AarYa OS: Soulmate - Page 2

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

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Tess, thanks so much for writing this OS and giving us a glimpse of what Yash and Aarti must have gone through after the despicable act of Ishita.

Once again CV's had left us with our own imagination,

To read the aftermath in your words is way better than what they could have shown to us. I won't comment on the rest of the OS but would rather comment on what I loved the most in this vision of yours.

One small scene stood out for me and that was the whole essence of this OS for me so I'll comment on that only.

Touch...

Well there were two types of touch in this OS.

1 - Touch that was Repulsive...

A touch can be so repulsive that it can push a person, (no matter how strong they are) over the edge.

That is what happened to Yash. One touch, filled with lust from Ishita and Yash was so repulsive that he had started to hate himself.

You are right, Yash had to fight with himself and his inner demons to accept Aarti as his wife. And when he did, he did it from his heart and soul.

To be touched by someone as vicious and venomous as Ishita made him question what Aarti must've felt when he kept pushing her, (physically and metaphorically).

He questioned himself if he was worthy of Aarti and her love which is as pure as her one touch.

Which brings me to the second type of Touch...

2 - A Touch that is Soothing and Healing...

There is this one scene that made me fall in love with this OS. It was the scene where Aarti goes and stands beside him silently. She doesn't speak or even look at him. Then she slowly extends her hand near him but still maintains her distance. It was Yash who slowly places his hand on her extended hand,

Cause he knows that this one Touch, this pure and selfless Touch is what will Heal him and it does.

It absolves him from all His Guilt and Pain and Heals him like nothing else ⭐️

This one Small touch gives the assurance that for Aarti he is also a Pure Soul with a Beautiful heart and nothing in the world would make her feel otherwise.

Tess, I have said many times that you have this ability in you to mesmerize readers and leave them speechless with just mere few words ⭐️

(Yes I still envy you for that) but then I always feel proud of you also ⭐️

I have told you many a times that there are few scenes or moments from your FF "Dark Angel". And few other SS or OS that I won't forget for very very very long time. Well this small scene has been added to that list 😳

Thanks so much for this OS 🤗

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Tess, had I commented last week then there was so much more that I wanted to say but now I don't remember most of it

I'm not surprised though. When I can forget important scenes from my own stories, forgetting comments is nothing in front of that

Once again I'm sorry for not being able to comment on time.

But I remembered the most important scene to comment on and that is what I did. I absolutely loved that small scene

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

There is no need to apologize, life gets busy and you have priorities! I loved your comment and I appreciate it 😃

What I intended to show with that scene is that unlike Ishita who wanted to have him by force, Aarti had always given him a chance. She had only ever taken what he was willing to give, and that's why he ended up giving her his heart and soul trusting that she would always keep them safe...

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

That is so beautifully put 👏.

Tess, you should have put that in a note below the OS cause readers like me have a mind of their own

No seriously many a times readers interpret something entirely different then what we intend to show. You know very well that I myself have done it so many times in your stories