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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: luv angel



I ran away straight away after leaving the joke!
Thanks for asking and teamed studies are going well!
As far as I rememer didn't you have exams? How are they?
Aluuuuu😊



Exams finished And Fi-nally can come about to write a FF :) holidays mm a pain in da neck
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Posted: 15 years ago
FF is just awesome........!!!!!!!
your imagination power.........really hats of it......👏👏👏
cant wait for further update.....
really it must rate ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ stars.....
⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 15 years ago
choti,
❤️ the ch sry for late comment keep the good work c ant wait 4 the next ch update soon and dont 4 get 2 pm me and i have update my ff to soo dont forget to comment mine
tc, by the way the drama 👍🏼👏
di
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Posted: 15 years ago
I am seriously suspicious that you have been taking torture lessons from ekta mai.😳..... THAT NOTE ALMOST KILLED ME!😕
lol, just kidding yaar!😆
Nice prank, and as usual, am waiting for you to update! 😃
Edited by Lily96 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: -Destiny-



Exams finished And Fi-nally can come about to write a FF :) holidays mm a pain in da neck



Lucky youuuuu! My exams don't finish till 15th June 😲
Ohhh, I'm looking forward to read your FF. Drop me pm when it's posted!
Update on it's way!!
Aluu😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sayu14

<font color="#cc00ff">FF is just awesome........!!!!!!!
your imagination power.........really hats of it......👏👏👏
cant wait for further update.....
really it must rate ⭐️ stars.....
⭐️⭐️</font>



Thankyouu sooooo much. I'm really Glad you like my FF. Thanks ever so much for the stars. Update is up soon, and I'm sure your comments will be much regular know.
Aluuuu😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: lalmirch28

choti,

❤️the ch sry for late comment keep the good work c ant wait 4 the next ch update soon and dont 4 get 2 pm me and i have update my ff to soo dont forget to comment mine

tc, by the way the drama 👍🏼👏

di



Diiiii,
I was looking for your comment. I was suprised to not see it until know. Thanks for the appreciation. And next chapter will be up soon! And di don't worry the pm does reach you. Did it not last time?
And I've already commented onyour ff di, quick aren't I?
More drama to come di!!!
Update on the way soon
apki pyaari se choti❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Lily96

I am seriously suspicious that you have been taking torture lessons from ekta mai.😳..... THAT NOTE ALMOST KILLED ME!😕
lol, just kidding yaar!😆
Nice prank, and as usual, am waiting for you to update! 😃



Lily, me and Ekta are very close. She does give me some ideas for my FF, so beware, a lot of drama on the way😉
lol. I'm glad I didn't get juute from you or the note.
And update is coming. Just typing it know!
Aluuu😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Helloooooooooooooooooo!
No bak bak, sidhaaaa update. Enjoy......

Chapter sixteen

'SHASHANK!' screamed Prateeksha! She saw Shashank drop to the bottom of the water, and land ona rock!
Wanting to jump in and save him, she knew she couldn't as her arm prohibited her. Looking aroud to see if any help was availableshe nothing dueto the thick fog which was covering the night. Looking sown into the water she could see Shashank strugglingto pull himself up looking around she saw a couple of twigs. Reaching for them she picked the longest of them all up. Then holding it straight down into the water, she looked to see if Shashank understood what she was trying to do. With Shashank still struggling to grab hold of the twig, she lay on her side, with the arm which was broken, bending over the bay holding twig deaper in the water, making it easier for Shashank to grab. With Prateeksha nearly half way over the bay, and Shashank just grabbing gold of the twig, And starting to pull himself up, a huge thunderstorm came. With the rain chucking it down, It bacame hard for Prateeksha to see. She lay back on the bay, still holding the twig, drained out of energy, she fell unconcious with the immense pain of her broken arm.

'Shashank pull yourself up. Come on man you can do it. For your parents, for your brother.... For Prateeksha. You need to do it.' Shashank spoke to himself, pulling up hard with the twig. As he neared the top of the water, he let go off the twig, and finally breathed the much needed air. He wa exhausted, and the huge amounts of rain which was falling didn't help. He looked I've to the bay, and saw Prateeksha unconcious. Knowing he had to get out of the water, and the bay was not a safe place to stay, he picked up Prateeksha carefully, and began swimming tot he corner of the water, making sure Prateeksha was safe the whole way.

'Araina, I heard a noise! It sounded like bhabie.' Ronak said.
'What!! Where was it coming from?' she asked desparatly.
'Near the water. I think we should go that way' Ronak said. Both Ronak and Araina set off in the way the noise was coming from. Both of them started walking, with Araina having the help of Ronak due to her hurt foot. They reached the end of land and in front of them stood the huge amount of water, Shashank and Prateeksha where in a while ago.
'I'm sure the voice of bhabie came from the water' Ronak said.
'I wonder where they are then.' Araina said.
Looking around for a while, they gazed over the water to see if they could see both of them. Both decided to turn and find a spot to rest when Araina saw someone.
'Ronak, woh dekho, paane mein koi hai!' Araina said.
Ronak turned around and saw what was in the water. As the person came closer, Ronak realised who it was.
'Shashank!' he said shocked. 'Araina, stay here, I'll go help.' Ronak said.
With Shashank coming toward the land, Ronak jumped into the water.
Swimming upto Shashank, Ronak helped him hold Prateeksha.
'Shashank tum teek hon? Bhabie Koon kya huan?' Ronak said.
'Woh, she fainted. She has a broken arm. Help me take her to the land' Shashank said.
Ronak helped Shashank and both swam to the end, and placed Prateeksha on the land.
'Didi!' screamed Araina.
Running upto her she leaned down and tried to bring Prateeksha back to her senses.
'Jiju, what happened to didi?' Araina asked Shashank.
'Woh she has a broken arm. So she probery got lightheaded and fainted.' Shashank said whilst trying to dry of. Ronak was also trying to dry off.
The night was finally ending, and the sun had begun to rise.
The four of them lay in the dense cliffside side by side.
Prateeksha was the first to wake up. She sat up and slightly winced. Her arm was only paining, since je was lieing on it, whilst sleeping. She looked around and was suprised to be on land, rather than the water she was on yesterday. She looked beside her, and saw Shashank and Ronak. Suprised to see Ronak, she turned to her other side and was immensly glad to see Araina. Running her hand through Arainas hair, she was very glad to see her fine.
With Araina waking up, she opened her eyes to her didi.
'Didi, you okay. I was so worried!' Araina said and gave he a tight hug.
'I'm fine. Paagli' She replied.
Shashank also was disturbed, and slowly rubbed his eyes amd sat up straight stretching.
'Could you two sisters not be any louder.' he moaned.
The two girls laughed and hugged each other again.
'Prateeksha tum teek hoon?' Shashank said, whilst rubbing his eyes and not looking at her.
Araina nudged Prateeksha, at how much he cared for her, making Prateeksha blush.
'Haan. Mein teek hoon' she replied.
'Hello, someone is sleeping here. Care to be quiet' Robak said with his eyes still shut. Everyone laughed at his antics. Even though the four of them wher lost, they where able to keep themselves entertained.

'Any news about them? Report was lodged yesterday.' Nandita asked Subhash.
'No news yet.' he replied.
Virkram had taken the dadis, Suhaani and Sonia back to the farmhouse. Since the dadis where okay the doctor had reccomended rest. Here at the police station, Millind, Aziz, Nandita and Subhah where worried at how the four would be.
With them all tensed sitting down, the commisioner came upto them to talk.
'We have some news. Well something to show you. This was found near the deserted bus. Recognise it?' the police man asked. He was showing a silver rolex, containing diamond studs.
'Yeh toh, Shashank ki hai!'Nandita said.
'Okay. That's good. We know they are still around the accident spot. Our team is searching. We will find them soon' the police man said, leaving them alone again.

The four of them stood around in a circle. They had all dried off, and had some water.
'Right we are together, and I'm sure dad has a got a search team looking for us. So either we wait here. For someone to find us, or we look around. And we need to think about Arainas foot.' Shashank said.
'My foot is fine. We will look around. I'm sure we can find someone.' Araina said.
Deciding on that, the four of them started wandering in the hope to find someone.

'Okay I'm bored with all this silence. Let's sing a song. Urmmm,
Gum shuda gum shuda, koi hua kahan hua
Kal tha main yahan, voh bhi thi yahin
Main hoon phir yahan lekin voh nahin
O, kal tha main yahan, voh bhi thi yahin
Main hoon phir yahan, lekin voh nahin
Gum shuda gum shuda, gum shuda ho gum shuda
Dekhne mein hai haseen, rehti hai yahin kahin
Kho gayi, haan kho gayi
Voh pari voh apsara, dilnasheen dilrooba
Kho gayi, haan kho gayi
Phirta hoon yahan vahan leke apne dil aur jaan
Dhoonda saara jahan kya jaane voh hai kahan
Gum shuda gum shuda, gum shuda ho gum shuda
Gum shuda oh re gum shuda
Dil ki in baaton se main tha bilkul anjaana
Lekin us ladki ne kar daala hai deewaana
Jahan bhi main dekhoon lagta hai voh khadi hai
Bas uska hi chehra aankhon mein har ghadi hai'
Err... Iske baad nahin atta.' Ronak said.
Everyone started laughing at his choice of music.
'Paagal!' Shashank said, whilst playfully hitting him on the head.

An hour or so had past and they had become extremly tierd. Sitting down on a rock for a rest, they looked around thinking they hear someone.
'Koon?' Ronak shouted.
Hearing no reply, they thought it must be there imagination.
Prateeksha got up to stretch, and Shashank, who was already standing, came uptown her too see if she was okay!
Quietly talking, none of them realised a person standing behind them all. Coming forward, he shot his gun into the air, taking them all by suprise. Ronak and Araina stood up also, next to Shashank an Prateeksha.
'Don't move. Any of you!' He screamed. Wearing a balaclava, his face was nor visible, and dressed in black it was impossible to recognise him.
Scared, Both Araina and Prateeksha, held their respective partners hand.
'Hand me them!' he said.
'Hand you what?' Ronak said.
'Them!' He replied pointing his gun toward Prateeksha.
Scared out of her wits, Prateeksha hid behind Shashank.
'What! No! Who are you! And what do you want!' Shashank screamed at the unknown man.
'That's none of your business. Just Han the girl over to me. Or I will shoot!' He said.
'Shoot all you want but your not getting her!' Shashank said.
The quarrel began, and Shashank being as stubborn as ever, didn't let any harm approach Prateeksha.
With the unknown man getting angry, he held his gun towards Shashank.
'Let her go. Or on three I shoot.' he said.
'ONE.....TWO....THREE!!!!' he said. The gun fired, and the person ran off into the dense woods. shocked at what just happened, Ronak and Araina turned back to see a police search team there.
'Hurry up and get into the jeep. We needto reach the hospital.'

Chapter Seventeen... See who gets shot, and some other things.

That's all for know. The update would off been much sooner, but the website was down all day, so I was helpless. Do comment and press the like button.
Aluu😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Great update, you do love giving us tesion like the Creatives. Well atleast PraSha and ArNak are show right😊.

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