AarYa SS - Life Colors Again - Epilogue (Page 8)

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sass8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: BusiMusi
Res until Farther notice.

😊 ok

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sass8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: Sharlene1410
Sassy i have to read this again and comment 😆 😳bua's wedding night WOW!!! ☺️ just curious they are in their late forties early fifties wow romance love have no age limit i love this ending ⭐️ sad though this came to an end 😔 finally bua is happy and has a good loving husband 😃

Please do, 😉 re-read. Thats the think with writing a love scene for middle age people, do yo make it hot or sweet or else. One think is sure there should be no limit to romance, that you are right. I didn't want to be too clinical about it and prefer to let the character handle the emotion. Just imagination in the end. Thanks for the feedback.

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sass8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: bongalisoo
Sad this has to end but it was a lovely ending first showing how the SM is doing after maya leaves ,the lovely family banter ,bauji blushing that's new then finally how Quresh calmed Maya and they had a lovely weding night and Maya is finally happy...great ss

Thank you Bongalisoo. glad you like the story , Maya leaving was huge cause sh'e been there so long but it was all for a good cause. And yes I like to ruffle Bauji a little 😛 especially cause he is so strict most of the time.

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sass8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: sass8

Please do, 😉 re-read, I take it as a compliment. Thats the think with writing a love scene for middle age people, do yo make it hot or sweet or else. One think is sure there should be no limit to romance, that you are right. I didn't want to be too clinical about it and prefer to let the character handle the emotion. Just imagination in the end. Thanks for the feedback.

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Bumping the thread as I want to read this next week

Btw, Sassy, you asked in Friday's CCC when I'll give you DV's update? Well I have sent you DV update check your PM. 😳

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sass8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki
Bumping the thread as I want to read this next week
Btw, Sassy, you asked in Friday's CCC when I'll give you DV's update? Well I have sent you DV update check your PM. 😳

Yep, got it and read it. Thanks

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lovely_nikki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#67

Had to bump it again as it had moved back so many pages.

Sassy, will try to read it soon. I'm slowly trying to catch up with so many stories. I bumped it before it moves back several pages.

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B-onesie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: B-onesie
No - i am upset as i didn't even get to read the other one yet with my net being so horrible. But i have read the end of this part quickly😆😆😆

Mmm, Bua has a heart and finally it is taken.

She could finally be herself. Because of her past she had built a wall around herself and now finally she could see and acknowledge Aarti for who she really is. Finally happiness.

I found Yash's response quite funny. He couldn't fathom that Aarti would miss Bua. But that is jut the person Aarti was. She just wanted everyone to be happy all the time. Trying to figure out women? Never going to happen Mr. Scindiya. 😆

Love the bonding moment with the family moment of after the wedding Even the softer side of Bauji.

And the love scene.😳 Oooh. What to say😳

Quresh, has a way with her. He makes her feel at ease with herself. He managed to let her put her aside her inhibitions and insecurities and made her feel really loved for the first time in her life.

But I must admit, I felt it a bit difficult to visualise😆. I almost wanted to keep my hands over my eyes, but I also wanted to read. Crazy I know🤪 Way more than I could have anticipated. But if not why not. Age ain't nothing but a number they say. So why can;t they enjoy themselves in the prime of their lives. Now that Bua's has tasted some o the good stuff, I doubt uncle will get much rest😆

Absolutely phenomenal SS. Sassy. Indeed Saucy and hot👏⭐️