AarYa OS 'Sinful Night'. Chapter - 4, Page - 14 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Fandu

Nikki superb OS so far. I loved loved loved both chapters. I am still in awe after reading them and I don't know what to say other than update soon as I can't wait to read the next chapter. Amazing update. Thank you.


Thanks Mandy

After reading all the comments and with the number of likes that I've got for this OS, now even I'm falling more in love with this OS 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Sharlene1410

hi Nikky that was awesome everything is crystal clear no more secrets between AarYa

Yash really needed to hear the truth about Aarti's past from her.Honestly I am of the opinion that Yash needs a therapist 😆 he feel all emotions so strongly if you don't know his nature a person will misunderstand him, leave him or manipulated him😆 he really needed time to come to term with his true feelings. aarti loves him but she is a honorable lady who keeps her promise even if I think they are misplaced😆 she respect her elders and full fill their wishes even if they are selfish as in the case of the Scindhias I don't like the controlling way of Yash's parent never did in the show😡
Yash is an understanding man her realized in time how much they love each other and the circumstance that caused the lie of her divorce 😃 he understood the Dubeys and his family they had the same goal a happy future for their children Scindia wanted a happy Yash and the Dubeys a happy Aarti they did what they did for the love of their adult kids.but were selfish the truth should of been told up front and if it was their destiny to be together they would of worked it out then again Yash allows his parents to control his life my opinion😆😆 and make the important decisions regarding his and his daughters lives.I am happy he now has taken back control of his life and present/ future👏 I love how romantic he is and trying to recreate the magic of that night, how he has accept their sinful night ⭐️👏 how he intends to make the reminder of their life happy with love, passion, trust, support and understanding between them the key is communication and now he is able to do so freely with Aarti and his Parents⭐️

i love this update thanks Nikky for using the scene which the cv forgot between G3 and Aarti which they could of developed like you did instead of i really don't know why he became hulk yash then he became normal after the boxing match and they never discussed that again what caused his angry behavior yes it was the sin that he betrayed his dearest Aripta he cheated her in his mind he committed adultery against his wife aripta but they never give a closer how if affected Aarti and family every one moved along with bua being her nasty self never showed the love developing between just some hastily scene with him trying to understand his feelings with third party involvement.


Oh my! Such a huge response. It makes me so happy 🤗

You are right when you say that those who knows him will only understand why he does what he does. We all know that he's good at heart but then on the otter side he leaves us all confused and makes us want to pull our hair.
But alls well that ends well. This time he listened to his heart and trusted to what Aarti confessed.

We also know, once he falls in love then he is the most understanding, caring, protective, romantic and excessively passionate husband. Now Aarti doesn't stand a chance against this man. 😉


The last part of your comment.. Well all I'll say is that the less we talk about it is better for our own sanity
I prayed so hard that they'll show something as meaningful as we show about the reasons for Yash's hulk mode, but alas...


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Posted: 9 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: Busi

Wow Nikki didi the updt was awesome. I expected that Yash will be more hulklish aftr finding out abt Aarti's past and she will live the beach house in the bad weather to get away from Yash. Yash will go out and look for her and aftr finding her they will kiss and make up. But i like your version better. Tnx 4 the pm.


Oh sweet Busi
I purposely didn't go with the versions that you had expected, as then it would have become clich. I try to avoid using the cliched scenes and try to give something different.

Plus I've used that sort of scenes in my contest winning OS "Khamoshiyan". 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: taahir004

Update was Fabulous

Yash is an understanding man but circumstances does not allow him to understand the
situation the lie , the divorce
while Aarti respecting the elders and doing everything that they want
I'm glad that Aarti's past is revealed to Yash so that now he will be able to understand her
better


Thanks Taahir

Yes Yash is a very understanding man. But as usual circumstances forced him to react the way he did.

Originally posted by: ksen

Amazing update
Beautifully written
Loved it
Thanks for the pm



Thanks Ksen so much 😳


Originally posted by: gafulu14

wow wonderful update...wait 4 next 1


Thanks Alka 😳


Originally posted by: annirogc

amazing update.. aarya cleared their misunderstanding now.. thanks for pm.. loved the update



Thanks Anni. 😳



Edited by lovely_nikki - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: saf24

Awesome update Nikki. Loved that Aarti surprised him and came to Mumbaiand confessed everything that she needed to get out. I also liked the battle Yash fought with himself as he tried to determine how much truth was in her words and if he should confess what he really felt. Beautifully written. Loved it.



Thanks Saf

He was struggling with his inner self. One side he wants to believe her, on the other side the conversation that he heard is making him doubt her.
Finally he listened to his heart and trusted her.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: cuteariya

really heart touching chapter
at first I was angry on yash for not trusting aarti 😡
poor aarti was so broken when yash left her in hall 🥺
aarti's every words with shobha ma made me cry I couldn't stop my tears 😭
thank god yash heard every words that aarti said to shobha ma 🤗
that's made him realize how much aarti suffered
even scared his when he heard that aarti will leave him for forever 👏
aarti was so surprised that yash stop her 😲
even talk to aman & his parents
I just love the way yash remind his mom what she did to aarti & ansh 🤗
now yash parents also realize their mistake & told aarto to not leave them 😃
aarya confession part was really emotional 😭
finally they shared what they had in their heart ❤️
wow yash dad will make sure that jerk prashant will never come in future to claim ansh 🤗
continue plz



I know how some of you are angry with Yash for not trusting her and hurting her. That's why now I'm giving you extra chapters, where I'll try to present his side (as per my POV) 😳

And you'll get a most romantic Yash that you'll love him.

I'll bring Prashant also in the end to give proper closure to Aarti's past.

Thanks so much Manita 🤗



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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Rosey, Tessa, Jhil and Mario..and Sharlene also (though I've relied to her comment)

I don't have words to reply back on your comments. Whatever I'll say will fall flat in front of your reviews. You girls have left me speechless and have touched my heart.

All I can say is

Thank you all and love you all so much 🤗 ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Folla

thanks for the PM super one loved


Thank you so much 😳

Originally posted by: lassekool

Awesome Nikki, something we would have loved to see in pv. It was breathtaking, everything is finally out and now they are rightfully starting again. Waiting for next update.


Originally posted by: Sunrio80

I love your story!

It is beautifully written it was as if I am watching the serial but more romantic and logical.
Waiting for the next update



Thanks so much

I guess we have more brain than CV's in some of the tracks. Some tracks were mind blowing while some were simply disgusting

So I'm happy that you all liked my version 😳
Edited by lovely_nikki - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69

Thanks Leevi 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: Zetter

Oh my...that was one enthralling update, Nikki ❤️ ❤️


Aarti and Yash are too cute, love them too pieces 😊

Thank you for all you do! 🤗



Thanks so much Zet 🤗 ❤️

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