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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: sara1990
I still have a feeling that Yash loves her and he is pushing Aarti purposely so that she can achieve her dream and create her own identity. Lets hope for the best. Waiting for your next update.

Sara, all your doubts will be cleared in the next chapter 😳

Till then I can't say anything on your comment

Next chapter I'll post early next week 😳

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: saf24
Fantastic update as always Nikki. I loved that every step of the way Aarti has dilemmas and overcoming them made her a stronger person each time. Also liked the patience Prashant has with her each time she had an issue. DSo looking forward to what is in store next. Great job as always.

Thanks so much Saf 🤗

This dilemma (this chapter) was necessary to show as it brought so many changes in Aarti. She was lucky that she got Prashant as her teacher and Paridhi as a new friend (and sister) 😳

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: Sharlene1410
Thanks for the pm love the update 😊⭐️

Thanks so much Sharlene 🤗

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sass8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#104

It itsn't easy to break years of habits but she needed that trial to see how far she can stand on her own, but of course she needed a push in the right direction, the girl at the competition or Neelam, the family did not let her go back to her old self, submission. Including her husband who was cold with her, where she may have been tempted to go back to him and be distracted from her dance competition. That was the last push for her to focus on the competition. I must admit she show some courage when she called him to clear her confusion about the kiss.

Boy she had so many restrictions and inhibitions that no wonder she panicked, between the jump suits, revealing clothes, romantic dance with a man that is not her husband and so on.., she was really not living but only existing. That last one was oh my gosh Aarti get some backbone and fast cause she she was ready to quit . Well at least with Sharon , jaleousy rear its ugly head 😆 to the point of giving a stellar performance , I guess where words failed her , her dance expressed her feelings.

I like how Paridhi put thinks into perspective for her , she was to worried of shaming her families, familes who at the moment didn't show any concern for her (or so she thought) so why denied herself.

Ultimately it was her courage, commitment, wish and work that freed her. 😊 after each hurdle she passed. Now will she take the final and most important step and confront her husband. Wil see. 😊

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Posted: 8 years ago

#105

I think Aarti's mind its working backward instead of forward. Has she didn't understand Yash's motive. She's busy panicking and she's hurt by Yashs Words.

When Sharon said that Yash has seen me half naked also while i dressed for him in his showstopper designs. She was suppose to be calm has that's nothing compared to what Yash has already seen in her. And even ate. I bet he never tasted something so good.

Yash done everything purposely so Aarti could find her onw identity in this cruel world. He even found ways to make her confident and gave her the zeal to keep going. Like those fashion magazines. Even his words had a double mean. If you guys have noticed.

I wonder what is reckless baboon is up to now. I hope no boxing or jumping of the cliff. Okay i should stop my rumble now.

Awesome update nikki Di. I loved it. I hope you will update sinful night soon.

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bongalisoo

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Posted: 8 years ago

#106

Beautiful update I'm glad Aarti entered the competition cause without it she wouldn't have met Prashant and Parish to give her advice and life lessons to be her true self and her her identity without her family and Yash's family influence , but I also have a feeling that Yash really loves Aarti but maybe he thinks not being with her is the best for her to live her life so I guess his self destruction is what Vidhi was talking about, update soon

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: Divya333
Nice update...the way you showed the hurdles that Arthi faced n Arthi overcoming them is nice...the support Arthi got from her friends n mentors especilly Paaridhi's support to Arthi is nice...enjoyed reading

Thanks Divya for reading and commenting 😳

Aarti's Hurdles were very important to cover as this story is about Aarti getting self confidence and becoming a strong person 😳

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: ksen
well written part
aarti's fear and overcoming it, was penned down with great care
looking forward for the next part
thanks for the pm

Thanks Ksen 😃

I had to put so much thought in this chapter as every step was very crucial for Aarti's growth 😳

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: alekhika20
Amazing update,cont soon

Thanks dear for reading and commenting 😳

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: Lincy_Lins
After a long time i am commenting on ur story Nikki di, u shld be proud of me 😎 😆
Coming to update...

As usual wonderful update very well written 👏 👏 👍🏼

As I always said u in PM that this is my most favourite SS 😃
Very emotional update di, u shown everything very perfectly what Aarti is going through on her new journey...
Finally Aarti is in finale I so wish Aarti win this competition 😛

I am desperately waiting for chapter 5th, were Yashu's truth will be out n I hope Yashu is doing all this only for his Aarti 😳 I know he is acting, and He loves his Aarti too the core 🤗
Aarti n Vidhi's conversation confused me 😕
What is yash up to?? kahi yashu dusri shaadi toh nahi kerne jaa raha hai with that Sharon 🤔
Can't wait for so long please update next chapter soon di _/\_

After clearing all Misunderstanding between our AarYa, we want bharr bharr k romance on them ok di ☺️

Thanks for this beautiful update my dear lovely Nikki di 🤗

Lincy 🤗

I'm so happy to read a comment from you after a long time that also on your most favorite story 🤗

You see I wanted to dedicate this chapter to you but I completely forgot all about it while posting the chapter

Your most favorite and most awaited chapter is on its way. You'll get it in a day or two. The next two... okay the next three chapters will have tons and tons of AarYa scenes.

Now you know very well how Kanjoos I'm where AarYa's Romance in concerned 😳

But you'll get it for sure.

Thanks once again for commenting 🤗