PV Os: Deceit Complete

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PV Os: Deceit

Hi guys since April is my birth month i decided to make April a mouth of Oses which are dedicated to all Aprilians. All April babies.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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PV Os: Deceit

At Radha house.

Radha was lost in her thoughts thinking about what happened last week. When Akash walked in their small house.

Akash beta please don't do this, you will get hurt. I can't lose you.

Am already hurt. You have humiliated me so don't you dare try to stop me from taking part into this hast. You already lost me.

Akash left a torn apart Radha crying for her son.

I have an hour to sort all this and save my son. What should i do. Come on think Radha think think. I should start by proving that Suraj Pratap ji tempted with the result to save himself.

At the Scindhiya mansion in Sp & G3 room.

He was pacing up and dawn in his room thinking about Radha betrayal.

(st) Radha why did you betray me like that sleeping with my best friend Rekash. I thought you loved me.

Ji why are you pacing while you should be happy that the truth is proven that w** was a Deceitful woman.

Not now G3 just live me alone will you.

It seem like you are hurt because that burstard is not your offspring.

ENOUGH G3. Just let me be will you.

Gayatri left Suraj Pratap alone.

Radha was trying to collect all prove she can get to prove Suraj Pratap ji is Akash father until she got a call from the Bhopal hospital. She rust to the hospital after speaking with the doctors she went to the Scindhiya mansion.

At the Scindhiya mansion.

What the are you doing here yelled buaji. And everyone rush were the yelling came from.

You w** get out of my house.

G3!!! Enough. What do you want Radhu.

Akash is in hospital and in a bad condition.

So you want money huh.

G3!!!

He need blood.

Radha he is not my son how can i give him my blood.

That's impossible he is your son.

What make you so sure.

Because he is G3 son.

Buaji this woman is mad.

Shut up Maya.

Yash is my son.

No he is not his my son i switched the babies.

A DNA can prove all this said Yash out of nowhere.

Yash how can you entertain this mad woman.

Pranjan Yash is right.

But bauji.

No buts and ifs Pranjan.

To be continued.
Sorry for the spelling grammar mistakes guys i correct them hopefully by the grace of God. Please forgive me for an short chapter has am having a migraine since Friday.

God bless you all
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I have change the plot guys.
Edited by BusiMusi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Is it a short summary of the scene in PV ? Appears to be so. Please give us a different story. Thanks.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks Busi my Musi 😃 as a fellow April baby, I appreciate the thought!
Looking forward to your brand of humor and laughing through the month 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part B.

Radha was sitting in the dark lost in her thoughts. Thinking about what happened the pass week.

Flashbacks
Akash beta please don't do this. You will get hurt. I don't want to lose you. You have already lost me and am hurt emotionally by your deceit. I can't even look at you. You have humiliated me. Am taking part in this hast and you have no say in everything i do. he said has he left from there.
I have to save my son. Before its too late. I how will i prove that his indeed SP son. Come think think Radha. Yes i will start by proving that SP changed the DNA result.
End of flashbacks.
Radha was brought out of her thoughts when she received a call from the Bhopal hospital.

At SM in Surati room.
Suraj was pacing up and dawn in their room thinking about Radha betrayal. Ji why are you upset you should be celebrating because that woman child is not your. Gayatri shut up and live me alone. Aarti barge in Gayatri and Sp room. Bauji mamji Yash is in hospital in a critical condition Aarti cried. Ooh no not my baby. Come on let go.

At hospital.
Doctor how is he.

Well Mr Scindhiya has a heart failure. He many never see the sun rise tomorrow.

You can take mine and save him.

Ma

mss.

Doctor get me a pen and paper said Radha and doctor did what he was told. Radha wrote a letter to address to SP.

Dr please give this to SP and tell him read it along with the family. And this letter is for Yash when he regains his conscious. Am ready doctor to donate my heart to Yash.

She said his good byes to Akash. Akash beta after today you will be with your rightful family.

Huh.

But know i love you.

It's time ms.

Okay thank you Dr Zayn Malik.

It's my fault his heart ma let me give my heart. He got hurt saving me ma he cried.

She smiled through her tears. You won't be the match but i will be the match.

The doctors removed Yash heart that had 7 holes of bullet. And put Radha heart. The operation was a success. Yash was moved into a private ward.

Mr Sharma you can say your good byes. Akash said his good byes. The scindhiya family arrived at the hospital.

Dr how is my son asked Sp. He is out of danger now sir said Dr. Thank god. Mr Scindhiya this is for you. What is this. This is from Radha ma'am. Radha asked SP. Yes sir.

Akash walked out of the room crying when they wheel Radha to fridge/mortgage for the death people. SP saw a lifeless Radha. What happened to her asked SP. She gave her heart to Yash has his heart was failing. Maybe she wrote some answers there for your unanswered questions. Just use my cabin for privacy. Ooh Mr Yash Scindhiya her is a letter address to Yash. Aarti took the letter.

SP read the letter.
I will like to apology to you all. I know you are wondering why i gave Yash my heart. Well it's a way of repenting for my deed in the past. 1st getting together with a married man then switching the babies. Yes read that right Yash is my son and Akash is Gayatri. Akash beta am sorry for snatching you away from your right place. I was young and stupid but i don't regrets what i did because i got a wonderful son in you. I love the same way i love Yash. I gave Yash my heart and you my kidney.

Gayatri did you sleep with Rekash or not.

What!!!

Don't ask a question with a question Gayatri.

To be continue.

Sorry for a short update guys. I was out the whole so i couldn't write a longer one. Please forgive me for the spelling grammar mistakes guys i will correct them soon hopefully by the grace of God.

God bless you all
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busimusi.
Edited by BusiMusi - 8 years ago
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Final part.

How can you asked me something i like that Ji.

Gayatri the result said is not my son but his Rekash son.

I.. I.. I..

Not I.. I.. I.. Yes or no Gayatri did you sleep with Rekash.

Yes. But lets see what Radha said its true or not maybe she slept with him too.

Okay. Dr you can start the preparation of the DNA. Can we get the result today itself.

I don't think that's possible.

Please we just need answers.

Okay i will see what i can do.

After a couple of hours Dr Zayn Malik came with results. Okay here are the Dna results.

Yash's Result.
Yash is Suraj Pratap Scindhiya son and his mother is Radha shakti Sharma.

Akash's Results.
Akash is Rekash Pratap khan and his mother is Gayatri SP Scindhiya.

Thank you Dr said SP. Everyone were super shock.

Ooh my goodness this family is full of deceit. First Aarti lied about her divorce, then Paridhi about what happened between her and her producer Karen. Radha switch the babies. Bhaiya cheated on bhabhi. Now we discover bhabhi also cheated on bhaiya. I thought i was the black sheep of the family.
Maya plz enough wit ur dialogues

Rekash told me abt ur affair wit Radha @ 1st i didn't believe him but he took me to ur date with Radha and i saw it wit my own two eyes. I begged him to take me 2 the pub and I drank my sorrow away. Then one thing lead to another. I found out i was pregnant. We did a DNA test the result said he was urs Ji so Rekash Left India 4 good.

Wow wht a mess up family u have said Akash.

U're also the part of the family n u're coming wit us home u re a said part us now Suraj Pratap.

I don't knw wht 2 say.

Re u worried abt Yash asked Vidhi.

Yes am wrried abt my Indian magic Mike.

Indian magic Mike.

Yes he did magic Mikes role play last nyt.

Wow bhaiya is romantic unlik u Pratriek. Can we switch places Aarti.

No way Yash is mine.

They all laugh except Akash. Akash bhaiya dn't blame and worry your self unnecessary.

Unnecessary. Its my fault your husband is fighting for his life and that Ma is gone. What have i done for her. Nothing. I only caused her pain. I snatched Yash's mother away from him.

No everything happens for a reason bhaiya. Just fulfil her last wish of you settling down.

Yes Aarti is rich beta said Gayatri crying.

Yes i will fulfil it. Yash is like Radha ma he risked his life to save me and ma gave up her life to save his life. Am not even her her flesh and blood but she gave me her kidney in a flash. Mother you raised a wonderful young man.

Mr Akash come with me.

Why.

Ms Radha told us to give you her remaining kidney has your other one is damaged.

Thank you. Akash go.

No i can't.

Yes you can. This proves how much she loves you.

Okay. Thank you. Akash left with the other doctor.

Yash had regained his consciousness. One person can see him at the time. Everyone saw him and his bhaiya and sister teased him about being Indian magic mike.

AarYa
Aarti can't believe you told them about me playing the magic mike. Don't you know the saying what happens in our bedroom stays in our bedroom.

Sorry baba i only knows the saying that say what happens in Vegas stays in Vegas.

I thought i will never see you again jaan.

Me too i love you.

I love you too. But those goons short me in the heart 7 times.

Yes your heart was failing to function and Radha ma gave you her heart.

Radha who.

Remember the woman claiming bauji fathered her child.

Yes.

She's Radha.

Why would she give me her heart.

Well buaji father her child.

But the DNA said his not his father.

Yes bauji is not Akash but yours.

You are confusing me now jaan.

I mean Radha ma is your mother and Gayatri ma is Akash mother. Aarti explained everything to Yash. She left this letter for you said Aarti and Yash asked her to read it.

Radha letter.
I know what i have done was wrong switching the babies. I just wanted you to have a good life and remove Akash from his rightful place. I don't regret what i have done because i know you were loved and. I got a loving son in Akash. Thanking you for saving my son Akash. Don't feel guilty that i gave you my heart beta i was going to die in week or so anyway. I had cancer for 15 years of my life. Even if i didn't have cancer i would have given you my heart in a flash. Tell your father to stop being a controlling short tempered freak if he doesn't want me to come back from the death and beat the living day light out of him with my cricket bat.

Aarti hugged a crying Yash. AarYa cried has they felt each others pain.

The End.

Sorry for the spelling grammar guys i will correct them soon hopefully by the grace of God.

God bless yall
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love busimusi.
Edited by BusiMusi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Since Premap wanted samething different i change the plot i hope you will all like it especially you premap dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Well that was a mess and a tell of sacrifice .
A mother betrayal and another sacrifice to save a son. The family is bonker but they are family. 😉. Nice one Busi
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome os
So Aakash is g3 and rakesh son n yash radha and sp son great every one know the truth and radha die after giving her heart to yash now all is well.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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sorry , I AM LATE WITH MY READING. Thanks for giving an entirely different concept altogether ! This is excellent as there is nothing of the same PV story [ a repeat version , I mean ] ! The repeat versions with minor changes becomes boring after a time but new trend of the PV is something to look forward to when we are reading . I hope others will enjoy it too !!! Thanks again.

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