AarYa OS: Soulmate

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Tessaloni

@Tessaloni

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Posted: 8 years ago

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VICKY126

@VICKY126

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

A very touching and lovely os.thanks for always trying to keep the forum active. 😃

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SillySoni

@SillySoni

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

Awesome os
So beautiful,thank you for your support you are so sweet.

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B-onesie

@B-onesie

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

COPY - PASTE - such handy tools😉

It's was so beautiful.

That scene after the attempted seduction was so emotional, it was one of the best scenes for me. His expression and actions were so heartfelt.

Once again she was only thinking about protecting and saving the family and all he could think of was her and how he could have betrayed her, after having had to fight a battle to acknowledge his love for her.

I actually never gave the aftermath of that a thought. The serial sort of rushed to its end after that, when more things could have been explored, such as this.

I can just picture him still feeling that he failed her again, and I agree that he failed her many times. After continuously proving herself, he still treated her so madly after the kidnapping, and that must have all gone through his mind.

He was already on a mission to get his son back, more for her happiness than his, trying to shield her from more pain in case it didn't work out, by keeping his plans a secret, yet once again she came to his rescue as always.

His guilt feelings are completely justified, yet is intensified 10 fold by the intensity in which he loves. Only she can and has always brought him to a place where he can forgive himself and let go, and embrace what he feels.

Only when she sets him free can he move on, the way she did when she left him at the party and he raced after her, the way she was on the verge of being thrown out of the family and he could finally confess his love to her.

Now no more words were needed as he gave into his what she was offering, his freedom to forgive himself and replacing the memories of a touch that repulsed him with her loving and healing touch.

How they have come.😃

Absolutely stunning OS.👏

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

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Tess, thanks so much for writing this OS and giving us a glimpse of what Yash and Aarti must have gone through after the despicable act of Ishita.

Once again CV's had left us with our own imagination,

To read the aftermath in your words is way better than what they could have shown to us. I won't comment on the rest of the OS but would rather comment on what I loved the most in this vision of yours.

One small scene stood out for me and that was the whole essence of this OS for me so I'll comment on that only.

Touch...

Well there were two types of touch in this OS.

1 - Touch that was Repulsive...

A touch can be so repulsive that it can push a person, (no matter how strong they are) over the edge.

That is what happened to Yash. One touch, filled with lust from Ishita and Yash was so repulsive that he had started to hate himself.

You are right, Yash had to fight with himself and his inner demons to accept Aarti as his wife. And when he did, he did it from his heart and soul.

To be touched by someone as vicious and venomous as Ishita made him question what Aarti must've felt when he kept pushing her, (physically and metaphorically).

He questioned himself if he was worthy of Aarti and her love which is as pure as her one touch.

Which brings me to the second type of Touch...

2 - A Touch that is Soothing and Healing...

There is this one scene that made me fall in love with this OS. It was the scene where Aarti goes and stands beside him silently. She doesn't speak or even look at him. Then she slowly extends her hand near him but still maintains her distance. It was Yash who slowly places his hand on her extended hand,

Cause he knows that this one Touch, this pure and selfless Touch is what will Heal him and it does.

It absolves him from all His Guilt and Pain and Heals him like nothing else ⭐️

This one Small touch gives the assurance that for Aarti he is also a Pure Soul with a Beautiful heart and nothing in the world would make her feel otherwise.

Tess, I have said many times that you have this ability in you to mesmerize readers and leave them speechless with just mere few words ⭐️

(Yes I still envy you for that) but then I always feel proud of you also ⭐️

I have told you many a times that there are few scenes or moments from your FF "Dark Angel". And few other SS or OS that I won't forget for very very very long time. Well this small scene has been added to that list 😳

Thanks so much for this OS 🤗

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

Very heart touching OS

Poor yash almost lost his honor coz of the bitch ishita

Coz of her yash felt horrible

Thank god aarti didn't doubt on yash she trusted him even time & again he hurt her & didn't trust her

Only aarti's trust & love brought yash back from his grief

Aarya romance was so passionate wild

Yash realized how much he failed aarti in past

He very well understand aarti is his soulmate without her he is nothing

I'm glad that bitch ishita was behind the bars

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ksen

@ksen

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

beautiful

brilliantly written

loved it

thanks for the pm

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paru

@enthusiastic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

superb..soo beautiful os dear
loved itt soo much...
whole story was beautifully written
thanks a lot for pm sweety
keep writting more..
and don't forget to pm me..

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sass8

@sass8

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

Tessa, this is so good, I could so visualize the scene .

I so love the quiet understanding of Aarti toward Yash and how she can read him so well.

I get Yash guilt because he only saw the good in Ishita and refuses to believe Aarti about the confuse sis in law. Although she did not tell him her suspicion for fear of him not believing her.

in his haste to please Aarti he found himself trapped by Ishita and almost jeopardizing their life. Thank fully they are at the place where they implicitly trust each other and the love they are feeling is once again helping them get pass this.

Yash is a man that abhor betraying the woman he is committed too and so its understandable that he felt he failed her , but Aarti being a woman of action did not let him wallow in false guilt cause his heart was in the right place.

Sweet way of resolving his pain. 😊