AarYa SS - Life Colors Again - Epilogue (Page 8) - Page 8

Originally posted by: B-onesie

Btw, I also unreserved on Page 7. FINALLY!

😃 great

Originally posted by: sass8

Yep , saw it and replied 😃.

replied?

Originally posted by: B-onesie

Mmm, Bua has a heart and finally it is taken.

She could finally be herself. Because of her past she had built a wall around herself and now finally she could see and acknowledge Aarti for who she really is. Finally happiness.

I found Yash's response quite funny. He couldn't fathom that Aarti would miss Bua. But that is jut the person Aarti was. She just wanted everyone to be happy all the time. Trying to figure out women? Never going to happen Mr. Scindiya. 😆

Love the bonding moment with the family moment of after the wedding Even the softer side of Bauji.

And the love scene.😳 Oooh. What to say😳

Quresh, has a way with her. He makes her feel at ease with herself. He managed to let her put her aside her inhibitions and insecurities and made her feel really loved for the first time in her life.

But I must admit, I felt it a bit difficult to visualise😆. I almost wanted to keep my hands over my eyes, but I also wanted to read. Crazy I know🤪 Way more than I could have anticipated. But if not why not. Age ain't nothing but a number they say. So why can;t they enjoy themselves in the prime of their lives. Now that Bua's has tasted some o the good stuff, I doubt uncle will get much rest😆

Absolutely phenomenal SS. Sassy. Indeed Saucy and hot👏⭐️

😆 😆 "Now that Bua's has tasted some o the good stuff, I doubt uncle will get much rest", 🤣. I figure some would have trouble seeing it. I get that cause society tend to make us think that after a certain age, sex is over. On the other hand Bua is the type of character where you have to dig deep because she was portrayed as one dimensional for so long that you forget that she is a woman with wishes and needs. At the same time I couldn't just leave it to reader imagination only. Thanks Bee, like the honest feedback.

Originally posted by: sass8

Yep , saw it and replied 😃.

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

still awaiting the reply! 😡

Page 9.. isn't it?

I was referring to my comment about the epilogue which I made yesterday!

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

All in all a well rounded tale filled with light moments which balanced the dramatic scenes. I prefer your version of the Scindhias so much more than the show!

I will start with the bonus epilogue seeing as the story was about Maya. Maya has always been so guarded choosing to express her frustrations through bitterness. Here you brought in Quresh who managed to break down her reservations systematically and patiently. From the first he saw the loneliness and longing buried within the hard, meddlesome facade. She had accepted her bitter fate and didn't dare allow any thought that it might change, in fact she tried to jeopardise it, rather she ruins it herself than let others do it as had been the case till then. Quresh didn't let her and it culminated in her allowing her fears to come through. He knew she was nervous and in voicing his state, she was able to voice hers. He anticipated her response and must have deduced how her first marriage panned out. In allowing her to show her vulnerability, he really showed her that things would be different; he showed her respect and he let her know that he desired her as much as she did, that he too feared disappointing her. It was not so much the act but what it meant for them that made it beautiful... I won't go further than that, just kudos to you for managing to write that!

Maya went out of the way to make Aarti's life miserable. Yet it was Aarti who saw her hidden pain and it was Aarti who worked to change it. Maya realizes that Aarti is a jewel and she is truly thankful. That hug said it all but of course she had to maintain the stern Bua facade which made the moment even more emotional! Who understand's women right? Poor Yash 😆


Coming to the Scindhias! I loved the banter among the 3 couples. Each has their dynamics and you showed that so beautifully. Wow! Paridhi was tricked! That was hilarious and her reaction was so like her. Bau ji trying to be stern was his way of approval and gratitude. He now knows his family will always stay together and support each other, that they won't ever hurt their honor. Gayatri realizes it too and is happy and satisfied. I imagined his state when Aarti gave him a kiss, too cute. And AarYa's ensuing banter can only lead to more tax 😆

now life colors for all the Scindhias and no one is left to suffer in the grey, especially Bua who needed a colorful life again!

Beautifully done Sassie! ❤️

reposting!

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

All in all a well rounded tale filled with light moments which balanced the dramatic scenes. I prefer your version of the Scindhias so much more than the show!

I will start with the bonus epilogue seeing as the story was about Maya. Maya has always been so guarded choosing to express her frustrations through bitterness. Here you brought in Quresh who managed to break down her reservations systematically and patiently. From the first he saw the loneliness and longing buried within the hard, meddlesome facade. She had accepted her bitter fate and didn't dare allow any thought that it might change, in fact she tried to jeopardise it, rather she ruins it herself than let others do it as had been the case till then. Quresh didn't let her and it culminated in her allowing her fears to come through. He knew she was nervous and in voicing his state, she was able to voice hers. He anticipated her response and must have deduced how her first marriage panned out. In allowing her to show her vulnerability, he really showed her that things would be different; he showed her respect and he let her know that he desired her as much as she did, that he too feared disappointing her. It was not so much the act but what it meant for them that made it beautiful... I won't go further than that, just kudos to you for managing to write that!

Maya went out of the way to make Aarti's life miserable. Yet it was Aarti who saw her hidden pain and it was Aarti who worked to change it. Maya realizes that Aarti is a jewel and she is truly thankful. That hug said it all but of course she had to maintain the stern Bua facade which made the moment even more emotional! Who understand's women right? Poor Yash 😆


Coming to the Scindhias! I loved the banter among the 3 couples. Each has their dynamics and you showed that so beautifully. Wow! Paridhi was tricked! That was hilarious and her reaction was so like her. Bau ji trying to be stern was his way of approval and gratitude. He now knows his family will always stay together and support each other, that they won't ever hurt their honor. Gayatri realizes it too and is happy and satisfied. I imagined his state when Aarti gave him a kiss, too cute. And AarYa's ensuing banter can only lead to more tax 😆

now life colors for all the Scindhias and no one is left to suffer in the grey, especially Bua who needed a colorful life again!

Beautifully done Sassie! ❤️

Found it, sorry 😳 was confused cause I though you had already feedback. 🤪me.
Your view on Quresh; spot on. The only think that could have break Maya guard was if someone take her by surprise and that was the intend with Quresh. Some people look beyond the facade indeed and he allows her to make mistakes, which in turn kind of reassures her. You are right about Maya trying to sabotage it first, she went straigth to confort zone.
I like the family dynamic and find it easy to write for the various character so glad many enjoyed the banter. And as for SP , well I was ruffling his feather , so do speak. And oh ya, tax is the norm for Aarya. Thanks a million for the feedabck Tessa 🤗

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

I was referring to my comment about the epilogue which I made yesterday!

Done😊

Sassy I finally read The Whole OS 🥳