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Sharlene1410

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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

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Loved it B ⭐️ will comment more later

I loved yash reaching out to his family finally understanding their importance in his life⭐️ He took the all important first step to bring them closer. Yash finally understood his relationship with his Gayatri ma and hers with his brother and father. With this understanding he was able to accept and move on not only with Aarti and his princess Payal but with the entire family. So much time had been wasted by him not being able to understand his own ubhealthy relationship with Gayatri ma . I loved how he was not afraid to cry his heart out to apoligise for his behaviour how he welcomed Radha ma and included his chote Prateek. It is indeed a new beginning for the Scindhia family.⭐️

Loved this update B ⭐️

Edited by Sharlene1410 - 9 years ago

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Adama Ahmed

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Posted: 9 years ago

#142

Superb update, Honey Bee! Finally, Yash apologised to everyone,especially Rhada. When he called her MA, I had to read it over again to confirm it was him and not Aarti who said it. Heart touching apologies. Nice one ❤️ 😊

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premap

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Posted: 9 years ago

#143

Hmmm!It is really good to see Yash 'humble' and loving [ as a brother ,son. husband and afather ! ] Great update. Thanks

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Alamelu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#144

beautiful...they are family so for sure they forgave yash and for them he was helpless due to his mother and her suffocating yash with her selfish love keeping him away from others and keeping others away form her and yash...

wow what a treat yash is going to get in return for all this from arti

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Tessaloni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#145

hene meisie ek het jou nie gese nie but I was crying buckets when I read this! 😭 thank you for such cathartic release Honey-Bee! it was intense but so beautifully emoted! you just have a way with words 👏

coming to the update: Yash had been blind to so many things in the past which made him act irrationally at times and hurt the ones who loved him. It takes a good man to see the error of his ways but a greater man to atone. He had trashed this relations but with this one act he cleaned of the filth, polished it and made it shine like the brightest diamond!

he biggest hang up was Radha having replaced his mother... without even apologizing, with that one act of asking her to cook with him, he showed his complete acceptance. he showed her that he trusted her enough to share that intimate moment with just her. that was my most fav part as I told you.

then the dinner table scene just brought it all full circle. all blame was put aside, sorry was said from the heart, gifts were given symbolic giving his heart fully. now the Scindhias are complete! ❤️

then comes the final moment. as much as I love the rest, AarYa are always the cherry on the top. they have a fresh start in every way that matters. they have new symbols to mark this beginning. now they can cherish each other fully, forever!

loved it Honey-Bee! 🤗 although it was not 50 pages 😡

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B-onesie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: Tessaloni
hene meisie ek het jou nie gese nie but I was crying buckets when I read this! 😭 thank you for such cathartic release Honey-Bee! it was intense but so beautifully emoted! you just have a way with words 👏
coming to the update: Yash had been blind to so many things in the past which made him act irrationally at times and hurt the ones who loved him. It takes a good man to see the error of his ways but a greater man to atone. He had trashed this relations but with this one act he cleaned of the filth, polished it and made it shine like the brightest diamond!

he biggest hang up was Radha having replaced his mother... without even apologizing, with that one act of asking her to cook with him, he showed his complete acceptance. he showed her that he trusted her enough to share that intimate moment with just her. that was my most fav part as I told you.

then the dinner table scene just brought it all full circle. all blame was put aside, sorry was said from the heart, gifts were given symbolic giving his heart fully. now the Scindhias are complete! ❤️

then comes the final moment. as much as I love the rest, AarYa are always the cherry on the top. they have a fresh start in every way that matters. they have new symbols to mark this beginning. now they can cherish each other fully, forever!

loved it Honey-Bee! 🤗 although it was not 50 pages 😡

I cried when i wrote it and and when I edited it😆 Insane I know. But I am a tjankie balie.😆.

I must say the cooking scene was my favourite too. It came to me suddenly, whilst driving that Yash has mentioned in earlier episode that his mom taught him to cook and I thought it would be a nice touch. And it I am so glad it worked.

50 pages??? I leave that to you and Nix. I don't write novels. i write short little fluff pieces.

Glad you enjoyed it though, short though it was 😲

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Tessaloni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: B-onesie
I cried when i wrote it and and when I edited it😆 Insane I know. But I am a tjankie balie.😆.
I must say the cooking scene was my favourite too. It came to me suddenly, whilst driving that Yash has mentioned in earlier episode that his mom taught him to cook and I thought it would be a nice touch. And it I am so glad it worked.

50 pages??? I leave that to you and Nix. I don't write novels. i write short little fluff pieces.
Glad you enjoyed it though, short though it was😲

I see why my update was deemed short! Revenge for my comment about yours being short...

Your stories my be short but they are not fluff!

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zuby

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Posted: 9 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: Tessaloni

I see why my update was deemed short! Revenge for my comment about yours being short...

Your stories my be short but they are not fluff![/QUO) ek hou van jou kommentaar Tessie poo...dit is wonderlik