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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Irika95

awesome part... love the new twist continue asap



Thankyouu, glad you like the new twist. Will continue in a bit😊
Aluu😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: princez_94

<font color="#9900ff" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Omg!!! this just gets better and better... thank u sooooo much for the twist it's really getting intresting... thank u soo much again...⭐️ Please continue soooon i can't wait any longer thsi is just tooo good... </font>



I'm soooooo glad you enjoyed the new twist. I always try too please my readers😉 lol. So more of the twist comming up soon. And no problem, don't mention it😊 next part is up in a bit, Glad you likey FF so much😃
Aluuuu😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: lalmirch28

<font color="#ff0099" size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Choti,

</div>Good Luck on ur exams ....😉i know u w ill do great👍🏼 anyways
<div>omg i luved it it was awesome as always 👏⭐️i was right i knew it would b the dadi's they scared 😆😆🥱

luved the part when shanks tells prats next time check me out when no one is looking haha that was sooooooooo funny couldn't stop gigling 🤣and then the end it was so sad i wanted 2 cry😭

nice work!

take care

di
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Di, thankyou!! Know you have wished me, I will deffo pass with flying colours😊 Lets hope for the best😳
Yes Di you were right about the guys scaring their Dadis instead, just didn't tell you so the suprise wouldn't be ruined😉 lol[:LOL]
Well Pratz needs to be careful, she mighta got caught😉
The twist I say has got a lot of the readers shocked, as it was all happy before.... Good that's what I wanted😉
Thankyou di, glad you appreciate my writing.
Update is up soon.
Tc di!
Pyaari Choti😳😳❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Lily96

Hey hey! 1st of all, I wish u all the best in your exams Aluu! 😃
And, if your papers go well, I demand a rlly awesome chapter!!!!! 😉
Yeah, so anyways the new chappie wz reallly sweet 😳😳😳............. BUT GOSH YOU NEARLY GAVE ME A HEART ATTACH AT THE END! Poor arnak and prasha😭!!!
But yeah, the twist is really good....👏👏👏
Looking 4ward to the next chapter, which i presume will be AFTER your exam?🤔
Keep it up and good luck in your exam 🤗



The comment I always love Reading, it brings a smile on my face😃
Thankyou for all the wishes on my exams, ad Im sure with the wishes of everyone they will go fab😊
Scared you didn't I? Going all nice and happy, then BANG!! Lol. I'm sure the heart attack is worth another chapter😉
Arnak and Prasha can never leave each other. Let's see what is in store for them😉
Thankyou for liking the twist.
Next Chapter is up soon, myy exams last for over a month, so whenever I find time to update, I will do so.
I will try to continue pleasing my readers.
Tc, Lyy😳
Aluuu😳😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
Great romance and love the family interaction. But you gave me a heartattack at the end, please don't give PraSha a guilt trip like the show. Hope they are all okay, waiting for your update....
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey everyone! Update time! No bak bak today, Sigha update... I bet you guys are wondering what will happen. Time to let you guys now😉 Enjoy.....

Chapter Fifteen

'Shashank! Shashank!' Screamed Ronak. Ronak was holding on for dear life onto a cliffside log, dangling in midair. He screamed for his brother. Not knowing what to do, he looked down and sas the bus they where all sitting in exactly thirty seconds ago was in flames much beneath him in the water, which lay at the bottom. He remember how the worst minute if his life was. The bus was nearing the clifside and was just about to topple over, when he, Ronak jumped with Araina, and Shashank with Prateeksha, as the bus went crazy, toppling over the cliff and bursting into flames.
Helpless he screamed for his brother again! Looking around he looked for Araina who should b nearby, he thought due to them jumping together. Looking arround he saw no one. Gripping onto the log more tightly he pulled himself up slighlty, only to return to his orignal place, due to the lack of energy inside him. Gathering up all his might, he clenched his jaw, and pulled his weight up and placed himself on the rocky edges off the cliff. Know he was off the log, he was reasonably safe.
Sitting back he sighed at what to do next and where he would find his brother, girlfriend and his would be bhabie.

'Urghh!' Said prateeksha. Whilst falling with Shashank she fell on her arm. Looking around she found herself on a little bay amongst all the water. In the near distance she could see the bus finally stop burning, due to the water putting it out. Looking aroundshe saw nothing but water. Feeling helpless, along with lifeless, she couldn't get herself to get up.
'Araina!' she screamed, feeling scared for her little sister.
Crying and not knowing what to do, she called for the one person she knew could help.
'Shashank please come help me!' she cried. With her arm paining, she held it tight, and fainted due to being very light headed.

'Didi!! Didi!! Where are you!' Araina screamed for her sister. She was in dense pile of fallen logs. Looking up she could see the corner of the cliff where she fell. It was long way up, and she knew she would be away from her sister. But with the thought that Ronak will be close as she did fall with him, she looked around. Standing up, she winced in pain, her foot had a huge cut in it, bleeding and looked really infected. Sitting back down, she tied her sock around it tight, to try stop the bleeding and sat down to rest it. Not knowing what to do she screamed for Ronak.

'Pull up man! You can do it!' Shashanks aid to himself. He was dangling of the weakest log on the whole cliff, which would snap anytime soon. He was pulling up trying to grab into the next log, which was stronger and also closer to the edge of the cliff where it was safe. With one more pull and stretching his hand to reach the next log, the weak one snapped, and fell down straight into the water.
'Shit!' Shashank said whilst he fell full speed down.

'Phew!' Ronak said whilst sitting on the safe spot. He was off the hanging log and could stand up safely and go looking for the rest. Doing so, he got up and looked at his state. His jeans where tatty, and his jacket was covered in mud. Disposing of it on the cliffside he went on to look for everyone. His teeshirt was ripped and clear grazez to his back where clearly visible. He was hurt, but in his mind he thought of nothing other than finding his brother and the two girls. Walking around, his quest begun.

'Ouchh!' Prateeksha said. Her arm wa twisted in the complete opposite way, and turning it back to it's orignal position would be the only way it would mend. Not being able to, due to the immense pain, she left it meanwhile and got up standing on the bay. As her arm was broken, it wasn't possible for her to go look for the rest, as swimming was impossible with one arm. She looked around an could only see water. Looking up, she close her eyes and prayed for help from god.
'Bagwhan ji, please help. Please show me what to do next, or just a hint' Prateeksha said.
Opening her eyes she saw something falling downwards straight for the water which was just metres beside her. Being completly helpless due to her arm, she just stood there shocked.

Araina had enough strength inside her to start limping. Lightly, she walked slowly. She crossed the logs which she had fallen into and started her journey to find someone. He loked around but found no one. She had walked a lot know, which Araina found impressive due to her hurt foot. She reched the edge of a cliffside rock and stood there for some moments to relax. She looked around and the place she was standing in looked like someone had been there before. She gazed around tryigto spot someone. Looking around, she discovered footsteps leading in a certain direction. Thinking it was a positive signal she followed them. Exactly two feet further down she found a black jacket which was covered with, know dry mud.

Spitting the water out of his mouth he shacked his head and got rid of all the excess water. Luckily Shashank had survived the lenghty fall and the water amd splash saved him from a nasty accident. He saw a green bay empty admist all the water. Swimming towards it sat on it and closed his eyes. Strething he lifted his arms backward and was shocked to feel something under his hand. Opening his eyes he looked to see what was in his grip. Discovering a White duppata, he was shocked. Looking around to see if he could see the owner her looked into th water seeing something, which shocked him.

'Maa aram se.' Subhash said. The whole family was extremly lucky to survive such an fall. The two elders where recovering from the nasty incident. Sitting in the hospital, the elders lay back down after being checked up by the docters. Everyone was relativly fine except a few nasty cuts. They all sat in the private ward booked by Vikram. They all say down with tea.
'Pata nahin bacho kither hai. Teek bhi hain?' Nandita said.
'Nandita phikar mat karo. Woh teek hogyee' Subhash said. 'I have reported at the police station. They are looking for them.' he continued.
'Pasta hain. Magar phikar toh hogayee' Nandita said.
The rest of the day for the famiy was stressed filled, with Millind especially who had never been separated from his sisters. He wished for the best.

'Hai, it's getting late. And I haven't found anyone.' Ronal said. He stopped for a while. Sitting down on a rock he rested his head on his knees and dozed off for a while. He needed the rest. Ronak had got tierd after the past days events. He had walked for about half off the day and with no success he slept trying for his drained energy to return.

'Yeh toh... Toh.... Ronak ki jacket hai!' Araina said. Shocked at how the jacket was here, she picked it up and held it close to her chest. She knew Ronak was near. Putting the jacket on, she sped up and followed the footsteps, as quick as her hurt foot let her. The footsteps continued for a good forty five minutes. She puffed as he drained and had hardly any energy left in her. She came to an halt when the footsteps stopped. Looking up she saw a rock, with the owner of the jacket she was wearing.

'Yeh toh, yeh toh...' Shashank muttered. Not knowing what to say, he stood up and at the bottom of the water, lay a body, he most definatly recognised. Leaving the dupatta on the bay, he jumped straight inside the water. Swimming as fast as he could, he went to the bottom of the depth of the water. Reaching there, he lifted the body and graabed it by the waist. Holding it tight, he swam back up to the tip of the sea. Finally being able to breath properly, he put the body on the bay which lay on the water and held himself up, with his body in the water. Resting his head ontop ofthe body, he slowly dozed off too, after being completly drained from what had just happened.

'Ronak! Ronak!' Araina screamed. Walking quick upto Ronak who sat on the rock. She awoke him who looked shocked.
'Araina tum teek hoon? I'm so happy to see you.!' Ronak said. He made Araina sit down on the rock, ad knelt down in front of her.
'Araina thank god your okay. Have you seen Shashank, or Bhabie?' he asked in a hurry.
'Nahin. I've been searching all day. Your the first person I've found. I'm so tierd know as well. Anvi can nearly walk.' She said in one go.
'Araina! Tum teek hoon? What happened to your foot?' he asked.
'I've hurt it. Don't worry. I just hope didi and jiju are okay. ' Araina said.

Waking up again, Shashank picked up his head and looked at the body in front of him.
'Utho! Meri kiliyaa toh utho!' Shashank said, pleading.
'Please, Your my while life. Get up please!' Shashank said.
Suddenly the body started coughing and water came out of it's mouth. Shashank helped the person sit up and when the person opene her eyes finally a little whisper came out of it's mouth.
'Shashank!'
'Prateeksha! Your okay. Thank god. I thought something might have happened after being under water like that for a while' Shashank said.
'Im fine don't worry.' she replied.
Moving over she made some space for Shashank to sit on the bay. Holding her arm, she winced in pain.
'Prateeksha your arm is broken. We need to turn it over in it's orignal position.'
'I know magar baut dard hai' she moaned.
In one swift move, Shashank took her arm, and looked into her eyes.
'Prateeksha look away' he said.
Whilst she was going to do that, she heard a crack which made her turn her hea back towards Shashank almost immediatly.
'Done. It won't hurt a much. Until we find any proper medical care' Shashank said.
Smiling Prateeksha, looked at her arm and up toward Shashank when suddnely it became extremly windy again. With her smile turning into a frown due to change in weather, she was about to grip onto Shashanks hand, when she felt nothing. Looking down towards where Shashank sat moments before, she saw him falling ever so slowly towards the bottom of the water, where Prateekha lay about five minutes ago.

Chapter Sixteen... More drama on the way, and let's see what is in store for the four of them know.

That's all. For some reason I really enjoyed writing this part. I think I'm liking the drama in my FF. Lol. So I want comments and critisizes are also wlecome. I would like to know where I can improve. And as you all know I have my GCSEs so updates are becoming much delayed, but I have two weeks holidays so whenever I find some extra time I will update. Before that, get Reading this chapter.
Love Aluuu😳
Ps, Pms will be out later on tonight. So they will be late.
Edited by luv angel - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Comments would be much appreciated as well😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Aluu, I just hope u don't intend to kill me like the CVs are trying to do 😛.
And yeah, I can see why u must have enjoyed writing this chappie..... It's awesome like always 👍🏼(I think i need to think of a better adjective....), and more drama hz entered... which I like, but jst dnt take it 2 far lyk ekta did wen she caused sumo's body to fly in the air after being hit by a car😆
Now I guess we are gonna see Prats the super lady in action 🤣.
Luking 4ward to the next chappie!!!!!!!!!!!!!
All the best for your papers Aluu dear!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Alu i cant rem when i left my comments last sorry about that from now onwards will comment regularly awsome chapter as usual loved reading it cant wait to see what happens next good luck for your examz i am sure you will do great
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hello to all my lovely readers!!
So as you all know I love writing this FF and pleasing all off my lovely readers. But recenty, I have had a feeling that my readers h e just lost intrest in my FF.
So with much thought, and thinking over the decision I have made various times also, I have come to decide that,

I WILL BE ENDING THIS FF!!

I put the message in capital letters to emphasise my point, and so eeryone is clear with what I have decided.
Some readers maybe shocked, others happy, but I've done it know! There is no thing which will make reconsider my decision. It is final. Thankyou for the love and support I have foundduring te time I have written this FF. It was much appriceated.

So for last time. Thankyou!

Yours always
Aluu❤️


APRILS FOOLS!!!!!!
I'M SCARED, I BETTER RUN!! I THINK I HAVE SKME DANDE AND JUUTTE COMING MY WAY!!!
I'M OFF!!
AND NEXT UPDATE EITHER TOMMOROW, OR DEFINATLY SATURDAY TO MAKE UP FOR THE APRIL FOOL JOKE!
LOVE YOU ALL MY READERS!!!
Edited by luv angel - 15 years ago

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