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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved it...such a scary one...felt relieved at the end...totally enjoyed while reading
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing Awesome 👏 you should write more horror it was like an episode of fear files or Daar
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Tessa great OS. Great horror story, Arti's nightmare felt so real. You should write more horror stories. Thank you.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Good work tessa
Its been a long time we got a romantic os from you


Can you please write one ?


I check the pv forum daily for your new work. So please...
I have read all your previous works many times

So i wish a intense romantic work on aarya...
Please
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Posted: 8 years ago
#6
OMG what a scary horror OS 👍🏼
totally love it 👏
oh god aarya mansi & aman got in danger coz they took shortcut way 🤢
aarti felt strange but she choose to ignore
they should have think before going to that shortcut
but thank god it was just nightmare not real
its also giving aarti a signal to be careful 👍🏼
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey DQ,

Ouuuhh am shivering in fear. I could feel the tension in the begining and it kept building 😕, I could so visualize the car drive, forest, weird man helping, creepy house, eerie atmosphere and out of nowhwere scary woman.. For a dream it felt so real..It also make me laugh, especially Mansi no nonsense comments and their skitishness and of course the mocking husbands...

Dream or premonition who knows...but it raise questions in Aarti mind...I think Aarti should stick to her stance and make them avoid shorcuts just in case...

The story has all the ingredients of a horror movie, it left me unsetlle, which is the goal after all.

In conclusion, it would be a crime to limit yourself to one horror 😛 missy
Oh and yes, I loved it.
Edited by sass8 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow,such an amazing story.it felt real.it's a nice one. thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Fear files...i love this, scary, funny, this story has a lot in it, superb, thank jeez it was a nightmare, old witch having people for meal yum yum yum hahaha I never knew mice are carnivores...lol, its long throat that killed aman and yash, why do they av to drink the tea, I don't know why guys fail to believe in ghosts, horrors etc. Just like fear files the male won't believe there is danger until it occurs and affects them, maybe that's y the spirits like taking them first, not everyone gets the type of warning aarti got, but am sure as they embark on the journey someone will still ask them to take a shortcut , I really want the witch to have them for her meal, yummy 😆 a shortcut is always the hardest way...nice one, new style, continue writing this genre
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Posted: 7 years ago
#10
Love love love this os it has two of my favorite genre's comedy and horror 👏

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