when he realised Prateeksha was nor beside him he saw her struggling to get up. Before Lali could get up and help her, Shashank got there first, held her by the waist and pulled her up. Not leaving her waist, they left for the door and departed the house after the final goodbyes.

'Hmmm, Lagta yeh hi hai Pratz ka Mangetar. Isse toh milna parega.' Lali said to herself.
'Chalo ladkia, let's get going to bed.' Maru said. With that the girls departed, and went off too bed.

Reaching home it was quiet late. Araina and fallen asleep in the car and Ronak had lifted her up, and took her to her room, and went to his own after. Prateeksha was really tierd, and was sitting on the sofa, while Shashank was in the kitchen getting a glass of water. Returning both went upstairs, and where going to their respective rooms when Prateeksha called out for him.
'Shashank help me to take my bangles off please.' Prateeksha said. Coming into her room, he took them off careful not ruin her mendhi. Finishing Prateeksha got up for the bathroom.

Whilst leaving she felt a tugg at her scarf, turning around she found Shashank holding her scarf.
'Choro na!' Prateeksha said.
But instead Shashank pulled her towards himself and grabbed her waist.
'You look really beautiful today' he said and hugged her.
'Shashank mendhi!' Prateeksha warned.
'Let me see!' Shashank said.
'You know, they say the darker a mendhi of a girl, the more her husband loves her.' Prateeksha said.
'Phir tumhare mendhi will be Kali, because i love you!' Shashank sang at the end.
Laughing, Prateeksha left for the bathroom while Shashank left the room.
'Pagal, love you too!' Prateeksha sang too!

The next day, the Manhortra house was buzzing with noise. As the three families where staying together in the Manhortra house. As it was Millinds mendhi the house was preparing for that.
At after eight, the guests had arrived, and the function had started.

'Ladies and Gentlemen, welcome to the Haldi of my lovely brother. To start the function, we have a suprise for you Bahia. Love you loads, from Apki pyaari 'gudiaa' Araina, Aziz and Prateeksha.' Prateeksha announced, and the music started.

Pyaara bhaiya mera dulha raja banke aa gaya
Pyaara bhaiya mera
Pyaara bhaiya mera dulha raja banke aa gaya
Pyaara bhaiya mera
Resham ki pagdi pe sehra ghar aangan mehka gaya
Pyaara bhaiya mera

Pyaara bhaiya mera dulha raja banke aa gaya
Pyaara bhaiya mera
Resham ki pagdi pe sehra ghar aangan mehka gaya
Dekho yaara mera

Aaj kaisi dhoom hai ga rahi shehnaaiyaan
Aanchal ki chhaaonmein baitha bhaiya saiyaan
Saj ke doli aayegi laut ke jab saath mein
Pyaari si bhabhi ka haath loongi apne haath mein
Phie ek din arre kya kehna ek phool sa khilega angna

Pyaara bhaiya mera dulha raja banke aa gaya
Pyaara bhaiya mera
Resham ki pagdi pe sehra ghar aangan mehka gaya
Dekho yaara mera

Dekho kaisi saj rahi soorat mere yaar ki
Masti mein kya jhoomti shaam aayi pyaar ki
Goriyon ke beech mein baitha kaisi shaan se
Aise hi poore hon din mere bhi armaan ke
In haathon mein bhi koi haath aaye
Apni bhi suhaag ki raat aaye

Dekho yaara mera dulha raja banke aa gaya
Pyaara bhaiya mera
Resham ki pagdi pe sehra ghar aangan mehka gaya
Dekho yaara mera

Pyaara bhaiya mera dulha raja banke aa gaya
Pyaara bhaiya mera
Resham ki pagdi pe sehra ghar aangan mehka gaya
Dekho yaara mera

The three ended surrounding Millind and gave him the tightest hug possible.
'Chalo, haldi ki rasam churo karo. Chalo sabse pehle Millind ki pyaari behni.' Nandita said. Prateeksha took some haldi and smeared it across Millinds face, and Araina took the haldi and pasted it all over his arms. Everyone started one by one to put the haldi on.

Prateeksha was wearing a light green hinted with yellow ghahra choli, alongside Araina who had the same. Bothe where looking like angels.

The rasam carried on till late night, and Millind was yellow as a banana. Once all the guests had gone, and the parents and dadi had gone off too sleep, the children where sitting on the floor near Millind.
'Bahia, let's do something.' Shashank said.
'Kya?' Millind asked.
Shashank got out his phone, and rang someone putting it on speaker.
'Kisko phone Kare ho......' Millind was cut short when he heard the voice on the other side.
'Hello?' Radha said.
'Bhabie? Kaise hai app?' Shashank asked.
'Agar mein Galat nahin hoon, tum Shashank hoon na?' Radha asked.
'Bilkul sain!' Shashank screamed.
'Hmm, mein teek hoon. Any reason for the call?' She asked straight out.
'Haan hain. Meri bahia aur apke hone wali pate koon apse baat karne hai. Magar unke upar itne haldi hain, ke woh ek kela jaise lagre hain. Toh I took the honours to phone. Yeh leh baat kari' Shashank said, holding the phone up in front of Millind.
'Hello Millind?' Radha said.
'Radha?' Millind replied.
'Er...Hi!' Radha said.
'Hi Radha!' Millind said.
'Abb aur bhi kuch bolo na!' Screamed a load of girls in the background.
Laughing, someone took the phone of them, and here Shashank took it of Millind.
'Hi!' Shashank said.
'Heyaaa! You have such a sexy voice!' Said the girl over the phone.
'Hmm, tumhara awaaz bhi intne burre bhi nahin hai!' Shashank flirted back.
'Hmm, toh, naam kya hai tumhara?' Asked the girl.
'Shanshank... Aur tumhara?' he asked.
'Hm, mera naam hai.... Radha ki Ma' she said changing her voice back to normal.
'A...AA..aunty?' Shashank stutterd.
On both sides of the phone you could only hear an erruptoon of laughter. Hanging up the phone, Shashank looked embarased.
'Well done. Tune Aunty pein line marde! Bewakoof.' Millind said.
Laughing Shashank looked at Prateeksha was in stiches!

'Isse toh mein dekhlo ga!' he said to himself.

Chapter Twenty-One..... Shaadi... Romance and more entries of our lovely membors of IF. Stay tuned!

Finally I finished. Aur this time it didn't delete. Thank god. So go read and enjoy. Rmeber to comment and press the like button. Pms will be out shortly, so if you read the update before getting a pm, apoligies. I am updating whilst in my break from revision.
Love you all❤️

Pyaari Aluu😊😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
Lovely part Allu, atleast you have given PraSha some nice scenes.😊
I like the shaadi atmosphere👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey gr8 update Allu... luved Prasha scenes.. do continue soon..
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice update Aluu......I love funsctions like Mehndi...shadi n all.... n here u put those functions through ur words so nicely.... I liked that Shanky n that aunty's phone conversation😉..... Shanky is best👏....
update soon....😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
really nice update!!
loved the prasha scenes.. and the part where shanshank accidently flirts with radha's mom .lmao😆 its good radha's mom has a great sense of humor.
btw:im soo glad u updated the ff. I wasnt quite satisfied with the way pkb ended (prasha unification) so i was really looking forward to ur ff , as i knew it would be better and filled with prasha . :) it always is
gracias
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Posted: 15 years ago
cute part............
feel sorry for u ur update got deleted.
but it was an awesome update i was about to pm u for delaying your ff. but u pmed me...
all the best for ur exams
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Posted: 15 years ago
Heeeeeeeeyyyyyyyyyyy Aluu! 🤗
First of all, so sorry to hear ur update got deleted😭. I know how you feel, so I'm gonna try to make you fell better by saying that your update still ROCKED!!!!! 😃⭐️😃⭐️😃
Thw whole shaadi part was very well-written 👏. I would've dropped 🤢 b4 even writng half of it, so GREAT JOB!😃
The whole shanky flirting thing wz rlly cute 😆, and so wz the tiny PraSha scene 😳.
Best of luck for your papers dearie 🤗, and looking 4ward to the other chapter😃!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Choti
sry 4the short comment last ch so just make it up
to I will make this one a nice long comment ok
so plzzzzz 4 give ur di......ok first of all sry that ur update
got deleted know how that feels it happent to me
once when updating my ff it such a bumer na...
Anyways for the ch it was awesome as always luved
shankys flirting n the PraSha seen,loving the shaadi can't
wait for the next part Aur haan choti when will I come in
to the shaadi? Make it good lol update soon n don't forget
to comment on my ff n make it long n goodlol
tc love di

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